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Tell this junkie he isn't clever, give u a dose of reality u haven’t seen in forever The way he’s gettin tortured by a pig.. they’ll need jigsaw to put the pieces together You think u hard now? Calm down. step off the stage - ur gettin tossed out I’ll have the steel in ur face w two blades on ya back.. let’s see if u Kabal now I got a pump for u & ya thot. U won’t know what to do when it pop Either ur gettin cooked by the heat.. or I’m raisin on ur girl like a Sunmaid box Is u a dummy? U stole Jabs swag n thought it was on the money Soon as we saw u Jack Black style we knew u were just actin’ funny You dickridin’ vets r the worst. He’ll put on the jets wen the fire burst First I’ll aim it at ya back, then im leavin’ a 40 in the disc like a Bayou verse So this is your hero? Tell ol’ Dudley do right I’m slidin on his bitch fast It’ll be the long nose.. holdin ur girl hostage on the metal like Snidely Whiplash If y’all thought he was poppin shit.. u’ll change ur mind wen I put a stop to it soon as you try releasing a Dummy, Boy you’re endin’ up in prison like Tekashi did Last edited by bleak; 02-15-2019 at 02:09 AM. |
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He bit tsu surf lines, I see u browsin.. other rhymes is what he be downin.. Z be scroungin.. his verses have that meltdown and cop look that can rival the t1000 Listen here Clefanie I’m seriously sick of your shit thinkin ur bitten disses will hit.. what u spittin aint lit, lookin like u came straight outta 8 mile with that lip as lickety split. You aint standing tall. Think evolution as the revolver spray and i land it allll.. this man’ll crawl.. so when u see the Cro Mag rise it’ll be the end of this neandrethal. Res is gon give YOU the business, leave u bruised cuz this 1-2 is rude & vicious.. im leavin dude in stitches.. sock you into next week like you were really fuckinn superstitious. ur a nerd that’s wack.. so while u say u grippn steel we kno u aint hurlin macs.. it’s a disturbing fact.. ur just a clown out of cannons & we all can see the circus act. Get popped and shamed, ya whole block of lames are gettin rocked & maimed.. shotgun to the chest.. see ya ticker sweep across the room like we were at the stock exchange. yes i’m THAT dude, ur a fuckin twat.. whoever said u the man just lied bitch.. i’m a baaaaad MF.. your a bad M/F too cuz u dont know what gender u want to identify with. Mahfucka. . . .
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The way he’s gettin tortured by a pig.. they’ll need jigsaw to put the pieces together ...decent, u say pig u auto think cop but k... You think u hard now? Calm down. step off the stage - ur gettin tossed out I’ll have the steel in ur face w two blades on ya back.. let’s see if u Kabal now ...seen similar, not bad... I got a pump for u & ya thot. U won’t know what to do when it pop Either ur gettin cooked by the heat.. or I’m raisin on ur girl like a Sunmaid box ...good bar till the flip which isnt bar but it's just childish. Cant fault it tho cuz it works... Is u a dummy? U stole Jabs swag n thought it was on the money Soon as we saw u Jack Black style we knew u were just actin’ funny ...good, better flip woulda made it dope... You dickridin’ vets r the worst. He’ll put on the jets wen the fire burst First I’ll aim it at ya back, then im leavin’ a 40 in the disc like a Bayou verse ...cool... So this is your hero? Tell ol’ Dudley do right I’m slidin on his bitch fast It’ll be the long nose.. holdin ur girl hostage on the metal like Snidely Whiplash ...I'm missing something.... If y’all thought he was poppin shit.. u’ll change ur mind wen I put a stop to it soon as you try releasing a Dummy, Boy you’re endin’ up in prison like Tekashi did ...ok... Vs Aiyyo He bit tsu surf lines, I see u browsin.. other rhymes is what he be downin.. Z be scroungin.. his verses have that meltdown and cop look that can rival the t1000 ...overworded but good... Listen here Clefanie I’m seriously sick of your shit thinkin ur bitten disses will hit.. what u spittin aint lit, lookin like u came straight outta 8 mile with that lip as lickety split. ...lol... You aint standing tall. Think evolution as the revolver spray and i land it allll.. this man’ll crawl.. so when u see the Cro Mag rise it’ll be the end of this neandrethal. ...good... Res is gon give YOU the business, leave u bruised cuz this 1-2 is rude & vicious.. im leavin dude in stitches.. sock you into next week like you were really fuckinn superstitious. ...fire... ur a nerd that’s wack.. so