Week 1: Ryno Vs Barcotic BARC WINS

Flow · 03-18-2019, 10:33 AM

Week One

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

@Ryno
@Barcotic

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

Ryno · 03-18-2019, 02:07 PM

Ur the mythical beast w/ the hype? I’ll leave ya dome so swole bro
Cos it’s nothing for me to ‘Snap a legendary head’ like a Lochness photo

Barcotic · 03-20-2019, 03:28 AM

lisssten. i brought a 4 inch shiv, its such a cutter
ironically you'll see Ryno hide BEFORE i skin the mf.

Blas · 03-20-2019, 03:39 AM

both punches were very ok/simple, preference is towards barc bc his was worded a bit slicker and just hit slightly harder to me. very avg stuff.

v/ barc

Lenox · 03-20-2019, 11:14 AM

Snap a legendary head was whatever, wasn’t feeling it. Shoulda just dropped a mean sports bar, odd.

Ryno hide was simple but slick.

BARCOTIC

DynamiCz · 03-20-2019, 01:17 PM

Ur the mythical beast w/ the hype? I’ll leave ya dome so swole bro
Cos it’s nothing for me to ‘Snap a legendary head’ like a Lochness photo

This was nice, only thing I seen a couple of lochness concepts which takes the damage given to the opponent away a notch. Still props how u executed it up tho

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lisssten. i brought a 4 inch shiv, its such a cutter
ironically you'll see Ryno hide BEFORE i skin the mf.

Had to read a couple times, this was simple but nice and effective. The ryno hide flip was fresher for my eyes. Simple again, but effective

Nice 1-2 from both, I got Barc here cause the concept was fresh vs the lochness bar which was still executed nice, but I seen the concept a lot

V-Barc

Miss Netcees · 03-20-2019, 02:51 PM

Both punchines could have been better but I'll give to Barc

zelti · 03-21-2019, 08:38 AM

Ryno tbh I wasn’t feeling your bar too much this week, the concept had potential but idk maybe it was how you executed it which hurt it. Barcs was decent and did the job here.

Vote Barcotic

Destroyer · 03-21-2019, 09:06 AM

Got Barc here
Ryno thatbwasnt bad it just seemed like it could be dropped against anyone who’s been battling awhile
Barc gets props for relating to who he was battling in his punch

V/barc

Real Spit · 03-21-2019, 11:44 AM

Ryno.. I don't like comparison punches, and I can't stand when people use quotes because IMO it means the wording wasn't effective enough to ensure the concept takes root w/the reader.. Bar was a little lazy here w/wording but it still hit somewhat, so v/Bar

MMLP · 03-21-2019, 11:48 AM

This is a lot closer than ppl think, I switched my vote after a couple of reads

barc wins, gotta respect his wordplay and ultimately his directness!

Suthaveli · 03-21-2019, 05:20 PM

I actually like ryno punch. I thought it was pretty dope, but I've nvr seen it before.
Barc was harsher because it was more direct imo which is why
Mvgt- barc

White LGI · 03-21-2019, 06:41 PM

I actually liked ryno better...
The skin line was good but ryno just hit harder to me...barc shit was better put together but ryno was more entertaining
Vote ryno

sral · 03-22-2019, 05:41 AM

Barc was dope to word it that way, felt it connect a lot more

Flow · 03-24-2019, 08:30 AM

10 1 barc

03-18-2019, 02:07 PM	#2
Ryno Retired Join Date: Jul 2018 Posts: 646 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 1601590	Ur the mythical beast w/ the hype? I’ll leave ya dome so swole bro Cos it’s nothing for me to ‘Snap a legendary head’ like a Lochness photo Last edited by Ryno; 03-18-2019 at 08:42 PM.

03-20-2019, 03:28 AM	#3
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,493 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061965	lisssten. i brought a 4 inch shiv, its such a cutter ironically you'll see Ryno hide BEFORE i skin the mf. __________________ Dummies finna die if they coming into mine boastin Twin glocks'll spark. Waterpark; everybody running when the slides open

03-20-2019, 01:17 PM	#6
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829177	Ur the mythical beast w/ the hype? I’ll leave ya dome so swole bro Cos it’s nothing for me to ‘Snap a legendary head’ like a Lochness photo This was nice, only thing I seen a couple of lochness concepts which takes the damage given to the opponent away a notch. Still props how u executed it up tho ----- lisssten. i brought a 4 inch shiv, its such a cutter ironically you'll see Ryno hide BEFORE i skin the mf. Had to read a couple times, this was simple but nice and effective. The ryno hide flip was fresher for my eyes. Simple again, but effective Nice 1-2 from both, I got Barc here cause the concept was fresh vs the lochness bar which was still executed nice, but I seen the concept a lot V-Barc __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

03-22-2019, 05:41 AM	#14
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,251 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	Barc was dope to word it that way, felt it connect a lot more __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

03-20-2019, 03:39 AM	#4
Blas BesT™ Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 596 Rep Power: 1628180	both punches were very ok/simple, preference is towards barc bc his was worded a bit slicker and just hit slightly harder to me. very avg stuff. v/ barc

03-20-2019, 02:51 PM	#7
Miss Netcees Netcees's Hottest lady <3 Join Date: Mar 2019 Posts: 99 Rep Power: 335414	Both punchines could have been better but I'll give to Barc

03-21-2019, 08:38 AM	#8
zelti Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 346 Rep Power: 0	Ryno tbh I wasn’t feeling your bar too much this week, the concept had potential but idk maybe it was how you executed it which hurt it. Barcs was decent and did the job here. Vote Barcotic

03-21-2019, 11:44 AM	#10
Real Spit Member Join Date: Mar 2019 Posts: 84 Rep Power: 608129	Ryno.. I don't like comparison punches, and I can't stand when people use quotes because IMO it means the wording wasn't effective enough to ensure the concept takes root w/the reader.. Bar was a little lazy here w/wording but it still hit somewhat, so v/Bar

03-21-2019, 11:48 AM	#11
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 600 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768087	This is a lot closer than ppl think, I switched my vote after a couple of reads barc wins, gotta respect his wordplay and ultimately his directness!

03-21-2019, 05:20 PM	#12
Suthaveli Prayers won't help. Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 851 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 16534019	I actually like ryno punch. I thought it was pretty dope, but I've nvr seen it before. Barc was harsher because it was more direct imo which is why Mvgt- barc

03-21-2019, 06:41 PM	#13
White LGI Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 2,034 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	I actually liked ryno better... The skin line was good but ryno just hit harder to me...barc shit was better put together but ryno was more entertaining Vote ryno