Barcotic vs For Battling - BARCOTIC WINS

[Orc]

Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

[For Battling]

Thank you orc


16

[Barcotic]

For Battling aka faggot making half naked vids of himself eating ribs

im a godsend, aka guy to call when friends need
id give the shirt off my back for da fam
...meanwhile U do it for an all-men's text league
ur attitude? legit. s' not why i laugh at u n shit
when it comes to FB,I wanna full investigation on wtf happened to his lip
sign out, u faggot. w/o a doubt id say ur run sucked
i make mfs retire, but didnt kno they use ur mouth to hang their gloves up
'tween me n U, my steez is killin yours. dude, the ppl feel it more
no one likes u. the next time u light up a room, u'll be a spirit orb
im comin yo, runnin slow w/ a pump at close range
theyll find shells all around u & brains on ur stomach, no Krang
i got a name for every piece that's bordering ur house, For ..
n when Eddie the Eagle hits u, it'll do more than ring ya Belfour
ayyy get the fuck out my way when im usin ratchets
ur a circus clown; put that round nose to ur face & ur doin backflips
ur a batshit retarded lame and u act silly slow
I got the Juice. unfortunately urs is still on ur face from ur last video

[For Battling]

Barcotic aka Mike

Originally Posted by Barcotic

lollll who is crying u butthurt fgt

go squat n let some steam off

U claim ur tough... always hungry, str8 devouring ur peers
yet you blow up for simply getting rubbed the wrong way.. that’s cauliflower ear
Blow ur brains out ya mouth. Don’t believe me I’ll grab the K then I’m out
either meet me at the border w/ hands, or I’ll Air Canada all the way to ur house
And I ain’t wit that drama shit. Get shmacked if u try n start an argument
Its either I point at em like he started it, or bang toys like retarded kids
Tell em stop hiding, I’ll catch him on his walk to work with the tec
at the end of the block.. soon as u see foreshadow u’ll know its death that comes next
Ur clique ain’t scarin’ shit. I’m sendin murder letters to these frail fucks
First I’ll pull up to ur house.. then I open up from the side like mail trucks
I’m on ur campus creepin. Soon as I catch u you’re a goner
One hand aimin’ w/ the stick.. ya whole crew gettin bullied by a Draco - that’s Harry Potter
My gang wreckless, we’ll let u talk shit until it really offends us
Then I’ll be on the bike, making noise w/ the cans behind me like Dennis the Menace
My goons stay bustin’, ur crews’ nerds that throw painless swings
just give it up Mike, or I’ll let 11 travel thru your mind like Stranger Things

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Barcotic

im a godsend, aka guy to call when friends need
id give the shirt off my back for da fam
...meanwhile U do it for an all-men's text league
FACTS
ur attitude? legit. s' not why i laugh at u n shit
when it comes to FB,I wanna full investigation on wtf happened to his lip
Too simple, could've done much more w/ the joke/concept
sign out, u faggot. w/o a doubt id say ur run sucked
i make mfs retire, but didnt kno they use ur mouth to hang their gloves up
Nope, same as above
'tween me n U, my steez is killin yours. dude, the ppl feel it more
no one likes u. the next time u light up a room, u'll be a spirit orb
This was crazy, really dope
im comin yo, runnin slow w/ a pump at close range
theyll find shells all around u & brains on ur stomach, no Krang
Good gun bar, has layers to it
i got a name for every piece that's bordering ur house, For ..
n when Eddie the Eagle hits u, it'll do more than ring ya Belfour
Pretty good, tho I doubt most know who you're referencing
ayyy get the fuck out my way when im usin ratchets
ur a circus clown; put that round nose to ur face & ur doin backflips
Naaah, boring
ur a batshit retarded lame and u act silly slow
I got the Juice. unfortunately urs is still on ur face from ur last video
Decent closer, nothing crazy tho

