03-21-2019, 06:26 PM | #1 | |
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Grudge Match: Flow vs bleak - FLOW WINS
Grudge Match: Flow vs bleak
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Flow aka Flo Real/Jay Welsh, Flow's been in the spotlight a lot lately after some quality work in the Hot or Thot tourney and 1-2 league. He's been able to work humor into his drops with decent success and has shown he can write URL style bars just as well. He claimed to have 26 but the limit was agreed upon too far in advance to change (already had bleak's verse) but he's clearly motivated to take his fellow mod down a peg after a long disputed DQ. Strengths Humor Wording Nameflips bleak This dude knows battles better than he lets on. As a mod, bleak seemed to figure out what goes over well, but what's so done and it's started to translate to some more creative bars from him. I know how motivation get be a huge weight, especially after writing text mags for 2 months (seriously... mods need a union) but after taking shit from diva battlers for 8 weeks (love you all) the dude may just wild out. Strengths Creativity Intelligence Flow
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03-21-2019, 07:51 PM | #2 |
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Hit a gym fatty, if we are made in god's image you must be Budda's creation shit you ain't 'felt a body burn' since your Nanna's cremation Mate we ain't the same son, you the fakest to boast If your mistaken for Real it's in a chyeahhh clone conspiracy post n play the Cynic all you want but you'll never be him B Shit you didn't have a single diss qualify in the sol without me See he's been a mess since his Grammy's been dead Needed E.C.T to forget, no wonder the 'power went to his head' Fuck you disgust me, just looking at you causes me stress Course you'd vote snatcher, you'll always have a body complex want to "B sharp" so I'll make a Nine sing it's heart out Lungs blasting through the dome like Sydney's opera house Captain of the SOL shit but you were out of your depths How you going to "run leagues" when the ship was sinking soon as your fat ass stepped onto deck Bet B looking peaky now, prolly lost all of his colour No need for a Tommy when a Shelby in his face like they brothers bleak You barking bitch, I'M the reason text was saved dawg. little man/little bite, the hand that feeds you bout to slap ur fucking face off Who you really beat tho? Shut ur retard ass up and lick stamps U needed a time out for the lesson, now ur CLEARLY Upset Champ Nazi huh? Why would I care bout outcomes of battles that bore me? Stupid Brit, if I moved it'd be Blitzkrieg & bombs over London like it's 1940 & you moving on me? Issa joke faggot so stop it dude I'll have Flow slowed to a dead stop... head rock... chopped&screwed PLEASE get tough. you'll get sawed off when I squeeze the buck toast this burnout w/ smoke from 2 barrels like diesel trucks I got that new shit, futuristic ray guns w/ no mags or clips. if hes in the chamber's range, one button will see him vaporized like dab hits You need to stop with gun bars. In that you'll hold an L it's a no go Better off no showing. Lean on the Stick &get ur hat tilted like the Celtics logo i'll meet you on a Level Ground and Drop this bum. My point is JUST that tho Like ur career, verses, and persona: build heat then Fall Flat off the Plateau. Last edited by Sharp; 03-21-2019 at 09:04 PM. Reason: Reword at Flow's request |
03-23-2019, 09:31 AM | #3 | |
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This was pretty even, both verses had ups and downs but Flow had a few more issues to me. bleak's Celtics logo was LOTB... Tbh it's kind of funny after Flow once complained about US sports flips. Good shit though guys V/bleak |
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03-24-2019, 03:37 AM | #4 |
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Hit a gym fatty, if we are made in god's image you must be Budda's creation
shit you ain't 'felt a body burn' since your Nanna's cremation nice Mate we ain't the same son, you the fakest to boast If your mistaken for Real it's in a chyeahhh clone conspiracy post alright n play the Cynic all you want but you'll never be him B Shit you didn't have a single diss qualify in the sol without me nah this was pants See he's been a mess since his Grammy's been dead Needed E.C.T to forget, no wonder the 'power went to his head' had to look this up, cool Fuck you disgust me, just looking at you causes me stress Course you'd vote snatcher, you'll always have a body complex ehh not feelin want to "B sharp" so I'll make a Nine sing it's heart out Lungs blasting through the dome like Sydney's opera house decent Captain of the SOL shit but you were out of your depths How you going to "run leagues" when the ship was sinking soon as your fat ass stepped onto deck ok Bet B looking peaky now, prolly lost all of his colour No