Week 1: Superboy Estar Legend vs JEM Super Wins

Flow · 03-18-2019, 10:50 AM

Week One

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

@JEM
@superboy estar legend

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

JEM · 03-18-2019, 03:49 PM

Two.

superboy estar legend · 03-21-2019, 06:33 PM

i'll lay your ass to waste and leave you buried in the grave
make a headstone outta jems so u can have "RIP" engraved

JEM · 03-21-2019, 10:39 PM

Sure.

Don’t care if you Super, boy.. I got clips to feed ya for a long time
Cuz you catching bullet, after bullet, like receivers at the combine

Blas · 03-22-2019, 12:04 AM

superboy had a cool double meaning and i haven't seen the engraved flip on gems so i thought it was nice, JEM this was ok i think its a bit straight forward though for my liking, it was just too simple although obviously it isn't bad.

v/ superboy, think his was more complex and i liked the name flip/wp

sral · 03-22-2019, 05:46 AM

superboy for me here

BodySnatcher · 03-22-2019, 06:47 PM

I got Jem here sue me...both were short sweet and simple. I like both but Jems hit home for me

White LGI · 03-22-2019, 07:17 PM

I liked jem in a close one

Maximus · 03-22-2019, 08:00 PM

liked superboy's wordplay a little more than jem's
v/ superboy

John Dillinger · 03-22-2019, 08:45 PM

Feeling JEM more, lil more direct. Superstar coulda done more with the gem nameplay

DynamiCz · 03-22-2019, 11:12 PM

i'll lay your ass to waste and leave you buried in the grave
make a headstone outta jems so u can have "RIP" engraved

This was nice.. wording was there along with execution as well. Creativity was there as well with the name play

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Don’t care if you Super, boy.. I got clips to feed ya for a long time
Cuz you catching bullet, after bullet, like receivers at the combine

This was coo, I just seen this concept done a lot. Not taking away from you here wording was there along with nice execution.

Good shit from both, I'm going to edge Superboy on this one. Just a little more creative as I seen the combine flip a couple times. Props to both tho

V- Superboy

Flow · 03-24-2019, 08:39 AM

Vote Superboy. It was a tight one but think he edges it here. @superboy estar legend @JEM make sure your votes are going in please

Kill Spree · 03-24-2019, 01:05 PM

This is close for me both weren’t crazy but by bad... I liked Jess bar but I gotta give it to star for having the n/p personal vs a generic

V/star

Flow · 03-24-2019, 02:39 PM

5 3 need more votes ideally

Saint · 03-24-2019, 04:26 PM

JEM was ok, seen variations of combine concepts..

I liked engrave better tho, cool wording too

V- SUPERBOY

Barcotic · 03-24-2019, 06:07 PM

super's concept was a reach
j was simple but made sense

v/jem

Flow · 03-24-2019, 06:15 PM

6 4 super wins

03-22-2019, 05:46 AM	#6
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,251 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	superboy for me here __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

03-22-2019, 11:12 PM	#11
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829177	i'll lay your ass to waste and leave you buried in the grave make a headstone outta jems so u can have "RIP" engraved This was nice.. wording was there along with execution as well. Creativity was there as well with the name play ------- Don’t care if you Super, boy.. I got clips to feed ya for a long time Cuz you catching bullet, after bullet, like receivers at the combine This was coo, I just seen this concept done a lot. Not taking away from you here wording was there along with nice execution. Good shit from both, I'm going to edge Superboy on this one. Just a little more creative as I seen the combine flip a couple times. Props to both tho V- Superboy __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

03-24-2019, 06:07 PM	#16
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,493 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061965	super's concept was a reach j was simple but made sense v/jem __________________ Dummies finna die if they coming into mine boastin Twin glocks'll spark. Waterpark; everybody running when the slides open

03-18-2019, 03:49 PM	#2
JEM Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2019 Posts: 15 Rep Power: 0	Two.

03-21-2019, 06:33 PM	#3
superboy estar legend Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 15 Rep Power: 365285	i'll lay your ass to waste and leave you buried in the grave make a headstone outta jems so u can have "RIP" engraved

03-21-2019, 10:39 PM	#4
JEM Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2019 Posts: 15 Rep Power: 0	Sure. Don’t care if you Super, boy.. I got clips to feed ya for a long time Cuz you catching bullet, after bullet, like receivers at the combine

03-22-2019, 12:04 AM	#5
Blas BesT™ Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 596 Rep Power: 1628180	superboy had a cool double meaning and i haven't seen the engraved flip on gems so i thought it was nice, JEM this was ok i think its a bit straight forward though for my liking, it was just too simple although obviously it isn't bad. v/ superboy, think his was more complex and i liked the name flip/wp

03-22-2019, 06:47 PM	#7
BodySnatcher Hail Mary Haymakers Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: You know where I be at Posts: 1,785 Battle Record: 17-7 Champed - BAL Roast - Battle Arena League - BAL Season Champ Rep Power: 3840895	I got Jem here sue me...both were short sweet and simple. I like both but Jems hit home for me

03-22-2019, 07:17 PM	#8
White LGI Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 2,034 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	I liked jem in a close one

03-22-2019, 08:00 PM	#9
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169469	liked superboy's wordplay a little more than jem's v/ superboy

03-22-2019, 08:45 PM	#10
John Dillinger Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 886 Battle Record: 8-7 Accomplishments -NBL Pic Roast Champed -Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 10281356	Feeling JEM more, lil more direct. Superstar coulda done more with the gem nameplay

03-24-2019, 01:05 PM	#13
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,439 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645695	This is close for me both weren’t crazy but by bad... I liked Jess bar but I gotta give it to star for having the n/p personal vs a generic V/star

03-24-2019, 04:26 PM	#15
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,183 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535864	JEM was ok, seen variations of combine concepts.. I liked engrave better tho, cool wording too V- SUPERBOY