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Old 03-22-2019, 10:39 PM   #1
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Mainstream lingo seeps through the walls.
Sent out a hit, single out the fool all talk...
dyslexic messages crossed the lazy eye.
watch out for whats to come, another crazy night.
shoes covered in mud, find another pair with luck.
shout out to your moms for loving a thug.
Honda Civic on dubs, booming system added.
plus. Raw was presented to us, listen backwards
cuff the jeans, while words formulate something mean.
penny for your thoughts & 2 fingers to rub between.
let loose yet humbled by the cab fare.
losers spat disrespect still relevant last year.
finding truth is mad rare unless willing to beef.
2 shots follow & its another killing in the streets.
motivated by cash, stacked, wrapped in rubber bands.
same old crap that lacks another cover band...
repeat, rewash, recycle...re up, now we like you.
with the proper drink in, no telling what he might do.
harebrained schemes that capitulate nonsense.
bland overtures how you gonna articulate on them?
probably wont, let that plane crash & burn.
press F to pay respect now its back to work.
upturned nose, P I M P mixed with a bit of gangster.
glorified prankster who aims to modify anger.
gingified major with stipulations on progress.
makes sense since you weighed your situation on less...
static rattles the speaker, stumbling off the stage.
mumbling about the greats, fumbling & losing a page.
the crowd is lost with their hands up.
now thats some unnecessary stand up...
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Old 03-23-2019, 02:11 AM   #2
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Nice swagger Mr. J.

let loose yet humbled by the cab fare.
losers spat disrespect still relevant last year.
^lol such a good command of flow, even though it's only text.

Yeah I enjoyed it. Remember when I used to sig your lines? lol. I'm weird like that.

"bland overtures how you gonna articulate on them?"

I'd sig this. Cool thought/notion/random piece.
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Old 03-23-2019, 11:02 AM   #3
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I dig your flow fam, always have in all seriousness...From top to bottom imo it's on point.Really liked your word usage thru out this, shit didn't seemed forced like previous pieces I've read of yours...This was nice bro, it's good to see your so active in every section of the OM also ;)

harebrained schemes that capitulate nonsense.
bland overtures how you gonna articulate on them?
probably wont, let that plane crash & burn.
press F to pay respect now its back to work.
upturned nose, P I M P mixed with a bit of gangster.
glorified prankster who aims to modify anger.
gingified major with stipulations on progress.
makes sense since you weighed your situation on less..

^^That's slick my friend.

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Old 03-24-2019, 02:15 AM   #4
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If you read it backwards it's even better...

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Old 03-25-2019, 07:35 AM   #5
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Nah that's 2trippel'ish...Forwards is better.
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