02-25-2019, 02:43 PM | #1 |
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Ryno vs DynamiCz - RYNO WINS
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02-25-2019, 04:30 PM | #2 |
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Boooooy u ugly asf, pockets stuck in a rut, chicks rarely exchange w/ this fake
If a bitch saw ‘Dyn & dashed’...it’s cos she knew one way or another she’d pay for the date It’s a storm comin if I’m dumpin, either get out the way or ur ass gettin slayed Sprayin this lame! The ‘bulldogs runnin through this square’ like they’re avoidin the rain Shit is insane...No games, surround em w/ lasers & follow it up w/ 5 claps This ain’t Galaga, once ur beamed up there’s no chance of u gettin ur life back The old me showed mercy, now if a spirit needs to be lifted I’m the 1st one they call We all go through a phase...but when I’m finished he’ll be able to do it through walls Speak when spoken too nigga, make a peep & u’ll meet ur maker overnight Blast em twice! If u venture souls gonna journey waaaaay beyond the afterlife Dawg r u drunk? Clown ur hospital bound if u thought u could fuck w/ me Clutch & squeeze! Think AA, he’ll be hesitant to pick the cans up after recovery I pull strings in the hood, 1 phone call & he’ll be on a mission up to God If he pulls strings in the hood...i bet my life he’s hiding headphones on the job I’m the people’s champ, the stadium’ll fill up just to see this dudes skull leakin You can’t beat this! Dawg I’ll slam a bow above ya head like it’s all star weekend Text ain’t dead, these old heads swarmin threads like some vultures I’ll prove I’m no poser! Bitch I’ve got enough gunplay to shift you AND ‘Tha Culture’ Kill it squirt, ya raps r dirt & the big names leavin ya verses merked Fuckin twerp! Ur the Tesla of text, u BARELY get recognition for ya ‘current work’ The Beast Last edited by Ryno; 02-26-2019 at 01:04 PM. |
02-26-2019, 02:23 PM | #3 |
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Act out im gettin direct..Whateva gang u claim take 1 for the set
When one strap suspend from the shoulder like Ralph Breaks The Internet Subtract the loose ends, they will have to carry one--im reducing God when i shoot this 'Iron in Vain', it aint a shot giving Infusions The guns stay wit Victor, that mean silencer i keep it on the Hush Extendo i drop the shit--then start shaking the handle more then a courtesy flush New clip long as a dreadlock--quit the pretend or we find whatever bar he in The can i bust stay smoking, the wrong movement they better hope Rastafarian See u & ya bitch, damn! What i got by deceit...u'll think im pulling a scam Chopper skyview the street--I get live, it aint the news covering a Traffic Jam A funeral the only way u leaving..black hurse extend for them to grieve in From the right angle, u get ya fabric threaded with the needle like Modern Weaving To mention..Week 3 spoke u wanted Dy now, they should have paid it attention Now im slicing at a risk, they thinking im the one ask for Suicide Prevention What u sale corrupt, proper with ya gunbars, wwe kno u aint tough enough Shots turn a shirt inside out, then i leave u hanging by the tag like OfferUp U kno my temperpedic...a mattress never felt too appealing When the peaceful in your stomach, it can leave u with a inside gut feeling Drastic! If it's static, I can pay your old bitch the extra taxes Beam, I let ya X-ray your insides...she givin study for a MRI in Practice
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02-26-2019, 04:09 PM | #4 |
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Dyn & Dash was cool, bulldog was ehhh, Galaga was nice. I fuck with it. Phase had a nice touch on it, good bar. Afterlife was meh. I like pick up the cans, dope. Pull strings was ok. All Star weekend was decent. Jesus that culture bar couldve been dumb nice but I was let down by the ending. Current work was kinda cool/personal. Ralph was fire. Iron in vain was cool. Courtesy flush was banging. Rastafarian was ok. Traffic jam was cool had nice imagery. Modern weaving was ehh. Risk/wrist was ok but read a lil off to me. Offerup idk what that is, gut feeling wasn't bad, x-ray was a cool concept. This was a dope battle. Props to both for dropping early. I got Dyn in a close one but Ryno came out hard this week with Galaga and pick up cans. I think both had some misses but dy had lotb imo with Ralph and courtesy flush was dope too. Good shit boys. Last edited by BodySnatcher; 02-26-2019 at 04:11 PM. |
