Cred vs Ruck {Cred wins}

Ruck · 08-11-2015, 07:56 AM

4 or 5 bars due 24 hours from check in?

let me know if you wanna change anything.

Ruck · 08-11-2015, 09:21 AM

I’m at your throat with a knife - bet you wanna battle because i didn’t vote for you right?
Rock up to the battle with an armoury of exotic weapons, Cred probably try forum post in a fight

Look...
don’t care who’s home, ravage the fam, your dearest loved one looking two tone
ironic that - only took "10 lines, that’s it, that’s all” will be engraved on his tombstone
write with brute force, he’ll start to dread that every time Ruck’s lead clap
fool is reppin’ Suicide Squad.. is that your crews name or an online death pact?
soo many of these writers blast - Ruck’s sorry for these abused and endangered weapons
why is it that Cred doesn’t Cheque in only Cash - is he confused about payments methods?
It’s tragic but everyone can get these bars for free - i don’t descriminate on weak faggots
he got the backing of a major crew but can’t release anything noteworthy - those memphis bleek habits
Ruck's aka is Death Distillery.. good writers? nah this place seems like a dead facility
read a few verses and honestly feel like his bars are all lies, i'm worried about Creds-ability.

something light.

Cred · 08-11-2015, 11:14 AM

LET ME TALK MY SHIT!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vulgar

What's good man. This site has some high level text battlers, very different from RF's style though. I would give it a shot and don't try to conform to the "style" of the site. lol we might've been tag champs, I can't remember that.

dog u won't get far. this site is of elite txt n u suck wit bars
cus u champin sumthin is a Vulgar statement.. wen the guy dnt know who the fuck u are!
for actin like a tough guy chainsaw to ur midsection or the shotty 'll blast
u a gangsta now? well RU?! ironically thats how they'll find u, chopped in half!
this a home invasion. my goons at ya door wen them orders get sent
send u skydiving. everybody 'll see u thru that window like a sign that says ur apartments for rent
Hustle gang marchin thru ya block. if u see the semis wit beams, duck
my tribe full a cherokee's that 'll leave u in the street like a 2015 truck
bitch i don't PLAY! bullets dismember ya body wen i'm blastin
they'll think this is some Sort a game.. wen they're pickin ur body parts thru trash bins

Pastor Troy · 08-14-2015, 10:42 AM

Ruck:

opener was ok. suicide squad could have been a hit if it was done better, Writers blast was ok, forced thou, couldn't get the 4th. closer was played.

Cred:

Had like 1 or two generic lines that were hits.

this really wasnt a good battle. didnt enjoy much from either sides.

but guess cred took the W

Hush · 08-16-2015, 07:47 PM

1-0 Cred

Hush · 08-20-2015, 04:32 PM

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Sharp · 08-20-2015, 05:19 PM

[QUOTE=Ruck;518717]I’m at your throat with a knife - bet you wanna battle because i didn’t vote for you right?
Rock up to the battle with an armoury of exotic weapons, Cred probably try forum post in a fight
is this an extra bar? I'm not gonna count it

Look...
don’t care who’s home, ravage the fam, your dearest loved one looking two tone
ironic that - only took "10 lines, that’s it, that’s all” will be engraved on his tombstone
I'm either missing something or it's just awkwardly worded
write with brute force, he’ll start to dread that every time Ruck’s lead clap
fool is reppin’ Suicide Squad.. is that your crews name or an online death pact?
pretty basic and we've seen a lot of suicide squad bars lately
soo many of these writers blast - Ruck’s sorry for these abused and endangered weapons
why is it that Cred doesn’t Cheque in only Cash - is he confused about payments methods?
Cool idea but cred/credit bars are done a lot on the dude
It’s tragic but everyone can get these bars for free - i don’t descriminate on weak faggots
he got the backing of a major crew but can’t release anything noteworthy - those memphis bleek habits
ok
Ruck's aka is Death Distillery.. good writers? nah this place seems like a dead facility
read a few verses and honestly feel like his bars are all lies, i'm worried about Creds-ability.
like cred-ability? Why not just say 'credability'?

