LR Week 1: Barcotic vs Zelti BARC WINS

Flow · 03-19-2019, 08:10 AM

24 hours and this shits closed.

One bar each and standard rules apply (no biting, swaying, recycling etc)

Get writing!

@zelti
@Barcotic

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

Barcotic · 03-19-2019, 05:39 PM

i hate fake.. & yall hoes. dont make my dogs roll
if we show Zelda business, our first shot'd take the console

zelti · 03-19-2019, 08:15 PM

My slimes’ rude w the long nose. Arms wave when he’s in the grove yo
Squidward shooters.. he’s either givin’ barnacles or he’s lettin the tool blow!

Incredible · 03-19-2019, 08:38 PM

This was cool both had a witty punchline here and I'm not a huge fan of name plays but I think zelph did this pretty well and read fluently. Vote = Zelph

Suthaveli · 03-19-2019, 11:06 PM

Maybe my accent but barc knuckle & barnacles didn't roll right w. me. I like the idea tho.
Barc had a ok set up. It's been a min since I've seen him write but I feel he can come more clever. The ending wasn't the greatest but whatevs
I feel barc connected more harsh so mvgt him.
Vote- barc

Blas · 03-19-2019, 11:36 PM

barc- very lazy setup, zelda wp was cool, concept was cool & the connection was well worded
zelt- liked ur other spongebob concept but not this one so much, the connection was weak but the name flip was cool

edge to barc for a better overall bar although if zelt had flipped this better he could have taken it

v/ barc

Real Spit · 03-20-2019, 02:04 AM

@Suthaveli I think he meant Bar Knuckles

Zelda was different, barnacles was ok but the squidward reference was some Nickelodeon shit.. just nah

v/Barcotic

Dominate · 03-20-2019, 03:05 AM

"y'all hoes" was a lazy multi, but otherwise Barc's bar was good. Simple nameplay but set up and executed well enough for a pretty decent punch. Zel's bar was cool. Bar knuckles is sliiiiightly forced, not enough that I couldn't fuck with it, but every little thing has to get considered when it's only one bar. The flip was creative but not as hard hitting as Barc's IMO, that's the main factor influencing my decision.

V/ Barc

Flow · 03-20-2019, 06:16 AM

I like Barca Zelda shit. Not seen that angle used an thought it was dope. However the set up was just rushed as fuck. Really took away from it for me. Bar knuckles took me a minute but I like it, very different, enjoy that you are really making cartoon gun bar things your style almost.

Tough shout. Both flawed when scrutinized but good on own merit.

Vote Zelph I think. I enjoyed the added layer of complexity.

Vote Zelph

Btw this has less then hour before closing.

4-2

Kill Spree · 03-20-2019, 06:40 AM

barcs bar read smooth... I don’t think I’ve seen a Zelda wordplay on zelph... zelph squidward shooters? Nah barnacles was cool but the fuck is squidward shooters

V/barc

Flow · 03-20-2019, 08:23 AM

Barcotic wins 5 2

03-19-2019, 05:39 PM	#2
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,493 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061965	i hate fake.. & yall hoes. dont make my dogs roll if we show Zelda business, our first shot'd take the console __________________ Dummies finna die if they coming into mine boastin Twin glocks'll spark. Waterpark; everybody running when the slides open

03-19-2019, 11:06 PM	#5
Suthaveli Prayers won't help. Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 851 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 16534019	Maybe my accent but barc knuckle & barnacles didn't roll right w. me. I like the idea tho. Barc had a ok set up. It's been a min since I've seen him write but I feel he can come more clever. The ending wasn't the greatest but whatevs I feel barc connected more harsh so mvgt him. Vote- barc Last edited by Suthaveli; 03-19-2019 at 11:42 PM. Reason: Meant to go barc

03-20-2019, 03:05 AM	#8
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,309 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197456	"y'all hoes" was a lazy multi, but otherwise Barc's bar was good. Simple nameplay but set up and executed well enough for a pretty decent punch. Zel's bar was cool. Bar knuckles is sliiiiightly forced, not enough that I couldn't fuck with it, but every little thing has to get considered when it's only one bar. The flip was creative but not as hard hitting as Barc's IMO, that's the main factor influencing my decision. V/ Barc __________________ The Bad Guys

03-19-2019, 08:15 PM	#3
zelti Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 346 Rep Power: 0	My slimes’ rude w the long nose. Arms wave when he’s in the grove yo Squidward shooters.. he’s either givin’ barnacles or he’s lettin the tool blow!

03-19-2019, 08:38 PM	#4
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,482 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972892	This was cool both had a witty punchline here and I'm not a huge fan of name plays but I think zelph did this pretty well and read fluently. Vote = Zelph

03-19-2019, 11:36 PM	#6
Blas BesT™ Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 596 Rep Power: 1628180	barc- very lazy setup, zelda wp was cool, concept was cool & the connection was well worded zelt- liked ur other spongebob concept but not this one so much, the connection was weak but the name flip was cool edge to barc for a better overall bar although if zelt had flipped this better he could have taken it v/ barc

03-20-2019, 02:04 AM	#7
Real Spit Member Join Date: Mar 2019 Posts: 84 Rep Power: 608129	@Suthaveli I think he meant Bar Knuckles Zelda was different, barnacles was ok but the squidward reference was some Nickelodeon shit.. just nah v/Barcotic

03-20-2019, 06:40 AM	#10
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,439 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645695	barcs bar read smooth... I don’t think I’ve seen a Zelda wordplay on zelph... zelph squidward shooters? Nah barnacles was cool but the fuck is squidward shooters V/barc