LR Week 1: Real Spit vs Dynamicz SPIT WINS

Flow · 03-19-2019, 08:17 AM

24 hours and this shits closed.

One bar each and standard rules apply (no biting, swaying, recycling etc)

Get writing!

@Real Spit
@DynamiCz

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

DynamiCz · 03-19-2019, 12:01 PM

F&N lean - no lying king.. go over the edge u'll hear a scar scream
Once it kick back - shots fill in Surreal like he havin a bizarre dream

Real Spit · 03-19-2019, 12:47 PM

I'm a boss lil faggot, best show respect 'for I blow up your poor rep
you ain't get the signal so I'm sending 5G's to show up at your doorstep

Lenox · 03-19-2019, 02:12 PM

Dynamicz: nah, too wordy. Also wtf is a scar scream

vs

Spit: this was smooth lol. Kinda played with the 5G but It was enough

SPIT

Suthaveli · 03-19-2019, 11:15 PM

I like where dy was going, but it didn't get there. Bar looked rush tbr.
5g signal was cool.

Mvgt- real spit

Barcotic · 03-20-2019, 03:00 AM

both had aight concepts for a quick workday 1-2
dy's was a bit corny w the nameplay callin him sir real & his bar was a bit wordy overall but the creativity was there
whereas spit's was a bit simple but clean

gtg w the cleaner bar
v/spitacular

Blas · 03-20-2019, 03:05 AM

cool bars, think dy was a little forced with calling him sir but it's ok, spits was clean & i liked the connection,

spit edges, v/ spit

Dominate · 03-20-2019, 03:13 AM

Both went for an 'attack' style bar which makes it easy to compare. Liked the lion king/off the edge/scar scream wp better than the sir real one actually... but I think there was too much going on in this bar overall and it lacked the polish it needed to come off hard hitting. Conversely, I'd say signal/5Gs is a tad less of a creative/inspired concept but it was worded and executed very well and read very smoothly, resulting in a more enjoyable read.

V/ Spit

zelti · 03-20-2019, 05:23 AM

Few things:

1. The 5G’s bar had no creativity or wit whatsoever. You could have literally said 3G’s or 4G’s and it would have been the same exact bar. The only thing here was that it was worded good, that’s it.

2. You’re gonna have cellphone signal show up to his doorstep? Umm ok and do what? Rape his cellphone? Offer him the latest deals in network reception? I mean what are these 5G’s gonna do once they show up to the doorstep? In reality there’s no punch here, you’re literally only saying that something is gonna to show up at his home.

“Errrrr yeah Skeeter I don’t think you’re grtting signal too well, I’m gonna send out about 5G’s to come speak to you.”

“Umm thanks?”

DynamiCz bar wasn’t the best here but it at least had creativity and an actual punch to it lol. This battle gets me mad because I’m seeing the trend that the rb heads are voting for whatever sounds the best at first glance, but either only works one way or doesn’t make sense at all. All good but it’s a genuine observation.

Vote DynamiCz

Flow · 03-20-2019, 08:18 AM

Spit wins by 5 to 1

03-19-2019, 12:01 PM	#2
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829178	F&N lean - no lying king.. go over the edge u'll hear a scar scream Once it kick back - shots fill in Surreal like he havin a bizarre dream __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

03-20-2019, 03:00 AM	#6
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,493 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061965	both had aight concepts for a quick workday 1-2 dy's was a bit corny w the nameplay callin him sir real & his bar was a bit wordy overall but the creativity was there whereas spit's was a bit simple but clean gtg w the cleaner bar v/spitacular __________________ Dummies finna die if they coming into mine boastin Twin glocks'll spark. Waterpark; everybody running when the slides open

03-20-2019, 03:13 AM	#8
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,309 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197456	Both went for an 'attack' style bar which makes it easy to compare. Liked the lion king/off the edge/scar scream wp better than the sir real one actually... but I think there was too much going on in this bar overall and it lacked the polish it needed to come off hard hitting. Conversely, I'd say signal/5Gs is a tad less of a creative/inspired concept but it was worded and executed very well and read very smoothly, resulting in a more enjoyable read. V/ Spit __________________ The Bad Guys

03-19-2019, 12:47 PM	#3
Real Spit Member Join Date: Mar 2019 Posts: 84 Rep Power: 608129	I'm a boss lil faggot, best show respect 'for I blow up your poor rep you ain't get the signal so I'm sending 5G's to show up at your doorstep

03-19-2019, 11:15 PM	#5
Suthaveli Prayers won't help. Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 851 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 16534019	I like where dy was going, but it didn't get there. Bar looked rush tbr. 5g signal was cool. Mvgt- real spit

03-20-2019, 03:05 AM	#7
Blas BesT™ Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 596 Rep Power: 1628180	cool bars, think dy was a little forced with calling him sir but it's ok, spits was clean & i liked the connection, spit edges, v/ spit

03-20-2019, 05:23 AM	#9
zelti Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 346 Rep Power: 0	Few things: 1. The 5G’s bar had no creativity or wit whatsoever. You could have literally said 3G’s or 4G’s and it would have been the same exact bar. The only thing here was that it was worded good, that’s it. 2. You’re gonna have cellphone signal show up to his doorstep? Umm ok and do what? Rape his cellphone? Offer him the latest deals in network reception? I mean what are these 5G’s gonna do once they show up to the doorstep? In reality there’s no punch here, you’re literally only saying that something is gonna to show up at his home. “Errrrr yeah Skeeter I don’t think you’re grtting signal too well, I’m gonna send out about 5G’s to come speak to you.” “Umm thanks?” DynamiCz bar wasn’t the best here but it at least had creativity and an actual punch to it lol. This battle gets me mad because I’m seeing the trend that the rb heads are voting for whatever sounds the best at first glance, but either only works one way or doesn’t make sense at all. All good but it’s a genuine observation. Vote DynamiCz