02-27-2019, 09:29 PM | #5 |
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Shit is insane...No games, surround em w/ lasers & follow it up w/ 5 claps
This ain’t Galaga, once ur beamed up there’s no chance of u gettin ur life back The old me showed mercy, now if a spirit needs to be lifted I’m the 1st one they call We all go through a phase...but when I’m finished he’ll be able to do it through walls Dawg r u drunk? Clown ur hospital bound if u thought u could fuck w/ me Clutch & squeeze! Think AA, he’ll be hesitant to pick the cans up after recovery (talk to em, haha) Vs Act out im gettin direct..Whateva gang u claim take 1 for the set When one strap suspend from the shoulder like Ralph Breaks The Internet The guns stay wit Victor, that mean silencer i keep it on the Hush Extendo i drop the shit--then start shaking the handle more then a courtesy flush (talk to em!) New clip long as a dreadlock--quit the pretend or we find whatever bar he in The can i bust stay smoking, the wrong movement they better hope Rastafarian See u & ya bitch, damn! What i got by deceit...u'll think im pulling a scam Chopper skyview the street--I get live, it aint the news covering a Traffic Jam Nice read. Dy started to die down at the end, but he has a very confident swag wit his bars that cannot be denied. The slang show he knows bout that. ryno don't seem like a slouch eitherfrfr. Ryno had better lows imo but I felt dy quoted were probably a bit stronger than ry quotes. I see ry get put in some tough battles, & I hate to vote against because I thoroughly enjoy his verses, but I gotta give it to dy barely. His loss were pretty low at the end & almost lost it imo. But he cam through. Keep the great reads coming. I'm picking up from you guys fr. Vote- dynamics Last edited by Shia Labruh; 02-27-2019 at 09:33 PM. |
03-03-2019, 10:09 AM | #6 |
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dyn and dashard was aight, good
wasnt feelin bulldog, gotta have a crazy creative twist to pull that off fucked with galaga heavy phase was cool wasnt feelin the afterlife jawn AA was aight, cant believe this is the first aa/cans line ive seen or heard lol headphones gave me a chuckle, funny shit bow was simple yet effective af, banger culture was aiiight wasnt feelin the closer vs ralph was nasty, glad u liked the movie lol vain a lil old and light courtesy flush was a banger ehhhh rastafarian chopper/news been done but this was ok not feelin modern weaving risk didnt hit, that was a reach offerip was niiiiiice gut feelin was a lil off closer was decent botw for me right now.. some nasty lines on both verses.. after reading it a several times it all came down to dyna’s last 2 lines, it felll short for me and ryno got him with one more good line.. solid battle fellas, i’m a real fan of both and this could go either way but v ryno
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03-03-2019, 02:57 PM | #7 |
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03-03-2019, 05:09 PM | #8 |
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Boooooy u ugly asf, pockets stuck in a rut, chicks rarely exchange w/ this fake
If a bitch saw ‘Dyn & dashed’...it’s cos she knew one way or another she’d pay for the date Shit is insane...No games, surround em w/ lasers & follow it up w/ 5 claps This ain’t Galaga, once ur beamed up there’s no chance of u gettin ur life back The old me showed mercy, now if a spirit needs to be lifted I’m the 1st one they call We all go through a phase...but when I’m finished he’ll be able to do it through walls Speak when spoken too nigga, make a peep & u’ll meet ur maker overnight Blast em twice! If u venture souls gonna journey waaaaay beyond the afterlife Dawg r u drunk? Clown ur hospital bound if u thought u could fuck w/ me Clutch & squeeze! Think AA, he’ll be hesitant to pick the cans up after recovery I pull strings in the hood, 1 phone call & he’ll be on