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Old 05-21-2018, 02:48 PM   #1
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Old 05-21-2018, 06:56 PM   #2
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check @bleak how many?
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You a sailboat in a bathtub. 10 year mid tier, but I'M official
Titanic mass = no progress/only speaks to ur Capsized potential
Toss fat chicks around? I'm a lover so I'll slide w/ the steel, cousin
For matters of the Hart: roll on JB Smooooove like a Real Husband
1 for the money. 2 get tossed out if 3 g's want boss clout.
KILL u 4 respect only. They'll hit u w/ that 5... 5-6 like I lost count.
I'm from the boon, where dad jeans still get u merk'd
If u hit streets like a 40 something fgt w/ the Dad gene since birth.
I'ma bomb you for past sins. That vid was the wrong route
Ironic ur 'known from RapBattles' when clearly it's not ur strong suit.
Ur NC/RB Pastime. butttt not Great just a clueless hoe.
my Chi goons'll stomp u til White Sox r Black... they Shoeless, Joe!

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Old 05-25-2018, 05:14 PM   #5
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I'll smash ur fucking face in put an end to ur future endeavor
Once the blood Spilsbury it In the concrete,ur gonna be needing him to jigsaw it back together
ur a light feather compared to my weight comparison so if we fight it'll be embarrassing
If you decided on a gunwar, then ummmm? k come out you'll turn fag quicker than Mr Garrison
I'll go to wherever ur traveling rocketlaunch ur flight mid air
Soon as u Dinosaurs left as evidence, always carry tools in the box like Earl Sinclair
Better be aware of his surroundings my dawgs outside they blood hounding
I'll be somewhere equipped with two sharp blades,i move around better then Kurt Browning
Shook of the Glock sounding when I blast of in ur direction
My Aim Topps whatever shots u miss,ill just go inside the closet like its my baseball collection
You'll never in your life make a good impression, that's y ur bitch is fucking me and said deuces
During Orgasm she had a Big Burst u watched us both while drinking 50 cent juices

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@Incredible u can open this for votes thanks man
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You a sailboat in a bathtub. 10 year mid tier, but I'M official
Titanic mass = no progress/only speaks to ur Capsized potential
eh, ok
Toss fat chicks around? I'm a lover so I'll slide w/ the steel, cousin
For matters of the Hart: roll on JB Smooooove like a Real Husband
thought this could've hit harder, cool flip
1 for the money. 2 get tossed out if 3 g's want boss clout.
KILL u 4 respect only. They'll hit u w/ that 5... 5-6 like I lost count.
i don't know if this is good or not, but i fk w/ it
I'm from the boon, where dad jeans still get u merk'd
If u hit streets like a 40 something fgt w/ the Dad gene since birth.
wording made this awkward, coo concept tho
I'ma bomb you for past sins. That vid was the wrong route
Ironic ur 'known from RapBattles' when clearly it's not ur strong suit.
basic, light
Ur NC/RB Pastime. butttt not Great just a clueless hoe.
my Chi goons'll stomp u til White Sox r Black... they Shoeless, Joe!
kind of corny, just ok

I'll smash ur fucking face in put an end to ur future endeavor
Once the blood Spilsbury it In the concrete,ur gonna be needing him to jigsaw it back together
wasn't feeling this
ur a light feather compared to my weight comparison so if we fight it'll be embarrassing
If you decided on a gunwar, then ummmm? k come out you'll turn fag quicker than Mr Garrison
this is ok
I'll go to wherever ur traveling rocketlaunch ur flight mid air
Soon as u Dinosaurs left as evidence, always carry tools in the box like Earl Sinclair
the wp was coo, pretty obscure reference, the punch missed for me
Better be aware of his surroundings my dawgs outside they blood hounding
I'll be somewhere equipped with two sharp blades,i move around better then Kurt Browning
lol, a figure skater punch, iight.
Shook of the Glock sounding when I blast of in ur direction
My Aim Topps whatever shots u miss,ill just go inside the closet like its my baseball collection
na
You'll never in your life make a good impression, that's y ur bitch is fucking me and said deuces
During Orgasm she had a Big Burst u watched us both while drinking 50 cent juices
huh? 50 cent juices? didn't get it

Cool battle. I have bleak edging this here. His verse was just a little more entertaining for me. Honestly didn't know any of JB's references, even after looking them up the punches just came off a little light.