dog u won't get far. this site is of elite txt n u suck wit bars
cus u champin sumthin is a Vulgar statement.. wen the guy dnt know who the fuck u are!
Vulgar lines like that are done a lot
for actin like a tough guy chainsaw to ur midsection or the shotty 'll blast
u a gangsta now? well RU?! ironically thats how they'll find u, chopped in half!
ok concept but imo the punchline could be more cohesive
this a home invasion. my goons at ya door wen them orders get sent
send u skydiving. everybody 'll see u thru that window like a sign that says ur apartments for rent
cool
Hustle gang marchin thru ya block. if u see the semis wit beams, duck
my tribe full a cherokee's that 'll leave u in the street like a 2015 truck
really basic
bitch i don't PLAY! bullets dismember ya body wen i'm blastin
they'll think this is some Sort a game.. wen they're pickin ur body parts thru trash bins
sort of/sorter? meeeh

cool, light stuff from both guys imo. Thought cred edged it with skydiving being lotb. That said I thought Ruck's delivery was a lot more interesting, he coulda got it with less played out ideas. Reminds me of fraze back when he got back into text (which is a good thing). Wanna see more from him but Cred edges it

v/cred

Lotto Smirk · 08-20-2015, 05:19 PM

This wasn't the best verse I've seen from cred everything seemed more streched than normal still did enough to get this tho with 2 or 3 nice hits
Ruck you got some ideas but think into being more harsher.

V/ Cred

JShazo · 08-20-2015, 05:27 PM

Slight edge to cred.

sral · 08-20-2015, 05:45 PM

I thought I voted on this already?

Regardless, this is like the third Ruck battle I've voted against him on. I'm not a great fan of his style, it seems outdated now with the whole RF steez and format.

The intro / outro ish needs to go. He obv isn't taking my advice onboard, though, I hated the RU line from cred, never been a fan of those half-a-name shits. It's weak to me unless done exceptionally well, which is rare.

Cred got this.

Witty · 08-20-2015, 06:08 PM

don’t care who’s home, ravage the fam, your dearest loved one looking two tone
ironic that - only took "10 lines, that’s it, that’s all” will be engraved on his tombstone
I don't really get this tbh
write with brute force, he’ll start to dread that every time Ruck’s lead clap
fool is reppin’ Suicide Squad.. is that your crews name or an online death pact?
More of a question than a diss...not terrible tho
soo many of these writers blast - Ruck’s sorry for these abused and endangered weapons
why is it that Cred doesn’t Cheque in only Cash - is he confused about payments methods?
Your best bar so fr but a little played
It’s tragic but everyone can get these bars for free - i don’t descriminate on weak faggots
he got the backing of a major crew but can’t release anything noteworthy - those memphis bleek habits
this was cool
Ruck's aka is Death Distillery.. good writers? nah this place seems like a dead facility
read a few verses and honestly feel like his bars are all lies, i'm worried about Creds-ability.
Nah, too obvious and the nameplay felt forced

vs

dog u won't get far. this site is of elite txt n u suck wit bars
cus u champin sumthin is a Vulgar statement.. wen the guy dnt know who the fuck u are!
cool idea, awkward wording and a little played but not bad
for actin like a tough guy chainsaw to ur midsection or the shotty 'll blast
u a gangsta now? well RU?! ironically thats how they'll find u, chopped in half!
I liked this
this a home invasion. my goons at ya door wen them orders get sent
send u skydiving. everybody 'll see u thru that window like a sign that says ur apartments for rent
nah
Hustle gang marchin thru ya block. if u see the semis wit beams, duck
my tribe full a cherokee's that 'll leave u in the street like a 2015 truck
ehh, not bad but not great either
bitch i don't PLAY! bullets dismember ya body wen i'm blastin
they'll think this is some Sort a game.. wen they're pickin ur body parts thru trash bins
This could have been cool, but it felt quite forced

Ruck had a cool flow and his wording was on point but his punches missed big time, they were either too basic or too played, he had that memphis bleek bar that I liked, but even that was just a light jab ...Cred probably came weaker than I've ever seen from him tbh but he had one dope bar, and the rest weren't complete misses, but light tho...still did enough for the W tho.