a mission up to God If he pulls strings in the hood...i bet my life he’s hiding headphones on the job I’m the people’s champ, the stadium’ll fill up just to see this dudes skull leakin You can’t beat this! Dawg I’ll slam a bow above ya head like it’s all star weekend Act out im gettin direct..Whateva gang u claim take 1 for the set When one strap suspend from the shoulder like Ralph Breaks The Internet Subtract the loose ends, they will have to carry one--im reducing God when i shoot this 'Iron in Vain', it aint a shot giving Infusions The guns stay wit Victor, that mean silencer i keep it on the Hush Extendo i drop the shit--then start shaking the handle more then a courtesy flush See u & ya bitch, damn! What i got by deceit...u'll think im pulling a scam Chopper skyview the street--I get live, it aint the news covering a Traffic Jam What u sale corrupt, proper with ya gunbars, wwe kno u aint tough enough Shots turn a shirt inside out, then i leave u hanging by the tag like OfferUp Drastic! If it's static, I can pay your old bitch the extra taxes Beam, I let ya X-ray your insides...she givin study for a MRI in Practice On the fence about vain and gut feeling but they weren't as hot as the rest of all these Man this is close as fuck. I went back and forth on a few bars and could see either one taking it but I just wound up with one more quote from Ryno. Why all these wreckit Ralph bars lately though? For real, good shit, this is a season highlight but I got bash by a nose Ryno |
03-03-2019, 10:40 PM | #9 |
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Dyn&dash - played on him Bulldog - not feelin Galaga - nice Phase thru walls - good I liked this Sauls afterlife - not feelin AA - alright Strings in the hood - lmaooooo this was dope I loved it All star weekend - this was pretty cool That culture - nah miss Tesla - nah didn’t like, execution/wording Vs Ralph - had to look this one up, nice line Iron in vain - a bit wordy, decent Courtney flush - had to look this up too lol was creative and good Rastafarian - I liked the setup better than the second line, meh Traffic jam - this was ok Modern weaving - ok again Suicide prevention - a miss for me Offer up - dopeeee Gut feeling - wasn’t feelin it X-ray - Decent Sorry for the brief breakdowns but I wanted to hurry up and get my vote in before nazis closed the battle. Ryno had my favorite hits here but nore misses than dyna, also dyna had more of a consistent verse. Vote DynamiCz |
03-04-2019, 04:30 AM | #10 |
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Boooooy u ugly asf, pockets stuck in a rut, chicks rarely exchange w/ this fake
If a bitch saw ‘Dyn & dashed’...it’s cos she knew one way or another she’d pay for the date Heh cool. Flipped well. It’s a storm comin if I’m dumpin, either get out the way or ur ass gettin slayed Sprayin this lame! The ‘bulldogs runnin through this square’ like they’re avoidin the rain Ehhh. The wp is OK but the flip is light. Shit is insane...No games, surround em w/ lasers & follow it up w/ 5 claps This ain’t Galaga, once ur beamed up there’s no chance of u gettin ur life back niiice. Really good. The old me showed mercy, now if a spirit needs to be lifted I’m the 1st one they call We all go through a phase...but when I’m finished he’ll be able to do it through walls Set up and worded well. Phase wp was done a lot many years ago but I haven't seen for a while, combined with the wording this was cool Speak when spoken too nigga, make a peep & u’ll meet ur maker overnight Blast em twice! If u venture souls gonna journey waaaaay beyond the afterlife Not bad Dawg r u drunk? Clown ur hospital bound if u thought u could fuck w/ me Clutch & squeeze! Think AA, he’ll be hesitant to pick the cans up after recovery Feel like this should be played but I don't recall it, it was fresh to me and was a good line. Worded well again. Nice multis on this one too - better than previous bars, good job. I pull strings in the hood, 1 phone call & he’ll be on a mission up to God If he pulls strings in the hood...i bet my life he’s hiding headphones on the job Creative. I'd probably call them 'cords' rather than 'strings' but eh, it was a fresh idea, not bad. I’m the people’s