Originally Posted by For Battling

U claim ur tough... always hungry, str8 devouring ur peers
yet you blow up for simply getting rubbed the wrong way.. that’s cauliflower ear
Naaah, should've taken this concept a different route
Blow ur brains out ya mouth. Don’t believe me I’ll grab the K then I’m out
either meet me at the border w/ hands, or I’ll Air Canada all the way to ur house
This is nice
And I ain’t wit that drama shit. Get shmacked if u try n start an argument
Its either I point at em like he started it, or bang toys like retarded kids
LOL dope af, in my style..try'na swag like the God
Tell em stop hiding, I’ll catch him on his walk to work with the tec
at the end of the block.. soon as u see foreshadow u’ll know its death that comes next
Again sick bar..I see you lil homie
Ur clique ain’t scarin’ shit. I’m sendin murder letters to these frail fucks
First I’ll pull up to ur house.. then I open up from the side like mail trucks
Naaah pretty standard
I’m on ur campus creepin. Soon as I catch u you’re a goner
One hand aimin’ w/ the stick.. ya whole crew gettin bullied by a Draco - that’s Harry Potter
An OK gun bar
My gang wreckless, we’ll let u talk shit until it really offends us
Then I’ll be on the bike, making noise w/ the cans behind me like Dennis the Menace
ODing on gun bars
My goons stay bustin’, ur crews’ nerds that throw painless swings
just give it up Mike, or I’ll let 11 travel thru your mind like Stranger Things
Decent closer

Overall I was really enjoying Zelph's verse until he became REALLY redundant w/ the gun bars, whereas Barc was more varied w/ his creativity. Idk tough call, but I'm edging it to BARCOTIC, cuz tbh For Battling had 6 gun bars in a roll.

[Profit]

im a godsend, aka guy to call when friends need
id give the shirt off my back for da fam
...meanwhile U do it for an all-men's text league

Lmao! Good stuff

ur attitude? legit. s' not why i laugh at u n shit
when it comes to FB,I wanna full investigation on wtf happened to his lip

Ok


sign out, u faggot. w/o a doubt id say ur run sucked
i make mfs retire, but didnt kno they use ur mouth to hang their gloves up

Ok

'tween me n U, my steez is killin yours. dude, the ppl feel it more
no one likes u. the next time u light up a room, u'll be a spirit orb

Niiiiiice!

im comin yo, runnin slow w/ a pump at close range
theyll find shells all around u & brains on ur stomach, no Krang

Dope!

i got a name for every piece that's bordering ur house, For ..
n when Eddie the Eagle hits u, it'll do more than ring ya Belfour

U like that hockey shit, this was fire!

ayyy get the fuck out my way when im usin ratchets
ur a circus clown; put that round nose to ur face & ur doin backflips

Ok

ur a batshit retarded lame and u act silly slow
I got the Juice. unfortunately urs is still on ur face from ur last video

Lmao!



claim ur tough... always hungry, str8 devouring ur peers
yet you blow up for simply getting rubbed the wrong way.. that’s cauliflower ear

Cool

Blow ur brains out ya mouth. Don’t believe me I’ll grab the K then I’m out
either meet me at the border w/ hands, or I’ll Air Canada all the way to ur house

Nice


And I ain’t wit that drama shit. Get shmacked if u try n start an argument
Its either I point at em like he started it, or bang toys like retarded kids

Lol! Cool

Tell em stop hiding, I’ll catch him on his walk to work with the tec
at the end of the block.. soon as u see foreshadow u’ll know its death that comes next

Cool


Ur clique ain’t scarin’ shit. I’m sendin murder letters to these frail fucks
First I’ll pull up to ur house.. then I open up from the side like mail trucks

Dope


I’m on ur campus creepin. Soon as I catch u you’re a goner
One hand aimin’ w/ the stick.. ya whole crew gettin bullied by a Draco - that’s Harry Potter

Ok

My gang wreckless, we’ll let u talk shit until it really offends us
Then I’ll be on the bike, making noise w/ the cans behind me like Dennis the Menace

Ehh

My goons stay bustin’, ur crews’ nerds that throw painless swings
just give it up Mike, or I’ll let 11 travel thru your mind like Stranger Things

Ok


Nice battle, although a few light jabs no huge misses here.. felt by the numbers barcotic landed harder punches, but didn't win by much.. close but I have barcotic winning.