need for a Tommy when a Shelby in his face like they brothers solid closer 3 nice 2 ok 1 Decent 2 misses Vs You barking bitch, I'M the reason text was saved dawg. little man/little bite, the hand that feeds you bout to slap ur fucking face off nah this was just as basic as can be Who you really beat tho? Shut ur retard ass up and lick stamps U needed a time out for the lesson, now ur CLEARLY Upset Champ decent Nazi huh? Why would I care bout outcomes of battles that bore me? Stupid Brit, if I moved it'd be Blitzkrieg & bombs over London like it's 1940 this is a no & you moving on me? Issa joke faggot so stop it dude I'll have Flow slowed to a dead stop... head rock... chopped&screwed what the hell is head rock? This woulda been nice w/o that. Now it’s just alright cause you tried doing too much PLEASE get tough. you'll get sawed off when I squeeze the buck toast this burnout w/ smoke from 2 barrels like diesel trucks decent I got that new shit, futuristic ray guns w/ no mags or clips. if hes in the chamber's range, one button will see him vaporized like dab hits ill take your word for it that that’s how dabs are smoked. Pretty cool here You need to stop with gun bars. In that you'll hold an L it's a no go Better off no showing. Lean on the Stick &get ur hat tilted like the Celtics logo oh this is fire here i'll meet you on a Level Ground and Drop this bum. My point is JUST that tho Like ur career, verses, and persona: build heat then Fall Flat off the Plateau. nah bad closer 2 nice 1 ok 2 Decent 3 misses Pretty cool battle here, very close in quotes and a nice read. Bleak had LOTB with the Celtics shit, but also had a few pretty bad misses. It’s definitely completely obvious now that bleak doesn’t have a style, you legit see like 3-4 different styles of text in one verse of his lol it’s cool but weird. Doesn’t make a difference really but you don’t see that too often. Bleak is good with wording punches but a lot of times they just don’t make sense. Flow sometimes has trouble with wording which cause his bars to fall flat, also some references come off obscure or foreign, I have to google a good amount of his stuff. Moral of all that is that it doesn’t matter what style you use or what concept you use, as long as it’s good then you should receive credit for it. Preference always plays a part but it shouldn’t determine battles. I have flow taking this one slightly due to having some good personals and lighter misses. Definitely a close call and can go either way. Vote Flow |
03-24-2019, 02:42 PM | #5 |
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Hit a gym fatty, if we are made in god's image you must be Budda's creation shit you ain't 'felt a body burn' since your Nanna's cremation Nice open up Mate we ain't the same son, you the fakest to boast If your mistaken for Real it's in a chyeahhh clone conspiracy post This was cool, the sting lacked behind the execution n play the Cynic all you want but you'll never be him B Shit you didn't have a single diss qualify in the sol without me This is ehh, think you could have been more detailed with the personal.. decent tho See he's been a mess since his Grammy's been dead Needed E.C.T to forget, no wonder the 'power went to his head' Lol nice jab here imo Fuck you disgust me, just looking at you causes me stress Course you'd vote snatcher, you'll always have a body complex Fiya and wording was crispy want to "B sharp" so I'll make a Nine sing it's heart out Lungs blasting through the dome like Sydney's opera house Ok Flow heating up, this is good Captain of the SOL shit but you were out of your depths How you going to "run leagues" when the ship was sinking soon as your fat ass stepped onto deck Idk, this is ok, but also wording sounds off with rhyming. Could just be me tho Bet B looking peaky now, prolly lost all of his colour No need for a Tommy when a Shelby in his face like they brothers Haha nice way to end ya round, good shit --------- bleak You barking bitch, I'M the reason text was saved dawg. little man/little bite, the hand that feeds you bout to slap ur fucking face off This is ok for a opener here Who you really beat tho? Shut ur retard ass up and lick stamps U needed a time out for the lesson, now ur CLEARLY Upset Champ Lol, cool flip here off his "upset champion" detail Nazi huh? Why would I care bout outcomes of battles that bore me? Stupid Brit, if I moved it'd be Blitzkrieg & bombs over London like it's 1940 Wording could have been better, not a terrible bar tho... it's decent at best & you moving on me? Issa joke faggot so stop it dude I'll have Flow slowed to a dead stop... head rock... chopped&screwed Nah, the way it's executed threw the whole 2nd bar off for me PLEASE get tough. you'll get sawed off when I squeeze the buck toast this burnout w/ smoke from 2 barrels like diesel trucks This is coo I got that new shit, futuristic ray guns w/ no mags or clips. if hes in the chamber's