Week 1: Maximus vs Real Spit SPIT WINS

Flow · 03-18-2019, 10:46 AM

Week One

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY
@Maximus
@Real Spit

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

Maximus · 03-19-2019, 04:37 AM

this dweeb never gets the hoes, he's boring like life in prison
the last bitch i saw drooling over Spit was a dog with ptyalism

Real Spit · 03-19-2019, 02:06 PM

I'm a husler, about them quick dollars while you run like a slow jam
I'm moving .apk a week & you still struggle to get w/the program

Lenox · 03-19-2019, 02:17 PM

weak battle here tbh

I liked spits .apk wordplay tho, get with the program was corny af

Maximus was way too simple

SPIT

Flow · 03-19-2019, 02:50 PM

Thought it was an ok showing by both. Nice flips. Whilst maximum used the name flip which I think is better then the generic thrown by spit I felt spit worded his a bit better .. that being said I found the get with the program a bit lacking in harshness so for that I'm edging maximus in a tight contest

Blue Bayou · 03-19-2019, 03:09 PM

Cool battle here

Max’s setup bugs me for some reason, boring like life in prison just seems I dunno, lame… the ‘over’ part of the punch seems out of place… but overall for a Spit nameplay I think it’s a pretty funny concept

Spit cool fresh wordplay that works, and is set-up well… I do agree that the get with the program finish is a bit out of place, because I wouldn’t call somebody hustlin’ “getting with the program” per se, but it relates well to the wordplay & the punch has good swag to it

Overall Spit has a more enjoyable and better executed punch imo, he gets my vote… cool LR battle dudes

Vote – Spit

bleak · 03-19-2019, 06:59 PM

In a 1-2 battle you gotta fill all the dead space with more than just shit that rhymes imo

Spit did a better job of that here, Max didn't utilize his setup as well as he could have. I can definitely appreciate the effort on a word like that. Lil rust Max you'll get it next week

Spit

White LGI · 03-19-2019, 08:05 PM

Both probably better than what I'll drop but I liked max better, just more complex,,witty and original

Incredible · 03-19-2019, 09:18 PM

Ok battle here I think maximus didn't hit as hard as he was going for when writing it, see where he was going but yeah. Spit was pretty clever here I got him taking this kind of easily, flowed nice and hit decent. Vote = Real Spit

DynamiCz · 03-20-2019, 01:07 PM

this dweeb never gets the hoes, he's boring like life in prison
the last bitch i saw drooling over Spit was a dog with ptyalism

This was coo, wording was also crisp reading it

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I'm a husler, about them quick dollars while you run like a slow jam
I'm moving .apk a week & you still struggle to get w/the program

I like this a little more here, a little bit more creative where Max bar was nice, but nice on the simple side.

I got Real here with more creativity, props to both

Barcotic · 03-20-2019, 01:49 PM

max
i didnt quite get the ref to make sense out of drooling over spit, i got the jist of what u were going for. ive seen a ton of spit punches done much better tbh, so this ends up landing soft to me

spit
cool wp, i like that.. however the overall punch also lands soft. the leadup was like "yep another dope bar" but then there was no payoff/the end was letdown

so both were on the softer side, but spit's originality gives his the edge
v/spf50

Orc · 03-21-2019, 12:14 PM

Max I can’t rock with a spit bar he’s had the name for 10 years you know better

Spit this was decent and clever with a cool twist

Vote spit

Suthaveli · 03-21-2019, 01:15 PM

When I first encountered spit, I used a spit bar, & it was played back then. Your flip wasn't horrible if I were to dig deeper, what dragged you was the fact that it's stupid played.

Spit bar was pretty good. I like his connection on it.
Mvgt- real spit

sral · 03-22-2019, 05:39 AM

I got Spit winning, edge to him with the concept and wording

Jabari Black · 03-22-2019, 10:53 AM

Max came solid here. I think the bitch drooling over spit was worded fairly clean. “Drooling over spit” works better in the females drooling over him meaning. For the dog drooling meaning the wording isn’t as clean but it’s only a minor issue. My biggest issue with this bar is just that it’s a bit too elementary. Haven’t seen any spit battles so I haven’t seen too many spit flips but I’m assuming this one has to be the most obvious and used flips. Overall I got this bar hitting though, just saying that as constructive feedback.

Spi, that apk word play was slick af imo. You set up the punch fairly well besides moving like a slow jam was an awkward phrase. But I still think it was a good set up because it was so concise. Like I said the apk flip was dope af. I think you coulda ended it stronger than “get with the program” though. It does tie back in to the wp, but it’s another one of the instances where it works better one way than the other. Overall I think this was a pretty nice bar bro.

I think both had strong punches but Spit took this one with his creativity and clever wp.

