Week 1: Destroyer vs Dynamicz Dyna WINS

[Flow]

Week One

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

@Destroyer
@DynamiCz

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

[Destroyer]

maaaan. you’s a bitch to me & its always been evident
only one saying Nambia real threat, is our dumb fucking president

[DynamiCz]

I can't relate... styles get out of date they start to hate
Contradict the gun in this bar - side shots leave ya hypocritical state

[Miss Netcees]

Close one cuz both go hard Destroyer a lil bit more creative I'll give it to Destroyer

[sral]

i didnt like the 'Nam' use tbh with it being the middle of his name but still has Des here

[BodySnatcher]

Nam lolol... the bar was cool Des but Idk about the nameplay. The bar, in general, is cool but the n/p was bad. I thought Dyn bar was well constructed and had a bit more sting for a 1-2 punch. Des kinda just said Dyn isn't a threat while Dyn went for the jugular

vote Dyn

[zelti]

Des had a dope concept and everything was good until the ending of the second line, “our dumb fucking president” wasn’t the best. DynamiCz had a nice bar all around with solid wordplay and gets this one by a decent margin.


Vote DynamiCz

[Flow]

I thought both had merit. I appreciated does using his middle part of name for a name flip to keep a name flip on dy Actually fresh. Bar was fine but it wasn't anything huge

Body had a really clever gun bar and the wordplay was creative but I still not sure how I feel about it working both ways.

But definitely the more impactful.

Votes dyn

[Flow]

@Destroyer @Infiltrate @Blue Bayou @Resin M-I-C @Ryno @Jabari Black @Dominate

[Destroyer]

I’ll get right on that, @Flow

[Kill Spree]

Des bar was cool but calling him nam don’t work. Dyns bar was dope...


Vote/dyn

[Resin M-I-C]

i wanna give it to des bc his was smoother but using the middle part of dyna’s name just didn’t hit for me

edit: dyn was cool, hypocritical felt like it was missing an “in” for it to be flawless tho

v Dyn

[King]

Vote Dyn

i liked both bars, i think using Nam as the np just takes a little away from it for me

[Jabari Black]

Des I like the concept. Probably resonates with me cus the president dumb af lol. Anyway I like the precise wording. On the other side, I’m not feeling the Nam flip. Is one syllable in the middle of his name - no one would call him that. Second, the wording is clean for the Nam be a real threat meaning, but the wordplay not clean for the Nambia meaning (it would be missing a syllable - so like Nambia is a real...whatever it’s hard to explain). Anyways like the bar overall but that’s the critique with it.

Dy, I liked your concept as wel. Contradict this gun was was good tie in. I like be Hypocritical wordplay as well but it got a very similar issue as Des’s bar in that it works good fine for one meaning but wording is choppy for the other. So the hypocritical/contradict meaning is fine, but the hip a critical is like missing a syllable or you coulda used “leave your hip in a...” and it would work fine.

Overall, two good concepts, but wording ain’t the cleanest. I think the wordplay in both had the same issue but Des had another glaring issue with his bar being a Nam flip. I liked both bars but I think Dy edged it.

Mvgt dynamicz

[Flow]

Well that turned around quickly.

7 2 Dyna wins