Vote - Cred

08-11-2015, 07:56 AM	#1
Ruck that's not me. Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 47 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 3436001	Cred vs Ruck {Cred wins} 4 or 5 bars due 24 hours from check in? let me know if you wanna change anything.

08-16-2015, 07:47 PM	#5
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	1-0 Cred __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

08-20-2015, 04:32 PM	#6
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	@Muff @Cred @Witty @Killing Spree @Bags @Zelphish @Unfukwitable @Havoc @Destroyer @Mr. J @Useless @iSpaz @Bash @Bust @Lotto Smirk @Chyeahhh!!! @Ace @Allen Knight @Sharp @ill nik-A @Sn00p @Knucklehead @fraze @Maximus @Orc @Alvin Karpis @King Karaoke @IAmRhetoric @Infiltration @Tic @Amen @jilti @Swerve @CtrlF4@joog @Greed @JShazo __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

08-20-2015, 05:45 PM	#10
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,255 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	I thought I voted on this already? Regardless, this is like the third Ruck battle I've voted against him on. I'm not a great fan of his style, it seems outdated now with the whole RF steez and format. The intro / outro ish needs to go. He obv isn't taking my advice onboard, though, I hated the RU line from cred, never been a fan of those half-a-name shits. It's weak to me unless done exceptionally well, which is rare. Cred got this. __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

08-20-2015, 06:08 PM	#11
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,794 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 82986458	don’t care who’s home, ravage the fam, your dearest loved one looking two tone ironic that - only took "10 lines, that’s it, that’s all” will be engraved on his tombstone I don't really get this tbh write with brute force, he’ll start to dread that every time Ruck’s lead clap fool is reppin’ Suicide Squad.. is that your crews name or an online death pact? More of a question than a diss...not terrible tho soo many of these writers blast - Ruck’s sorry for these abused and endangered weapons why is it that Cred doesn’t Cheque in only Cash - is he confused about payments methods? Your best bar so fr but a little played It’s tragic but everyone can get these bars for free - i don’t descriminate on weak faggots he got the backing of a major crew but can’t release anything noteworthy - those memphis bleek habits this was cool Ruck's aka is Death Distillery.. good writers? nah this place seems like a dead facility read a few verses and honestly feel like his bars are all lies, i'm worried about Creds-ability. Nah, too obvious and the nameplay felt forced vs dog u won't get far. this site is of elite txt n u suck wit bars cus u champin sumthin is a Vulgar statement.. wen the guy dnt know who the fuck u are! cool idea, awkward wording and a little played but not bad for actin like a tough guy chainsaw to ur midsection or the shotty 'll blast u a gangsta now? well RU?! ironically thats how they'll find u, chopped in half! I liked this this a home invasion. my goons at ya door wen them orders get sent send u skydiving. everybody 'll see u thru that window like a sign that says ur apartments for rent nah Hustle gang marchin thru ya block. if u see the semis wit beams, duck my tribe full a cherokee's that 'll leave u in the street like a 2015 truck ehh, not bad but not great either bitch i don't PLAY! bullets dismember ya body wen i'm blastin they'll think this is some Sort a game.. wen they're pickin ur body parts thru trash bins This could have been cool, but it felt quite forced Ruck had a cool flow and his wording was on point but his punches missed big time, they were either too basic or too played, he had that memphis bleek bar that I liked, but even that was just a light jab ...Cred probably came weaker than I've ever seen from him tbh but he had one dope bar, and the rest weren't complete misses, but light tho...still did enough for the W tho. Vote - Cred __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