Mvgt Spit

BodySnatcher · 03-22-2019, 02:42 PM

Maximus bar was cool...had to look up ptyalism. I think Spit had a clear better bar.

Flow · 03-24-2019, 08:27 AM

11 2 spit wins

03-19-2019, 03:09 PM	#6
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,091 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502332	Cool battle here Max’s setup bugs me for some reason, boring like life in prison just seems I dunno, lame… the ‘over’ part of the punch seems out of place… but overall for a Spit nameplay I think it’s a pretty funny concept Spit cool fresh wordplay that works, and is set-up well… I do agree that the get with the program finish is a bit out of place, because I wouldn’t call somebody hustlin’ “getting with the program” per se, but it relates well to the wordplay & the punch has good swag to it Overall Spit has a more enjoyable and better executed punch imo, he gets my vote… cool LR battle dudes Vote – Spit __________________ "I shit myself I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip

03-20-2019, 01:07 PM	#10
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829178	this dweeb never gets the hoes, he's boring like life in prison the last bitch i saw drooling over Spit was a dog with ptyalism This was coo, wording was also crisp reading it ------- I'm a husler, about them quick dollars while you run like a slow jam I'm moving .apk a week & you still struggle to get w/the program I like this a little more here, a little bit more creative where Max bar was nice, but nice on the simple side. I got Real here with more creativity, props to both __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

03-20-2019, 01:49 PM	#11
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,493 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061965	max i didnt quite get the ref to make sense out of drooling over spit, i got the jist of what u were going for. ive seen a ton of spit punches done much better tbh, so this ends up landing soft to me spit cool wp, i like that.. however the overall punch also lands soft. the leadup was like "yep another dope bar" but then there was no payoff/the end was letdown so both were on the softer side, but spit's originality gives his the edge v/spf50 __________________ Dummies finna die if they coming into mine boastin Twin glocks'll spark. Waterpark; everybody running when the slides open

03-22-2019, 05:39 AM	#14
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,255 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	I got Spit winning, edge to him with the concept and wording __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

03-19-2019, 04:37 AM	#2
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169469	this dweeb never gets the hoes, he's boring like life in prison the last bitch i saw drooling over Spit was a dog with ptyalism

03-19-2019, 02:06 PM	#3
Real Spit Member Join Date: Mar 2019 Posts: 84 Rep Power: 608129	I'm a husler, about them quick dollars while you run like a slow jam I'm moving .apk a week & you still struggle to get w/the program

03-19-2019, 08:05 PM	#8
White LGI Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 2,034 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Both probably better than what I'll drop but I liked max better, just more complex,,witty and original

03-19-2019, 09:18 PM	#9
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,482 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972892	Ok battle here I think maximus didn't hit as hard as he was going for when writing it, see where he was going but yeah. Spit was pretty clever here I got him taking this kind of easily, flowed nice and hit decent. Vote = Real Spit

03-21-2019, 12:14 PM	#12
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	Max I can’t rock with a spit bar he’s had the name for 10 years you know better Spit this was decent and clever with a cool twist Vote spit

03-21-2019, 01:15 PM	#13
Suthaveli Prayers won't help. Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 851 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 16534019	When I first encountered spit, I used a spit bar, & it was played back then. Your flip wasn't horrible if I were to dig deeper, what dragged you was the fact that it's stupid played. Spit bar was pretty good. I like his connection on it. Mvgt- real spit

03-22-2019, 10:53 AM	#15
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764495	Max came solid here. I think the bitch drooling over spit was worded fairly clean. “Drooling over spit” works better in the females drooling over him meaning. For the dog drooling meaning the wording isn’t as clean but it’s only a minor issue. My biggest issue with this bar is just that it’s a bit too elementary. Haven’t seen any spit battles so I haven’t seen too many spit flips but I’m assuming this one has to be the most obvious and used flips. Overall I got this bar hitting though, just saying that as constructive feedback. Spi, that apk word play was slick af imo. You set up the punch fairly well besides moving like a slow jam was an awkward phrase. But I still think it was a good set up because it was so concise. Like I said the apk flip was dope af. I think you coulda ended it stronger than “get with the program” though. It does tie back in to the wp, but it’s another one of the instances where it works better one way than the other. Overall I think this was a pretty nice bar bro. I think both had strong punches but Spit took this one with his creativity and clever wp. Mvgt Spit

03-22-2019, 02:42 PM	#16
BodySnatcher Hail Mary Haymakers Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: You know where I be at Posts: 1,785 Battle Record: 17-7 Champed - BAL Roast - Battle Arena League - BAL Season Champ Rep Power: 3840895	Maximus bar was cool...had to look up ptyalism. I think Spit had a clear better bar.