Week 8 - Mordycai (0-0) vs. Clockwise (0-0) - MORDYCAI WINS VIA NS

Mike Wrecka · 11-11-2013, 09:36 AM

Season 2

Rules

Verse Due Date - Thursday 23:59 PST

Voting Deadline - Sunday 23:59 PST

Line Limits - 16 - 48 Max can be higher if both agree

Voting - Must vote on 3 battles and post voting links in this thread, preferably all in one post.

If you don't vote on 3 battle you will be given a loss. If you lose by votes and don't vote on other battles you receive a one week suspension.

Topic

Gravel Pit

Good Luck @Mordycai @Clockwise

Clockwise · 11-11-2013, 04:01 PM

dope topic.

timeless · 11-11-2013, 07:33 PM

yeah I dig it

timeless · 11-14-2013, 05:10 PM

Establishment : Gravel Pit

Cracks in the pavement bled roses with battered roots, that produce amazingly dead poses
A facade in time pours in old memories of dread yet she remains to step focused
One foot at a time she steps cautiously yet nautiously, she stops and pauses to see 'it'...
...'me', the incredible disturbance I am, sensed love for years yet it still costs to breathe it

Alone in the wind's drift, I gaze at my old home and people that I've been with
A reminisce of the past set in stone and its so regal how Ill miss it
Like when a ship sinks, memories so fond all lost in the deepest of the pacific
After I dissolve and crumble, I want her to solve the puzzle of my life, thatd be terrific
I had it all, the view, the hue I put off so electrifying she always had to stop and eye it
She would describe it to all her friends all wild like.."It's so inspiring, you cant deny it!"
Im gonna miss her a lot, I guess I was cursed this way, wish I could just put these words on page
Turn to a new day without ever learning her name and no concerns with the curtains she's raised
Her hair cast a burgundy flame, the whole family ashamed cuz she had no assertive gains..
..on life, and despite her going nowhere fast, love and care was her cash and no nerves in her frame
A hundred and one million shades of gray and black paved this wave of massive clouds in the sky
They pummelled their way overhead as a new arrival of depression was found surrounding my mind

Fall is here and winter soon...I miss the moon..
..that summer kept cuz darkness is all that's left
I fell to my fast death, let out my last breath
As soon as I landed...a thought awoke me
I realized that we werent meant to be, past tense
Cuz I'm just another fallen leaf on this oak tree

My structure is crumbling, nowhere to stand
Spare the sand and let my roots travel within
To find the gravel pit where out love begins
And it's something when we can't establish it
Enough rhyme and reason to unravel bliss
Yet I cant believe what I've been gathering
The type of information that matters when..
..the hourglass of life fades and static wins

Clockwise · 11-14-2013, 09:11 PM

need an ext, feel free to retract your verse and drop tomorrow.

timeless · 11-15-2013, 03:56 PM

So how long are all these extensions for? 24 hours? Holding everyone up, should just let em all sign back in for next week.

11-11-2013, 09:36 AM	#1
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,523 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779335	Week 8 - Mordycai (0-0) vs. Clockwise (0-0) - MORDYCAI WINS VIA NS Season 2 Rules Verse Due Date - Thursday 23:59 PST Voting Deadline - Sunday 23:59 PST Line Limits - 16 - 48 Max can be higher if both agree Voting - Must vote on 3 battles and post voting links in this thread, preferably all in one post. If you don't vote on 3 battle you will be given a loss. If you lose by votes and don't vote on other battles you receive a one week suspension. Topic Gravel Pit Good Luck @Mordycai @Clockwise __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

11-11-2013, 04:01 PM	#2
Clockwise Merc With A Mouth Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 54 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 0	dope topic.

11-11-2013, 07:33 PM	#3
timeless past tense Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: NJ Posts: 1,627 Battle Record: 22-39 Rep Power: 4341325	yeah I dig it

11-14-2013, 05:10 PM	#4
timeless past tense Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: NJ Posts: 1,627 Battle Record: 22-39 Rep Power: 4341325	Establishment : Gravel Pit Cracks in the pavement bled roses with battered roots, that produce amazingly dead poses A facade in time pours in old memories of dread yet she remains to step focused One foot at a time she steps cautiously yet nautiously, she stops and pauses to see 'it'... ...'me', the incredible disturbance I am, sensed love for years yet it still costs to breathe it Alone in the wind's drift, I gaze at my old home and people that I've been with A reminisce of the past set in stone and its so regal how Ill miss it Like when a ship sinks, memories so fond all lost in the deepest of the pacific After I dissolve and crumble, I want her to solve the puzzle of my life, thatd be terrific I had it all, the view, the hue I put off so electrifying she always had to stop and eye it She would describe it to all her friends all wild like.."It's so inspiring, you cant deny it!" Im gonna miss her a lot, I guess I was cursed this way, wish I could just put these words on page Turn to a new day without ever learning her name and no concerns with the curtains she's raised Her hair cast a burgundy flame, the whole family ashamed cuz she had no assertive gains.. ..on life, and despite her going nowhere fast, love and care was her cash and no nerves in her frame A hundred and one million shades of gray and black paved this wave of massive clouds in the sky They pummelled their way overhead as a new arrival of depression was found surrounding my mind Fall is here and winter soon...I miss the moon.. ..that summer kept cuz darkness is all that's left I fell to my fast death, let out my last breath As soon as I landed...a thought awoke me I realized that we werent meant to be, past tense Cuz I'm just another fallen leaf on this oak tree My structure is crumbling, nowhere to stand Spare the sand and let my roots travel within To find the gravel pit where out love begins And it's something when we can't establish it Enough rhyme and reason to unravel bliss Yet I cant believe what I've been gathering The type of information that matters when.. ..the hourglass of life fades and static wins

11-14-2013, 09:11 PM	#5
Clockwise Merc With A Mouth Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 54 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 0	need an ext, feel free to retract your verse and drop tomorrow.

11-15-2013, 03:56 PM	#6
timeless past tense Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: NJ Posts: 1,627 Battle Record: 22-39 Rep Power: 4341325	So how long are all these extensions for? 24 hours? Holding everyone up, should just let em all sign back in for next week.