[classickERBL]

@For Battling got it IMO , i was fuckin wit the "retarded kids , mail truck and stranger things" bars those that stood out to me as far as @Barcotic i like the angle he took cuz i seen that video with for battling eating ribs and dawg ! that shit on his lip had some shit on his lip lmao , i like that FBI investigation bar which made me laugh , some other cool lines , over all good battle ! salute to both !
vote - for battling

[WRATH]

Originally Posted by Barcotic

For Battling aka faggot making half naked vids of himself eating ribs

im a godsend, aka guy to call when friends need
id give the shirt off my back for da fam
...meanwhile U do it for an all-men's text league

Snap

ur attitude? legit. s' not why i laugh at u n shit
when it comes to FB,I wanna full investigation on wtf happened to his lip

Solid

sign out, u faggot. w/o a doubt id say ur run sucked
i make mfs retire, but didnt kno they use ur mouth to hang their gloves up

Eh

'tween me n U, my steez is killin yours. dude, the ppl feel it more
no one likes u. the next time u light up a room, u'll be a spirit orb

Heh

im comin yo, runnin slow w/ a pump at close range
theyll find shells all around u & brains on ur stomach, no Krang

Nice

i got a name for every piece that's bordering ur house, For ..
n when Eddie the Eagle hits u, it'll do more than ring ya Belfour

For and four rhyme makes this light

ayyy get the fuck out my way when im usin ratchets
ur a circus clown; put that round nose to ur face & ur doin backflips

Eh

ur a batshit retarded lame and u act silly slow
I got the Juice. unfortunately urs is still on ur face from ur last video

Ok

U claim ur tough... always hungry, str8 devouring ur peers
yet you blow up for simply getting rubbed the wrong way.. that’s cauliflower ear

Solid

Blow ur brains out ya mouth. Don’t believe me I’ll grab the K then I’m out
either meet me at the border w/ hands, or I’ll Air Canada all the way to ur house

Could of been more

And I ain’t wit that drama shit. Get shmacked if u try n start an argument
Its either I point at em like he started it, or bang toys like retarded kids

Haa nice

Tell em stop hiding, I’ll catch him on his walk to work with the tec
at the end of the block.. soon as u see foreshadow u’ll know its death that comes next

Solid

Ur clique ain’t scarin’ shit. I’m sendin murder letters to these frail fucks
First I’ll pull up to ur house.. then I open up from the side like mail trucks

Nice

I’m on ur campus creepin. Soon as I catch u you’re a goner
One hand aimin’ w/ the stick.. ya whole crew gettin bullied by a Draco - that’s Harry Potter

I'm voting for this nigga at this point

My gang wreckless, we’ll let u talk shit until it really offends us
Then I’ll be on the bike, making noise w/ the cans behind me like Dennis the Menace
My goons stay bustin’, ur crews’ nerds that throw painless swings
just give it up Mike, or I’ll let 11 travel thru your mind like Stranger Things

Yea..


V FB

[For Battling]

Who tagged that fuckery


Fess up

[BROKE LESNAR]

Originally Posted by Barcotic

For Battling aka faggot making half naked vids of himself eating ribs

im a godsend, aka guy to call when friends need
id give the shirt off my back for da fam
...meanwhile U do it for an all-men's text league

☆☆☆☆☆ lmao nice

ur attitude? legit. s' not why i laugh at u n shit
when it comes to FB,I wanna full investigation on wtf happened to his lip

☆☆☆☆☆ dope

sign out, u faggot. w/o a doubt id say ur run sucked
i make mfs retire, but didnt kno they use ur mouth to hang their gloves up

☆☆☆

'tween me n U, my steez is killin yours. dude, the ppl feel it more
no one likes u. the next time u light up a room, u'll be a spirit orb

☆☆☆☆☆ fire

im comin yo, runnin slow w/ a pump at close range
theyll find shells all around u & brains on ur stomach, no Krang

☆☆☆☆☆ dope flip

i got a name for every piece that's bordering ur house, For ..
n when Eddie the Eagle hits u, it'll do more than ring ya Belfour

☆☆☆☆☆

ayyy get the fuck out my way when im usin ratchets
ur a circus clown; put that round nose to ur face & ur doin backflips

☆☆☆☆☆

ur a batshit retarded lame and u act silly slow
I got the Juice. unfortunately urs is still on ur face from ur last video