08-11-2015, 09:21 AM	#2
Ruck that's not me. Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 47 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 3436001	I’m at your throat with a knife - bet you wanna battle because i didn’t vote for you right? Rock up to the battle with an armoury of exotic weapons, Cred probably try forum post in a fight Look... don’t care who’s home, ravage the fam, your dearest loved one looking two tone ironic that - only took "10 lines, that’s it, that’s all” will be engraved on his tombstone write with brute force, he’ll start to dread that every time Ruck’s lead clap fool is reppin’ Suicide Squad.. is that your crews name or an online death pact? soo many of these writers blast - Ruck’s sorry for these abused and endangered weapons why is it that Cred doesn’t Cheque in only Cash - is he confused about payments methods? It’s tragic but everyone can get these bars for free - i don’t descriminate on weak faggots he got the backing of a major crew but can’t release anything noteworthy - those memphis bleek habits Ruck's aka is Death Distillery.. good writers? nah this place seems like a dead facility read a few verses and honestly feel like his bars are all lies, i'm worried about Creds-ability. something light.

08-14-2015, 10:42 AM	#4
Pastor Troy Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 147 Rep Power: 0	Ruck: opener was ok. suicide squad could have been a hit if it was done better, Writers blast was ok, forced thou, couldn't get the 4th. closer was played. Cred: Had like 1 or two generic lines that were hits. this really wasnt a good battle. didnt enjoy much from either sides. but guess cred took the W

08-20-2015, 05:19 PM	#7
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	[QUOTE=Ruck;518717]I’m at your throat with a knife - bet you wanna battle because i didn’t vote for you right? Rock up to the battle with an armoury of exotic weapons, Cred probably try forum post in a fight is this an extra bar? I'm not gonna count it Look... don’t care who’s home, ravage the fam, your dearest loved one looking two tone ironic that - only took "10 lines, that’s it, that’s all” will be engraved on his tombstone I'm either missing something or it's just awkwardly worded write with brute force, he’ll start to dread that every time Ruck’s lead clap fool is reppin’ Suicide Squad.. is that your crews name or an online death pact? pretty basic and we've seen a lot of suicide squad bars lately soo many of these writers blast - Ruck’s sorry for these abused and endangered weapons why is it that Cred doesn’t Cheque in only Cash - is he confused about payments methods? Cool idea but cred/credit bars are done a lot on the dude It’s tragic but everyone can get these bars for free - i don’t descriminate on weak faggots he got the backing of a major crew but can’t release anything noteworthy - those memphis bleek habits ok Ruck's aka is Death Distillery.. good writers? nah this place seems like a dead facility read a few verses and honestly feel like his bars are all lies, i'm worried about Creds-ability. like cred-ability? Why not just say 'credability'? dog u won't get far. this site is of elite txt n u suck wit bars cus u champin sumthin is a Vulgar statement.. wen the guy dnt know who the fuck u are! Vulgar lines like that are done a lot for actin like a tough guy chainsaw to ur midsection or the shotty 'll blast u a gangsta now? well RU?! ironically thats how they'll find u, chopped in half! ok concept but imo the punchline could be more cohesive this a home invasion. my goons at ya door wen them orders get sent send u skydiving. everybody 'll see u thru that window like a sign that says ur apartments for rent cool Hustle gang marchin thru ya block. if u see the semis wit beams, duck my tribe full a cherokee's that 'll leave u in the street like a 2015 truck really basic bitch i don't PLAY! bullets dismember ya body wen i'm blastin they'll think this is some Sort a game.. wen they're pickin ur body parts thru trash bins sort of/sorter? meeeh cool, light stuff from both guys imo. Thought cred edged it with skydiving being lotb. That said I thought Ruck's delivery was a lot more interesting, he coulda got it with less played out ideas. Reminds me of fraze back when he got back into text (which is a good thing). Wanna see more from him but Cred edges it v/cred

08-20-2015, 05:19 PM	#8
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665829	This wasn't the best verse I've seen from cred everything seemed more streched than normal still did enough to get this tho with 2 or 3 nice hits Ruck you got some ideas but think into being more harsher. V/ Cred

08-20-2015, 05:27 PM	#9
JShazo Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 5-8 Rep Power: 11889025	Slight edge to cred.