Props to both for showing

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Old 05-26-2018, 12:49 PM   #8
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You a sailboat in a bathtub. 10 year mid tier, but I'M official
Titanic mass = no progress/only speaks to ur Capsized potential
liked the concept, not the wording
Toss fat chicks around? I'm a lover so I'll slide w/ the steel, cousin
For matters of the Hart: roll on JB Smooooove like a Real Husband
I did a JB line on Jarbari week 1, this flip was meh
1 for the money. 2 get tossed out if 3 g's want boss clout.
KILL u 4 respect only. They'll hit u w/ that 5... 5-6 like I lost count.
lol what?
I'm from the boon, where dad jeans still get u merk'd
If u hit streets like a 40 something fgt w/ the Dad gene since birth.
st8, punch couldve been harder
I'ma bomb you for past sins. That vid was the wrong route
Ironic ur 'known from RapBattles' when clearly it's not ur strong suit.
meh personal
Ur NC/RB Pastime. butttt not Great just a clueless hoe.
my Chi goons'll stomp u til White Sox r Black... they Shoeless, Joe!
meh...had to look up shoeless joe, thanks for the history


I'll smash ur fucking face in put an end to ur future endeavor
Once the blood Spilsbury it In the concrete,ur gonna be needing him to jigsaw it back together
meh, couldve been dope with better wording
ur a light feather compared to my weight comparison so if we fight it'll be embarrassing
If you decided on a gunwar, then ummmm? k come out you'll turn fag quicker than Mr Garrison
meh
I'll go to wherever ur traveling rocketlaunch ur flight mid air
Soon as u Dinosaurs left as evidence, always carry tools in the box like Earl Sinclair
lol, st8...forgot about that show, lol
Better be aware of his surroundings my dawgs outside they blood hounding
I'll be somewhere equipped with two sharp blades,i move around better then Kurt Browning
nice line
Shook of the Glock sounding when I blast of in ur direction
My Aim Topps whatever shots u miss,ill just go inside the closet like its my baseball collection
st8
You'll never in your life make a good impression, that's y ur bitch is fucking me and said deuces
During Orgasm she had a Big Burst u watched us both while drinking 50 cent juices
feel like I'm miss something, was he watching you fuck his girl while he drank juice during the process?

Close battle boys....I got JB

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Old 05-26-2018, 03:55 PM   #9
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Bleak: After reareading ur opener I liked it more and more. This was solid . Coulda been harsher tho. Weak JB flip. Numbers line was hard actually. Dad gene was kinda weak . Decent personal . Wasn’t feeling the closer

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Joey: opener was hard. Wasn’t feeling the next 2 at all. Kurt browning was tight. Baseball card was worded badly. Wasn’t feeling the closer.

Overall: battle was kinda close. I have bleak tho, he had some pretty decent personals

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Old 05-26-2018, 04:09 PM   #10
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Concept there wording bad.
Toss fat chicks around? I'm a lover so I'll slide w/ the steel, cousin
For matters of the Hart: roll on JB Smooooove like a Real Husband
Not good.
1 for the money. 2 get tossed out if 3 g's want boss clout.
KILL u 4 respect only. They'll hit u w/ that 5... 5-6 like I lost count.
Nah... Not good.
I'm from the boon, where dad jeans still get u merk'd
If u hit streets like a 40 something fgt w/ the Dad gene since birth.
Meh - concept there execution was dumb light, tho.
I'ma bomb you for past sins. That vid was the wrong route
Ironic ur 'known from RapBattles' when clearly it's not ur strong suit.
Route isn't pronounced like root, bro lol. This was mad weak, tho.
Ur NC/RB Pastime. butttt not Great just a clueless hoe.
my Chi goons'll stomp u til White Sox r Black... they Shoeless, Joe!
Nah, concept there but again the execution/wording was bad.
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I'll smash ur fucking face in put an end to ur future endeavor
Once the blood Spilsbury it In the concrete,ur gonna be needing him to jigsaw it back together
Concept there, wording bad. Keep it simple, Joe.
ur a light feather compared to my weight comparison so if we fight it'll be embarrassing
If you decided on a gunwar, then ummmm? k come out you'll turn fag quicker than Mr Garrison
Not sure what you are talking about? Plus wording was atrocious again.
I'll go to wherever ur traveling rocketlaunch ur flight mid air
Soon as u Dinosaurs left as evidence, always carry tools in the box like Earl Sinclair
No.
Better be aware of his surroundings my dawgs outside they blood hounding
I'll be somewhere equipped with two sharp blades,i move around better then Kurt Browning
Diss your opponent dude. You said nothing here.
Shook of the Glock sounding when I blast of in ur direction
My Aim Topps whatever shots u miss,ill just go inside the closet like its my baseball collection
Lost me here. Topps/Top/Baseball Card plays are pretty dated but this was a cool attempt. Too bad your wording sucks.
You'll never in your life make a good impression, that's y ur bitch is fucking me and said deuces
During Orgasm she had a Big Burst u watched us both while drinking 50 cent juices
Wtf? LOL Joe, please... This was a cool attempt/concept but your execution was trash lol...
Both struggled hardcore here. Horrible wording from both. Both had some decent concepts but couldn't execute on them what so ever. If I had to go based off of preference I'd say bleak edges it barely? IDK... This was really close. But on first read, I got bleak with the SLIGHTEST as ever edge. JB had some obscure references which I do not google so w/e...