☆☆☆☆☆

Originally Posted by For Battling

Barcotic aka Mike



U claim ur tough... always hungry, str8 devouring ur peers
yet you blow up for simply getting rubbed the wrong way.. that’s cauliflower ear

☆☆☆☆☆ dope

Blow ur brains out ya mouth. Don’t believe me I’ll grab the K then I’m out
either meet me at the border w/ hands, or I’ll Air Canada all the way to ur house

☆ indirect

And I ain’t wit that drama shit. Get shmacked if u try n start an argument
Its either I point at em like he started it, or bang toys like retarded kids

☆☆☆ kind of indirect, still gave credit

Tell em stop hiding, I’ll catch him on his walk to work with the tec
at the end of the block.. soon as u see foreshadow u’ll know its death that comes next

☆☆☆☆☆

Ur clique ain’t scarin’ shit. I’m sendin murder letters to these frail fucks
First I’ll pull up to ur house.. then I open up from the side like mail trucks

☆ definitely indirect

I’m on ur campus creepin. Soon as I catch u you’re a goner
One hand aimin’ w/ the stick.. ya whole crew gettin bullied by a Draco - that’s Harry Potter

☆

My gang wreckless, we’ll let u talk shit until it really offends us
Then I’ll be on the bike, making noise w/ the cans behind me like Dennis the Menace

☆ indirect again

My goons stay bustin’, ur crews’ nerds that throw painless swings
just give it up Mike, or I’ll let 11 travel thru your mind like Stranger Things

☆☆☆☆☆ fire

Barcotic went 7 for 8 and had a near flawless verse. Zelph had a shitload of indirect bars that came across as swag and flow.

v-Barcotic

[Habitat]

im a godsend, aka guy to call when friends need
id give the shirt off my back for da fam
...meanwhile U do it for an all-men's text league
this was nice
ur attitude? legit. s' not why i laugh at u n shit
when it comes to FB,I wanna full investigation on wtf happened to his lip
lol dope
sign out, u faggot. w/o a doubt id say ur run sucked
i make mfs retire, but didnt kno they use ur mouth to hang their gloves up
not feelin this one
'tween me n U, my steez is killin yours. dude, the ppl feel it more
no one likes u. the next time u light up a room, u'll be a spirit orb
dope
im comin yo, runnin slow w/ a pump at close range
theyll find shells all around u & brains on ur stomach, no Krang
not a fan of this
i got a name for every piece that's bordering ur house, For ..
n when Eddie the Eagle hits u, it'll do more than ring ya Belfour
didn't like this either
ayyy get the fuck out my way when im usin ratchets
ur a circus clown; put that round nose to ur face & ur doin backflips
dope
ur a batshit retarded lame and u act silly slow
I got the Juice. unfortunately urs is still on ur face from ur last video
nice

vs

U claim ur tough... always hungry, str8 devouring ur peers
yet you blow up for simply getting rubbed the wrong way.. that’s cauliflower ear
not usually a fan of "that's such and such" bars but i thought this was good
Blow ur brains out ya mouth. Don’t believe me I’ll grab the K then I’m out
either meet me at the border w/ hands, or I’ll Air Canada all the way to ur house
not feelin this
And I ain’t wit that drama shit. Get shmacked if u try n start an argument
Its either I point at em like he started it, or bang toys like retarded kids
ok diggin it
Tell em stop hiding, I’ll catch him on his walk to work with the tec
at the end of the block.. soon as u see foreshadow u’ll know its death that comes next
dope
Ur clique ain’t scarin’ shit. I’m sendin murder letters to these frail fucks
First I’ll pull up to ur house.. then I open up from the side like mail trucks
jab here
I’m on ur campus creepin. Soon as I catch u you’re a goner
One hand aimin’ w/ the stick.. ya whole crew gettin bullied by a Draco - that’s Harry Potter
not feelin this
My gang wreckless, we’ll let u talk shit until it really offends us
Then I’ll be on the bike, making noise w/ the cans behind me like Dennis the Menace
ok this was good
My goons stay bustin’, ur crews’ nerds that throw painless swings
just give it up Mike, or I’ll let 11 travel thru your mind like Stranger Things
nice