range, one button will see him vaporized like dab hits Dead @futuristic ray guns w/no mags or clips!! Lol idk I guess this is ok, that's a hell of a gun tho bleak You need to stop with gun bars. In that you'll hold an L it's a no go Better off no showing. Lean on the Stick &get ur hat tilted like the Celtics logo Nice i'll meet you on a Level Ground and Drop this bum. My point is JUST that tho Like ur career, verses, and persona: build heat then Fall Flat off the Plateau. Nahhh, wording made this not hit once again, execution light as well Overall good read from both ends, I got Flow here with the better overall verse, and he was way more consistent. Bleak had some good ones in there too, but also fell flat on more bars then Flow. V-Flow
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03-25-2019, 01:16 AM | #6 |
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nanna was disrespect, simple but a good start
didnt follow the disc so this missed for me fucked with disqualify ect was a heater body was good build up to opera was great but the dome shit made it a lil off for me, this coulda been a banger cuz of the creativity deck was funny but wording was stretched, still worked ok close vs little opener was a cool start upset was aiiight not feelin the bomb line tbh fucked with chopped and screwed, solid deisel line was fiiiire dabs was okayy celtics logo i’ve heard somethin similar befo wasnt feelin the closer real tough call, same quotes.. flow had a couple of wording issues but the concepts were there.. ect was nasty, tied for lotb.. bleak had the diesel line that was the best in his verse.. uhh at the end i think bleak just had one more bar that i didn’t like v flow
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04-03-2019, 09:32 PM | #7 |
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Hit a gym fatty, if we are made in god's image you must be Budda's creation
shit you ain't 'felt a body burn' since your Nanna's cremation cool Mate we ain't the same son, you the fakest to boast If your mistaken for Real it's in a chyeahhh clone conspiracy post nice n play the Cynic all you want but you'll never be him B Shit you didn't have a single diss qualify in the sol without me meh its ok See he's been a mess since his Grammy's been dead Needed E.C.T to forget, no wonder the 'power went to his head' hah, k Fuck you disgust me, just looking at you causes me stress Course you'd vote snatcher, you'll always have a body complex wording hurt a very good concept, still give it a solid jab want to "B sharp" so I'll make a Nine sing it's heart out Lungs blasting through the dome like Sydney's opera house cool Captain of the SOL shit but you were out of your depths How you going to "run leagues" when the ship was sinking soon as your fat ass stepped onto deck lmao Bet B looking peaky now, prolly lost all of his colour No need for a Tommy when a Shelby in his face like they brothers dont get it and not using google ././ You barking bitch, I'M the reason text was saved dawg. little man/little bite, the hand that feeds you bout to slap ur fucking face off too simple Who you really beat tho? Shut ur retard ass up and lick stamps U needed a time out for the lesson, now ur CLEARLY Upset Champ lmao @ the set up, this was cool Nazi huh? Why would I care bout outcomes of battles that bore me? Stupid Brit, if I moved it'd be Blitzkrieg & bombs over London like it's 1940 nah & you moving on me? Issa joke faggot so stop it dude I'll have Flow slowed to a dead stop... head rock... chopped&screwed this was niiiiice, fucked w the flow too PLEASE get tough. you'll get sawed off when I squeeze the buck toast this burnout w/ smoke from 2 barrels like diesel trucks near LOTB if ur last bar wasn't I got that new shit, futuristic ray guns w/ no mags or clips. if hes in the chamber's range, one button will see him vaporized like dab hits lol creative, i like it You need to stop with gun bars. In that you'll hold an L it's a no go Better off no showing. Lean on the Stick &get ur hat tilted like the Celtics logo meh i just don't like it, it works but i do not like it i'll meet you on a Level Ground and Drop this bum. My point is JUST that tho Like ur career, verses, and persona: build heat then Fall Flat off the Plateau. nah man, did not enjoy well this battle is fucking weird bc flow came consistent and bleak had LOTBs and a few more way cooler/harder haymakers. as much as i don't want to do it, i have to give it to flow for consistency. i want to give it to bleak bc he had the two best bars by far but i can't do it bc his lows were too low. v/ flow |
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This was close to me. Flows 1st 3 bars & his closer? Yes indeed. Bleak upset champ,
chopped & screwed, & Celtics logo. Besides the fact that Flow had 1 more bar I liked I liked that he was bit more personal . V/Flow |
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