champ, the stadium’ll fill up just to see this dudes skull leakin You can’t beat this! Dawg I’ll slam a bow above ya head like it’s all star weekend I don't get this. Google didn't help me. Text ain’t dead, these old heads swarmin threads like some vultures I’ll prove I’m no poser! Bitch I’ve got enough gunplay to shift you AND ‘Tha Culture’ Nah too simple. Nothingish. Attack/gunplay bars need a good wordplay or hard punch or at least a slick rhyme scheme or something Kill it squirt, ya raps r dirt & the big names leavin ya verses merked Fuckin twerp! Ur the Tesla of text, u BARELY get recognition for ya ‘current work’ Ehhh nah. Maybe if you'd set it up like "My bars get quoted from years ago..." Act out im gettin direct..Whateva gang u claim take 1 for the set When one strap suspend from the shoulder like Ralph Breaks The Internet Eh. The only part with a double meaning is "strap". Needed a harsher/punchier flip than a "like..." Subtract the loose ends, they will have to carry one--im reducing God when i shoot this 'Iron in Vain', it aint a shot giving Infusions 'shot' and 'vein/vain' wp are pretty played. Iron/nutrient is fresher. The way you combined it all made the wp OK to me but the flip is light and this could've been set up/worded better. You're saying you're shooting in vain (i.e. without success) The guns stay wit Victor, that mean silencer i keep it on the Hush Extendo i drop the shit--then start shaking the handle more then a courtesy flush LMAO. Good here. Like this. New clip long as a dreadlock--quit the pretend or we find whatever bar he in The can i bust stay smoking, the wrong movement they better hope Rastafarian Not bad. can-I-bus'/canabis is a bit of a reach phonetically See u & ya bitch, damn! What i got by deceit...u'll think im pulling a scam Chopper skyview the street--I get live, it aint the news covering a Traffic Jam Nice! this is good. I like the set up wp too. A funeral the only way u leaving..black hurse extend for them to grieve in From the right angle, u get ya fabric threaded with the needle like Modern Weaving Nah. I can't fathom "fabric threaded with the needle" being used in any context besides weaving. To mention..Week 3 spoke u wanted Dy now, they should have paid it attention Now im slicing at a risk, they thinking im the one ask for Suicide Prevention Nah. Risk/wrist doesn't work at all for me. "you wanted Dy/Suicide" was OKish What u sale corrupt, proper with ya gunbars, wwe kno u aint tough enough Shots turn a shirt inside out, then i leave u hanging by the tag like OfferUp Leave you hanging by the tag/OfferUp was cool. Set could've been better - how could shots turn a shirt inside out? You would've done better to abandon this as a gunbar and just say you'd grab his shirt and pin him up. The main elements of the bar are fine, it's still a cool, just could've easily been made better I think U kno my temperpedic...a mattress never felt too appealing When the peaceful in your stomach, it can leave u with a inside gut feeling Hmmmm had potential but not quite. "Peaceful" isn't really addressed in your flip... maybe something like "Peaceful in your stomach, but you gonna be feeling nauseous" Drastic! If it's static, I can pay your old bitch the extra taxes Beam, I let ya X-ray your insides...she givin study for a MRI in Practice Liked the ex-ray idea. Not bad. Well this is unhelpful asf but I gotta give it to Ryno. Sorry mods. Dyna had traffic jam and courtesy flush that were dope vs the only really heavy one from Ry being Galaga, but 2 vs 1 big hits doesn't outweigh that Ryno's wp was generally worded better all throughout - that's a big one for me. V/ Ryno
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03-04-2019, 08:11 AM | #11 |
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03-04-2019, 10:28 AM | #13 |
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Phase AA String Ralph Courtesy Flush Suicide Risk Offerup I'm swinging it Ry's way...I think he had the better highs and wording was better overall. Dy had some good stuff & was probably more original which made it close imo but some things came off s&f here & there.. V Ryno |
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