Thought this was actually really close but I got barcotic with the harder hitting punches

v/ Barcotic

[Hawk]

Originally Posted by Barcotic

For Battling aka faggot making half naked vids of himself eating ribs

im a godsend, aka guy to call when friends need
id give the shirt off my back for da fam
...meanwhile U do it for an all-men's text league

^^^ Dead. Nasty way to kick things off (literally and as in the bar is good)

ur attitude? legit. s' not why i laugh at u n shit
when it comes to FB,I wanna full investigation on wtf happened to his lip

^^^ haha not bad

sign out, u faggot. w/o a doubt id say ur run sucked
i make mfs retire, but didnt kno they use ur mouth to hang their gloves up

^^^ Sheeeeesh that hurt

'tween me n U, my steez is killin yours. dude, the ppl feel it more
no one likes u. the next time u light up a room, u'll be a spirit orb

^^^ Dope

im comin yo, runnin slow w/ a pump at close range
theyll find shells all around u & brains on ur stomach, no Krang

^^^ This was fire.

i got a name for every piece that's bordering ur house, For ..
n when Eddie the Eagle hits u, it'll do more than ring ya Belfour

^^^ Fire

ayyy get the fuck out my way when im usin ratchets
ur a circus clown; put that round nose to ur face & ur doin backflips

^^^ This was cool. I think it just seems weaker because it followed like 4 fire bars in a row

ur a batshit retarded lame and u act silly slow
I got the Juice. unfortunately urs is still on ur face from ur last video

^^^ jaojfidosjfiaofjad dead

Overall - Holy shit this verse was mean. I damn near had to log off and send a get well soon card out. Couple things could have been better but like I said I think they were still good just graded on a curved scale because everything else was so fire.

Originally Posted by For Battling

Barcotic aka Mike



U claim ur tough... always hungry, str8 devouring ur peers
yet you blow up for simply getting rubbed the wrong way.. that’s cauliflower ear

^^^ Fire

Blow ur brains out ya mouth. Don’t believe me I’ll grab the K then I’m out
either meet me at the border w/ hands, or I’ll Air Canada all the way to ur house

^^^ This was dope

And I ain’t wit that drama shit. Get shmacked if u try n start an argument
Its either I point at em like he started it, or bang toys like retarded kids

^^^ Fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiire

Tell em stop hiding, I’ll catch him on his walk to work with the tec
at the end of the block.. soon as u see foreshadow u’ll know its death that comes next

^^^ Dope

Ur clique ain’t scarin’ shit. I’m sendin murder letters to these frail fucks
First I’ll pull up to ur house.. then I open up from the side like mail trucks

^^^ Wording felt a little off, still cool.

I’m on ur campus creepin. Soon as I catch u you’re a goner
One hand aimin’ w/ the stick.. ya whole crew gettin bullied by a Draco - that’s Harry Potter

^^^ Same as above. I don't mind the "that's _____" bars tbh but it is definitely the lazy way to finish a bar. I do it too, but you've already had one of these so I felt this one needed to have those execution details ironed out. Real dope punch but lost some luster for that.

My gang wreckless, we’ll let u talk shit until it really offends us
Then I’ll be on the bike, making noise w/ the cans behind me like Dennis the Menace

^^^ Dead @ the image of you doing a drive-by on a huffy. Nice bar

My goons stay bustin’, ur crews’ nerds that throw painless swings
just give it up Mike, or I’ll let 11 travel thru your mind like Stranger Things

^^^ Punch was dope but the set-up needed re-worked. "painless swings" seemed way forced.

Overall - A couple very minor critiques but overall this verse was dope. That retarded kids line made me do the screw face.



As I predicted this is super close and could potentially wind up being battle of the week. Because they both had some huge hits I have to go by the things I "didn't like". Barc had less slipups imo, even the bar I wasn't a huge fan of was still a solid hit where as a couple lazy finishes and one forced setup made FB play catchup.


I have to edge it to Barc for consistency.