while u say u grippn steel we kno u aint hurlin macs.. it’s a disturbing fact.. ur just a clown out of cannons & we all can see the circus act. ...ehh, structurally good just not my steez I guess. No miss tho... Get popped and shamed, ya whole block of lames are gettin rocked & maimed.. shotgun to the chest.. see ya ticker sweep across the room like we were at the stock exchange. ...fire... yes i’m THAT dude, ur a fuckin twat.. whoever said u the man just lied bitch.. i’m a baaaaad MF.. your a bad M/F too cuz u dont know what gender u want to identify with. ...lol... Mahfucka. Overall: zelph had a good verse, he just got out barred here. Resin had consistency with some dope lines thrown in. Easy call V. Resin |
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Tell this junkie he isn't clever, give u a dose of reality u haven’t seen in forever
The way he’s gettin tortured by a pig.. they’ll need jigsaw to put the pieces together (Ok opener but self-bragging what you're gonna do is nt the best way to start - sophomoric.) You think u hard now? Calm down. step off the stage - ur gettin tossed out I’ll have the steel in ur face w two blades on ya back.. let’s see if u Kabal now (I liked this but it's ok) I got a pump for u & ya thot. U won’t know what to do when it pop Either ur gettin cooked by the heat.. or I’m raisin on ur girl like a Sunmaid box ( raisin box, nah.needed reworking) Is u a dummy? U stole Jabs swag n thought it was on the money Soon as we saw u Jack Black style we knew u were just actin’ funny (I don't think he did. tbh resin was doing gunbars since that rmbva site tourney) You dickridin’ vets r the worst. He’ll put on the jets wen the fire burst First I’ll aim it at ya back, then im leavin’ a 40 in the disc like a Bayou verse (Cool, glad we got a disc punch that was a gunbar lol smhh) So this is your hero? Tell ol’ Dudley do right I’m slidin on his bitch fast It’ll be the long nose.. holdin ur girl hostage on the metal like Snidely Whiplash (I didn't fk with this one..but I'm sure it's ok If y’all thought he was poppin shit.. u’ll change ur mind wen I put a stop to it soon as you try releasing a Dummy, Boy you’re endin’ up in prison like Tekashi did (eh) vs Aiyyo He bit tsu surf lines, I see u browsin.. other rhymes is what he be downin.. Z be scroungin.. his verses have that meltdown and cop look that can rival the t1000 (I saw this and thought you could've made it a diss to him being a cop, cool line tho) Listen here Clefanie I’m seriously sick of your shit thinkin ur bitten disses will hit.. what u spittin aint lit, lookin like u came straight outta 8 mile with that lip as lickety split. (funny, not bad to me.. cool swag) You aint standing tall. Think evolution as the revolver spray and i land it allll.. this man’ll crawl.. so when u see the Cro Mag rise it’ll be the end of this neandrethal. (creative here, I've seen similar but not like this) Res is gon give YOU the business, leave u bruised cuz this 1-2 is rude & vicious.. im leavin dude in stitches.. sock you into next week like you were really fuckinn superstitious. (straight, this was good) ur a nerd that’s wack.. so while u say u grippn steel we kno u aint hurlin macs.. it’s a disturbing fact.. ur just a clown out of cannons & we all can see the circus act. (worded well but boring concept imo) Get popped and shamed, ya whole block of lames are gettin rocked & maimed.. shotgun to the chest.. see ya ticker sweep across the room like we were at the stock exchange. (this was cool) yes i’m THAT dude, ur a fuckin twat.. whoever said u the man just lied bitch.. i’m a baaaaad MF.. your a bad M/F too cuz u dont know what gender u want to identify with. (not bad) Mahfucka. vote resin, zelph couldn't keep up and it showed the difference in experience between the two writers.. |
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Tell this junkie he isn't clever, give u a dose of reality u haven’t seen in forever