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Old 05-26-2018, 10:07 PM   #11
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You a sailboat in a bathtub. 10 year mid tier, but I'M official
Titanic mass = no progress/only speaks to ur Capsized potential

Nice opener

fat chicks around? I'm a lover so I'll slide w/ the steel, cousin
For matters of the Hart: roll on JB Smooooove like a Real Husband

Could have worded it a bit better, but ok

1 for the money. 2 get tossed out if 3 g's want boss clout.
KILL u 4 respect only. They'll hit u w/ that 5... 5-6 like I lost count.

Not feeling this one

I'm from the boon, where dad jeans still get u merk'd
If u hit streets like a 40 something fgt w/ the Dad gene since birth.

Huh?

I'ma bomb you for past sins. That vid was the wrong route
Ironic ur 'known from RapBattles' when clearly it's not ur strong suit.

I know it may be a pronunciation thing, but it don't rhyme the way I say it

Ur NC/RB Pastime. butttt not Great just a clueless hoe.
my Chi goons'll stomp u til White Sox r Black... they Shoeless, Joe!

Ehh, could have been more harsh on the ending, cool tho

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I'll smash ur fucking face in put an end to ur future endeavor
Once the blood Spilsbury it In the concrete,ur gonna be needing him to jigsaw it back together

Lol Nice

ur a light feather compared to my weight comparison so if we fight it'll be embarrassing
If you decided on a gunwar, then ummmm? k come out you'll turn fag quicker than Mr Garrison

Nahhh

I'll go to wherever ur traveling rocketlaunch ur flight mid air
Soon as u Dinosaurs left as evidence, always carry tools in the box like Earl Sinclair

This was decent

Better be aware of his surroundings my dawgs outside they blood hounding
I'll be somewhere equipped with two sharp blades,i move around better then Kurt Browning

Nice

Shook of the Glock sounding when I blast of in ur direction
My Aim Topps whatever shots u miss,ill just go inside the closet like its my baseball collection

Ha! Fiya Joey!

You'll never in your life make a good impression, that's y ur bitch is fucking me and said deuces
During Orgasm she had a Big Burst u watched us both while drinking 50 cent juices

Light closer!

Yo this was a cool battle here, pretty much even up so it really can be a good debate put on this battle. My opinion I got JB by a hair! That baseball collection line could have been worded better, but just for creativity itself it passed for me and I liked it and thought that one line gave you the slight edge here. Props to both!

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You a sailboat in a bathtub. 10 year mid tier, but I'M official
Titanic mass = no progress/only speaks to ur Capsized potential

(This is good. Slightly hard to follow because of he wording but pretty good line)

Toss fat chicks around? I'm a lover so I'll slide w/ the steel, cousin
For matters of the Hart: roll on JB Smooooove like a Real Husband

(Out of me and Joel, there’s been a LOT of JB Smoove punchlines. This woulda been cool imo but I heard a lot of versions of essentially the same punch and I haven’t even been here long)

1 for the money. 2 get tossed out if 3 g's want boss clout.
KILL u 4 respect only. They'll hit u w/ that 5... 5-6 like I lost count.

(Good line. I liked the concept. Parts of the 1-4 set up seemed forced/just put together for the punch but I liked the line. This is also the first 5.56 punchline I’ve ever heard so props for that lmao)

I'm from the boon, where dad jeans still get u merk'd
If u hit streets like a 40 something fgt w/ the Dad gene since birth.

(I didn’t really like the angle you took - shooting someone for wearing dad jeans ain’t really a thing so the angle came off kinda weird. Then the punch was light too.)