[Aero]

Barc:

im a godsend, aka guy to call when friends need
id give the shirt off my back for da fam
...meanwhile U do it for an all-men's text league
predictable but decent anyway
ur attitude? legit. s' not why i laugh at u n shit
when it comes to FB,I wanna full investigation on wtf happened to his lip
ooook, I mean fine whatever but it didn't move me
sign out, u faggot. w/o a doubt id say ur run sucked
i make mfs retire, but didnt kno they use ur mouth to hang their gloves up
I don't fully understand here.
'tween me n U, my steez is killin yours. dude, the ppl feel it more
no one likes u. the next time u light up a room, u'll be a spirit orb
niiiiiice
im comin yo, runnin slow w/ a pump at close range
theyll find shells all around u & brains on ur stomach, no Krang
this is called trying too hard to make the concept fit the punch
i got a name for every piece that's bordering ur house, For ..
n when Eddie the Eagle hits u, it'll do more than ring ya Belfour
decent
ayyy get the fuck out my way when im usin ratchets
ur a circus clown; put that round nose to ur face & ur doin backflips
aight
ur a batshit retarded lame and u act silly slow
I got the Juice. unfortunately urs is still on ur face from ur last video
aight, humor isn't your thing anymore


Zelph:

U claim ur tough... always hungry, str8 devouring ur peers
yet you blow up for simply getting rubbed the wrong way.. that’s cauliflower ear
cauliflower ear is from taking a bruising, poor opener
Blow ur brains out ya mouth. Don’t believe me I’ll grab the K then I’m out
either meet me at the border w/ hands, or I’ll Air Canada all the way to ur house
blow your brains out your mouth? basic anatomy would help. air Canada was ok
And I ain’t wit that drama shit. Get shmacked if u try n start an argument
Its either I point at em like he started it, or bang toys like retarded kids
basic & not enough sting
Tell em stop hiding, I’ll catch him on his walk to work with the tec
at the end of the block.. soon as u see foreshadow u’ll know its death that comes next
cool
Ur clique ain’t scarin’ shit. I’m sendin murder letters to these frail fucks
First I’ll pull up to ur house.. then I open up from the side like mail trucks
nah, needs revision
I’m on ur campus creepin. Soon as I catch u you’re a goner
One hand aimin’ w/ the stick.. ya whole crew gettin bullied by a Draco - that’s Harry Potter
this is cool I guess
My gang wreckless, we’ll let u talk shit until it really offends us
Then I’ll be on the bike, making noise w/ the cans behind me like Dennis the Menace
nah, wack. we can use cans in anyway now it seems
My goons stay bustin’, ur crews’ nerds that throw painless swings
just give it up Mike, or I’ll let 11 travel thru your mind like Stranger Things
ok so Dennis the Menace, Stranger Things and Harry Potter.. I cant feel the gun bars with all these nerdy references



Wasn't feeling this battle too much. I like both of your styles as battlers though. Spirit orb from Barc was maybe lotb. FB had nerdy gun references and a self nameplay. Barcotic won this battle

[For Battling]

I want a recall on this battle.

Straight robbery.

[Barcotic]

everything from spirit orb on was fire
u lost

[For Battling]

Originally Posted by Barcotic

everything from spirit orb on was fire
u lost

Hell no


This shit fuckin currupt

[Barcotic]

listen
IM the guy who gets fucked around here

so if u actually lost to me, u most definitely lost
not even close
close means i auto lose

[For Battling]

Originally Posted by Barcotic

listen
IM the guy who gets fucked around here

so if u actually lost to me, u most definitely lost
not even close
close means i auto lose

No because here’s the thing.

You are considered a legend, I am considered a troll or whatever.

When people vote against you they get slammed for it, when people vote against me nothing happens - so they’re more inclined to vote against me because they won’t get yelled at and I’d still vote on their sht fairly.

They vote for you because they want your vote in their battle and you have a higher reputation, in a close battle you’re gonna get 99% of votes over me any day.

You play a huge role in text politics whether you wanna admit it or not. Your tactics typically work against batters who are not at your “legend” level. But against people like ghost, Cashius, hush etc it’s usually fair game because you’re all big names.

People vote based on name, not by verse quality.

[Barcotic]

false

[Ghost1]

its the Alvin karpis effect....

facts like shit lip