The way he’s gettin tortured by a pig.. they’ll need jigsaw to put the pieces together I got a pump for u & ya thot. U won’t know what to do when it pop Either ur gettin cooked by the heat.. or I’m raisin on ur girl like a Sunmaid box Is u a dummy? U stole Jabs swag n thought it was on the money Soon as we saw u Jack Black style we knew u were just actin’ funny You dickridin’ vets r the worst. He’ll put on the jets wen the fire burst First I’ll aim it at ya back, then im leavin’ a 40 in the disc like a Bayou verse So this is your hero? Tell ol’ Dudley do right I’m slidin on his bitch fast It’ll be the long nose.. holdin ur girl hostage on the metal like Snidely Whiplash He bit tsu surf lines, I see u browsin.. other rhymes is what he be downin.. Z be scroungin.. his verses have that meltdown and cop look that can rival the t1000 You aint standing tall. Think evolution as the revolver spray and i land it allll.. this man’ll crawl.. so when u see the Cro Mag rise it’ll be the end of this neandrethal. ur a nerd that’s wack.. so while u say u grippn steel we kno u aint hurlin macs.. it’s a disturbing fact.. ur just a clown out of cannons & we all can see the circus act. Get popped and shamed, ya whole block of lames are gettin rocked & maimed.. shotgun to the chest.. see ya ticker sweep across the room like we were at the stock exchange. cool shit, I got Zunto with an extra punch tho Zunto |
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Tell this junkie he isn't clever, give u a dose of reality u haven’t seen in forever
The way he’s gettin tortured by a pig.. they’ll need jigsaw to put the pieces together pretty cool You think u hard now? Calm down. step off the stage - ur gettin tossed out I’ll have the steel in ur face w two blades on ya back.. let’s see if u Kabal now ok I got a pump for u & ya thot. U won’t know what to do when it pop Either ur gettin cooked by the heat.. or I’m raisin on ur girl like a Sunmaid box cool concept did not enjoy the wording Is u a dummy? U stole Jabs swag n thought it was on the money Soon as we saw u Jack Black style we knew u were just actin’ funny dece You dickridin’ vets r the worst. He’ll put on the jets wen the fire burst First I’ll aim it at ya back, then im leavin’ a 40 in the disc like a Bayou verse lolz coo So this is your hero? Tell ol’ Dudley do right I’m slidin on his bitch fast It’ll be the long nose.. holdin ur girl hostage on the metal like Snidely Whiplash mehhh ok If y’all thought he was poppin shit.. u’ll change ur mind wen I put a stop to it soon as you try releasing a Dummy, Boy you’re endin’ up in prison like Tekashi did not feeling .. He bit tsu surf lines, I see u browsin.. other rhymes is what he be downin.. Z be scroungin.. his verses have that meltdown and cop look that can rival the t1000 weird punch/wording but it's ok Listen here Clefanie I’m seriously sick of your shit thinkin ur bitten disses will hit.. what u spittin aint lit, lookin like u came straight outta 8 mile with that lip as lickety split. did not enjoy You aint standing tall. Think evolution as the revolver spray and i land it allll.. this man’ll crawl.. so when u see the Cro Mag rise it’ll be the end of this neandrethal. lolz ok Res is gon give YOU the business, leave u bruised cuz this 1-2 is rude & vicious.. im leavin dude in stitches.. sock you into next week like you were really fuckinn superstitious. cool ur a nerd that’s wack.. so while u say u grippn steel we kno u aint hurlin macs.. it’s a disturbing fact.. ur just a clown out of cannons & we all can see the circus act. once again i'm not enjoying because of the actual punch. ur saying he's out of guns & the connection is also not very hard hitting. Get popped and shamed, ya whole block of lames are gettin rocked & maimed.. shotgun to the chest.. see ya ticker sweep across the room like we were at the stock exchange. the concept is good, the wording is ok yes i’m THAT dude, ur a fuckin twat.. whoever said u the man just lied bitch.. i’m a baaaaad MF.. your a bad M/F too cuz u dont know what gender u want to identify with. this concept is very dope and i actually enjoyed the wording, by far ur best bar imo and could be lotb .. Not sure if it's a style difference but I really like Zuntos style better. I think both clearly understand how to come with good concepts but Zuntos wording/connections are just more polished to me. I really don't like resins style as much although he obviously knows what he's doing. Resin could have had LOTB for me with his last bar but it just wasn't enough to change my mind in the end for the overall winner. v/ Zunto |
02-18-2019, 08:25 AM | #13 |
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Z had some good bars but where he missed it was a total miss. Resin lost me on one or two bars in middle but I could at least see the direction enough to get the inkling of a hit I was missing. If that makes sense. Either way felt resins hits were alot more harsher and were worded crisp. Close battle in terms of quotes but like I said. Resins quality of hits were better as were his misses
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02-18-2019, 10:34 AM | #14 |