I'ma bomb you for past sins. That vid was the wrong route
Ironic ur 'known from RapBattles' when clearly it's not ur strong suit.

(This is okay. The punch was really basic. But this is a solid angle)

Ur NC/RB Pastime. butttt not Great just a clueless hoe.
my Chi goons'll stomp u til White Sox r Black... they Shoeless, Joe!

(Dang this was a dope concept but the execution was off. The NC/RB Pastime was a nice subtle tie in. Its hard for me to fully explain but the punch just had a lot of wording issues. Both meanings of the ‘White Sox are black’ are kind of a stretch. Hard for me to explain but you prob get what’s wrong with the wording. If that didn’t make sense...my bad lol)



I'll smash ur fucking face in put an end to ur future endeavor
Once the blood Spilsbury it In the concrete,ur gonna be needing him to jigsaw it back together

(The wp here was nice. The punch kinda missed imo. Unless he’s referring to a specific scene that I’m missing, the ‘jigsaw it back together’ doesn’t really work. The wording also felt a bit scattered)

ur a light feather compared to my weight comparison so if we fight it'll be embarrassing
If you decided on a gunwar, then ummmm? k come out you'll turn fag quicker than Mr Garrison

(I didn’t care for this. The punchline was light imo. Also wordiness hurt, and the mmmkay/ummm k flip was trying to do too much imo)

I'll go to wherever ur traveling rocketlaunch ur flight mid air
Soon as u Dinosaurs left as evidence, always carry tools in the box like Earl Sinclair

(I read this line A LOT and I don’t get the dinosaurs wp. ‘Tools in the box...’ part was simple but cool. Also this seemed a bit scattered. The lines seemed made up on 3 unrelated phrases)

Better be aware of his surroundings my dawgs outside they blood hounding
I'll be somewhere equipped with two sharp blades,i move around better then Kurt Browning

(Simple but in a battle where wording issues hindered you both a bit, this line came off crisp.)

Shook of the Glock sounding when I blast of in ur direction
My Aim Topps whatever shots u miss,ill just go inside the closet like its my baseball collection

(Pause lol. This was ok. The concept was there, but the the wording was off and then you had typos. The setup was very hard to read. The punch was decent. )

You'll never in your life make a good impression, that's y ur bitch is fucking me and said deuces
During Orgasm she had a Big Burst u watched us both while drinking 50 cent juices

(I didn’t catch the the punch here. I think you was going for humor hear but it missed imo)

Lot of good concepts here but I think wording hurt both guys. I do think it hurt Joe a bit more and that was the difference maker imo. Bleak also was able to set up hid punches better than Joe. Also, Joe I felt like your references were a little too obscure - had to use google a bit. Overall I think Bleak took this one.

Mvgt Bleak
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Felt wording was a let down for both but bleak had some decent concepts an although it wasnt really a hard ounch i liked the numbers bar idea was coo.

Joe had some stuff in there but the wording really let it down, bleaks opener was possibly some of the worst wording of the battle but there was a more crrative angle in there in comparrison to some of joes. That mr garrison bar was weak man no offence to you. Not sure whsts going on with JB I rrcall you being a lot better then this.

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Joe Boston:

"I'll smash ur fucking face in put an end to ur future endeavor
Once the blood Spilsbury it In the concrete,ur gonna be needing him to jigsaw it back together"

"Better be aware of his surroundings my dawgs outside they blood hounding
I'll be somewhere equipped with two sharp blades,i move around better then Kurt Browning"

"Shook of the Glock sounding when I blast of in ur direction
My Aim Topps whatever shots u miss,ill just go inside the closet like its my baseball collection"


bleak:

"You a sailboat in a bathtub. 10 year mid tier, but I'M official
Titanic mass = no progress/only speaks to ur Capsized potential"

"I'm from the boon, where dad jeans still get u merk'd
If u hit streets like a 40 something fgt w/ the Dad gene since birth."

"Ur NC/RB Pastime. butttt not Great just a clueless hoe.
my Chi goons'll stomp u til White Sox r Black... they Shoeless, Joe!"


Overall, damn I feel like this was a really close battle and had to re read one more time before decided on my vote. I basically decided on style/wording and personals. And I think in this one bleak did that just slightly better, I even kind of a little bit wanted to see JB smash him after dropping him in the TT Tourney, lol no offense bleak, but hey I think you did what needed to be done. MVGT - bleak. Major props to both though, gl in the tourney.
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