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The way he’s gettin tortured by a pig.. they’ll need jigsaw to put the pieces together nice hit You think u hard now? Calm down. step off the stage - ur gettin tossed out I’ll have the steel in ur face w two blades on ya back.. let’s see if u Kabal now good again I got a pump for u & ya thot. U won’t know what to do when it pop Either ur gettin cooked by the heat.. or I’m raisin on ur girl like a Sunmaid box this is cool, i like it Is u a dummy? U stole Jabs swag n thought it was on the money Soon as we saw u Jack Black style we knew u were just actin’ funny could've been better You dickridin’ vets r the worst. He’ll put on the jets wen the fire burst First I’ll aim it at ya back, then im leavin’ a 40 in the disc like a Bayou verse dope So this is your hero? Tell ol’ Dudley do right I’m slidin on his bitch fast It’ll be the long nose.. holdin ur girl hostage on the metal like Snidely Whiplash st8 If y’all thought he was poppin shit.. u’ll change ur mind wen I put a stop to it soon as you try releasing a Dummy, Boy you’re endin’ up in prison like Tekashi did again not bad but could've been better He bit tsu surf lines, I see u browsin.. other rhymes is what he be downin.. Z be scroungin.. his verses have that meltdown and cop look that can rival the t1000 too much popping...didn't like "cop look" Listen here Clefanie I’m seriously sick of your shit thinkin ur bitten disses will hit.. what u spittin aint lit, lookin like u came straight outta 8 mile with that lip as lickety split. nah You aint standing tall. Think evolution as the revolver spray and i land it allll.. this man’ll crawl.. so when u see the Cro Mag rise it’ll be the end of this neandrethal. coolish Res is gon give YOU the business, leave u bruised cuz this 1-2 is rude & vicious.. im leavin dude in stitches.. sock you into next week like you were really fuckinn superstitious. dope ur a nerd that’s wack.. so while u say u grippn steel we kno u aint hurlin macs.. it’s a disturbing fact.. ur just a clown out of cannons & we all can see the circus act. light Get popped and shamed, ya whole block of lames are gettin rocked & maimed.. shotgun to the chest.. see ya ticker sweep across the room like we were at the stock exchange. dope yes i’m THAT dude, ur a fuckin twat.. whoever said u the man just lied bitch.. i’m a baaaaad MF.. your a bad M/F too cuz u dont know what gender u want to identify with. good closer v. Z in a close battle. I liked 4 bars from each but I feel that I liked Z's misses more than Res. Dope battle fellas, this can swing either way. |
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Tell this junkie he isn't clever, give u a dose of reality u haven’t seen in forever
The way he’s gettin tortured by a pig.. they’ll need jigsaw to put the pieces together (Pretty good. Tortured by the pig not the craziest flip but solid. Crisp wording elevated this punch. Coulda used maybe one or 2 tie ins in the set up but as is, this is apunch landed) You think u hard now? Calm down. step off the stage - ur gettin tossed out I’ll have the steel in ur face w two blades on ya back.. let’s see if u Kabal now (Good line. My only critique with this line is I think if a gunbar/knifebar isn’t straightforward, you need to paint the scene in the set up. So in this punch - you only got two hands so you gotta pain the scene of how you got there. Anyways on the positive note, the flip itself was fire. Also you ended the punch well. I think it’s great writing when end the punch without leaning on the word like. The you kabal now isn’t a crazy flip or wordplay but it’s a very clever way to end the punch) I got a pump for u & ya thot. U won’t know what to do when it pop Either ur gettin cooked by the heat.. or I’m raisin on ur girl like a Sunmaid box (Similar feed as the first bar. Wording is crisp and precise. The flip is clean - not the craziest flip but still very solid. If I’d never I’d never seen a raisin flip this mighta hit heavier but as is, it’s a solid punch) Is u a dummy? U stole Jabs swag n thought it was on the money Soon as we saw u Jack Black style we knew u were just actin’ funny (Pretty good angle. It was used against him last week but still pretty fresh. I think the Jack Black style flip was nice. Ended the punch well. Overall good line) You dickridin’ vets r the worst. He’ll put on the jets wen the fire burst First I’ll aim it at ya back, then im leavin’ a 40 in the disc like a Bayou verse (Lmao we both leaving 40s I’m discs this week. This is dope though. The discussion/disc flip is clever af. The wording is very crisp. This was dope) So this is your hero? Tell ol’ Dudley do right I’m slidin on his bitch fast It’ll be the long nose.. holdin ur girl hostage on the metal like Snidely Whiplash (This was okay. The concept had a lot of potential but lacked execution a bit. This tour hero pretty good tie in. I followed you up to “it’ll be the long nose”. “Holding your girl hostage in the metal is where the execution fell apart a bit. I get the tie her to the train tracks/snidely whiplash meaning but are you saying you’re using a gun to hold her hostage what?) If y’all thought he was poppin shit.. u’ll change ur mind wen I put a stop to it soon as you try releasing a Dummy, Boy you’re endin’ up in prison like Tekashi did (Clean flip, this is pretty solid. Dummy boy flip was clean, but like a few of your earlier punches, just missing that extra “wow”/haymaker factor. Punch works since you’re a cop. Wording is crisp. Pretty good) Aiyyo He bit tsu surf lines, I see u browsin.. other rhymes is what he be downin.. Z be scroungin.. his verses have that meltdown and cop look that can rival the t1000 (Lol i think this went over heads cus this is pretty nice. You set the punch up very well with crisp wording. I think the meltdown and cop/t1000/steal a bar flip was clever af. That phrase “meltdown and cop look” doesn’t flip perfect both ways but it’s very close. This was a strong opener) Listen here Clefanie I’m seriously sick of your shit thinkin ur bitten disses will hit.. what u spittin aint lit, lookin like u came straight outta 8 mile with that lip as lickety split. (Clefanie got a chuckle outta me. But the lip as Lickety split kinda doesn’t work. Im assuming you’re saying his lip is split so it’s like “lickety” is just randomly in there to make the punch land. Your wording and flow prob saved this from being a complete miss but I’ll say it’s prob okay at best.) You aint standing tall. Think evolution as the revolver spray and i land it allll.. this man’ll crawl.. so when u see the Cro Mag rise it’ll be the end of this neandrethal. (I think standing tall is good tie in l. Man’ll crawl is another good tie in. Two problems with the punch: not sure what the second meaning (non cave man meaning) of cro mag is. Feels like you mean “the mag rise” but you have “cro” just hanging there with no double meaning. Then the fact that revolvers don’t have mags is the other issue. Had a lot of potential. The flow and wording makes it enjoyable to read but I’m not sure it works unless I’m just missing the punch) Res is gon give YOU the business, leave u bruised cuz this 1-2 is rude & vicious.. im leavin dude in stitches.. sock you into next week like you were really fuckinn superstitious. (I could be missing the bar here but ima give feed as if I’m correct in what I’m assuming. The rhyme scheme, flow, and wording all top notch - really makes it enjoyable to ready. I’m assuming sock you into next week is a punching/wearing a stitches sock overnight flip, right? If so the phrase “Sock you into next week” doesn’t flip perfectly but it’s pretty close. Pretty good overall) ur a nerd that’s wack.. so while u say u grippn steel we kno u aint hurlin macs.. it’s a disturbing fact.. ur just a clown out of cannons & we all can see the circus act. (Air tight wording again for almost the whole bar. I think when you get to the punch is where your wording is getting slightly sloppier. Specifically “just a clown out of the cannons” is perfect wording for the circus meaning of it, but it would be sloppy wording to describe the other ‘he’s a clown without the guns’ meaning. This held back a lot of your bars from being haymakers imo) Get popped and shamed, ya whole block of lames are gettin rocked & maimed.. shotgun to the chest.. see ya ticker sweep across the room like we were at the stock exchange. (Lol this is dope. Add in all my previous feed bout your wording being crisp lol. Didn’t know what ticker was heart before now but ay - can’t fault a good vocab. Clever flip) yes i’m THAT dude, ur a fuckin twat.. whoever said u the man just lied bitch.. i’m a baaaaad MF.. your a bad M/F too cuz u dont know what gender u want to identify with. (I like that you’re thinking outside of the box, but I think this is a stretch. It would only work if you aren’t reading the bar amount load. Then you got MF instead of MFer which was a slight stretch and “bar m/f too” which is another stretch. I like the idea but I didn’t care for the bar) So this was a dope battle to me. Straight punches - like I like - and turned out to be a straight barfest. This one is close to me because I got them both having success in different areas. For Zelph it was his consistency. Zelph didn’t miss a punch. Closest thing he had to a miss was the Sidney whiplash bar, and reviewing the battle, the critique I had for that bar (that the flip doesn’t work perfectly both ways) kinda plagues some of resins bars too. Resin, on the other hand had the higher highs. Zelph might have had lotb with the 40 in a disc bar but resin had 2 of the best 3 bars. That’s t1000 is elite writing. Then the stock exchange bar was a haymaker - shit was slick af. I think resin has really good wording in his set ups. I’m a fan of long bar, but I think his multis and in rhymes make that long bar style more palatable for the rest of the Netcees crowd. On that same note, I think zelphs execution and wording was elite here as well. Neither guy wasted as much as a syllable. I think wording was pretty equal, just zelph had short bars and resin had long ones - pretty equal though. As I alluded to earlier, I don’t think resin had the same level of consistency as zelph. He had a couple misses/okay but I also think he got a bit sloppy wit the wording in his punches towards the end of some of his punches (I noted them in my feed). I think this one comes down to how you judge one or two punches and if you prefer consistency to big moments. I think resin was ahead on big punches but not way ahead, whereas I think zelph had a solid margin in consistency. Good battle here. I went overboard with the breakdown to overcompensate for my lack of voting. Anyways mvgt zelph Good work fellas |
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02-18-2019, 02:24 PM | #17 |
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Tell this junkie he isn't clever, give u a dose of reality u haven’t seen in forever
The way he’s gettin tortured by a pig.. they’ll need jigsaw to put the pieces together Coo opener here! Jigsaw concept ok,seen it plenty of times tho You think u hard now? Calm down. step off the stage - ur gettin tossed out I’ll have the steel in ur face w two blades on ya back.. let’s see if u Kabal now Fiya hit right here I got a pump for u & ya thot. U won’t know what to do when it pop Either ur gettin cooked by the heat.. or I’m raisin on ur girl like a Sunmaid box This cool, kinda light/simple on the execution Is u a dummy? U stole Jabs swag n thought it was on the money Soon as we saw u Jack Black style we knew u were just actin’ funny Lol ok personal here You dickridin’ vets r the worst. He’ll put on the jets wen the fire burst First I’ll aim it at ya back, then im leavin’ a 40 in the disc like a Bayou verse Nice So this is your hero? Tell ol’ Dudley do right I’m slidin on his bitch fast It’ll be the long nose.. holdin ur girl hostage on the metal like Snidely Whiplash Didn't really like this one here If y’all thought he was poppin shit.. u’ll change ur mind wen I put a stop to it soon as you try releasing a Dummy, Boy you’re endin’ up in prison like Tekashi did Fiya closer here ___________ He bit tsu surf lines, I see u browsin.. other rhymes is what he be downin.. Z be scroungin.. his verses have that meltdown and cop look that can rival the t1000 This def went over heads, Good opener here Listen here Clefanie I’m seriously sick of your shit thinkin ur bitten disses will hit.. what u spittin aint lit, lookin like u came straight outta 8 mile with that lip as lickety split. Nice hit You aint standing tall. Think evolution as the revolver spray and i land it allll.. this man’ll crawl.. so when u see the Cro Mag rise it’ll be the end of this neanderthal. Ehhh, I couldn't really get with this one to much Res is gon give YOU the business, leave u bruised cuz this 1-2 is rude & vicious.. im leavin dude in stitches.. sock you into next week like you were really fuckinn superstitious. The idea is brilliant, but the wording here threw the whole punch off imo. The right wording would have made this a haymaker ur a nerd that’s wack.. so while u say u grippn steel we kno u aint hurlin macs.. it’s a disturbing fact.. ur just a clown out of cannons & we all can see the circus act. This is coo clown/cannon/circus act Get popped and shamed, ya whole block of lames are gettin rocked & maimed.. shotgun to the chest.. see ya ticker sweep across the room like we were at the stock exchange. Again here wording messed this up for what it could have been yes i’m THAT dude, ur a fuckin twat.. whoever said u the man just lied bitch.. i’m a baaaaad MF.. your a bad M/F too cuz u dont know what gender u want to identify with. Mahfucka. Ehhhh, I didn't feel the closer to much This was a good read on both ends here. Overall I think both started out with heat, where Zelph stayed more consistent with his hits. Resin started fiya but drifted off towards the middle. So I'm going to edge Z with this for better overall consistency and less misses on his end. V-Zelph |
02-18-2019, 02:41 PM | #18 |
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5-4 would like to close by 2, I think Blue bout to settle this
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02-18-2019, 02:41 PM | #19 |
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Tell this junkie he isn't clever, give u a dose of reality u haven’t seen in forever
The way he’s gettin tortured by a pig.. they’ll need jigsaw to put the pieces together cool concept, nice start You think u hard now? Calm down. step off the stage - ur gettin tossed out I’ll have the steel in ur face w two blades on ya back.. let’s see if u Kabal now fire... like the way this was worded I got a pump for u & ya thot. U won’t know what to do when it pop Either ur gettin cooked by the heat.. or I’m raisin on ur girl like a Sunmaid box nahh.. flipping the outdated raisin/raising wordplay into a loosely connected gunbar is mehh to me.. didnt like this one Is u a dummy? U stole Jabs swag n thought it was on the money Soon as we saw u Jack Black style we knew u were just actin’ funny nah, not only do i think this personal is forced...the idea's been done for "black" nameplays for a long time.. Body had a coolish one because he elevated it with the Jumaji play.. as is this was played and basic You dickridin’ vets r the worst. He’ll put on the jets wen the fire burst First I’ll aim it at ya back, then im leavin’ a 40 in the disc like a Bayou verse haha, good site punch.. this was nice So this is your hero? Tell ol’ Dudley do right I’m slidin on his bitch fast It’ll be the long nose.. holdin ur girl hostage on the metal like Snidely Whiplash had to look up.. creativity points here, meta is straight If y’all thought he was poppin shit.. u’ll change ur mind wen I put a stop to it soon as you try releasing a Dummy, Boy you’re endin’ up in prison like Tekashi did pretty decent, the concept is cool but the punch that ur gunna put him in jail is weak imo, especially for a closer He bit tsu surf lines, I see u browsin.. other rhymes is what he be downin.. Z be scroungin.. his verses have that meltdown and cop look that can rival the t1000 idea is fiiire, but the "and" for whatever reason really takes away the impact for me.. love the idea but feel this couldve been cleaned up Listen here Clefanie I’m seriously sick of your shit thinkin ur bitten disses will hit.. what u spittin aint lit, lookin like u came straight outta 8 mile with that lip as lickety split. lol @ Clefanie.. funny swag bar You aint standing tall. Think evolution as the revolver spray and i land it allll.. this man’ll crawl.. so when u see the Cro Mag rise it’ll be the end of this neandrethal. okay flip.. seen the idea taken on before tho.. dece Res is gon give YOU the business, leave u bruised cuz this 1-2 is rude & vicious.. im leavin dude in stitches.. sock you into next week like you were really fuckinn superstitious. lol dope.. nice fresh concept here ur a nerd that’s wack.. so while u say u grippn steel we kno u aint hurlin macs.. it’s a disturbing fact.. ur just a clown out of cannons & we all can see the circus act. pretty good for a you dont shoot guns concept.. personally havent seen the clown getting shot out of a cannon/circus trick idea before.. thought this was cool Get popped and shamed, ya whole block of lames are gettin rocked & maimed.. shotgun to the chest.. see ya ticker sweep across the room like we were at the stock exchange. fiire. dope concept yes i’m THAT dude, ur a fuckin twat.. whoever said u the man just lied bitch.. i’m a baaaaad MF.. your a bad M/F too cuz u dont know what gender u want to identify with. ehh, creative & a fresh concept... personally i just dont dig the M/F angle here and think its a reach.. like the thought process tho Overall this was a good battle.. Zelph's verse was cool & pretty consistent, Kabal and Bayou verse disc punches were great gun bars.. only a couple mehh bars imo, but they cost him & I've got Resin edging this on the whole, the ticker/stock exchange was lotb to me, and his highs were better.. i like how he took diff angles a little better then a strictly attack line/gun bar champ match verse.. but maybe that's just me.. props to both Vote - Resin
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