K Huntsman vs. Defiant - K Huntsman wins

Meth · 08-08-2014, 01:05 AM

The 1-2 Punch League

Due Monday Midnight Pacific

@K Huntsman @Defiant

K Huntsman · 08-08-2014, 07:20 AM

Check

K Huntsman · 08-11-2014, 07:19 AM

I've been out on vacay, now I'm back cuttin heads...
Only spring break he knows is when his fat ass wife is in bed

Defiant · 08-12-2014, 03:00 AM

So broke he'll be in the red August and September, n here il prove g
That 'Hunt for red October' is such a sure thing they got 'Connery' playing u in the movie

BROKE LESNAR · 08-12-2014, 03:14 PM

I have K taking this. Defiant went too hard and I thought he could have dumbed it down a bit. The np itself was complicated in that he had to tailor much of his bar to progress the concept and in doing so made the concept really intricate.

v-K

Camp Bell · 08-12-2014, 03:58 PM

i really hate the "your girl" bars but defiant hunt for red october
bar was just too stretched and the movie way too old.

vote: hunt

e11even · 08-12-2014, 06:02 PM

K- filler piece but this still a funny punch. I wudda been pissed if somebody said that to me in the street lol.

Defiant- the np had more potential than a punch strongly tying in a movie that a lot of ppl haven't seen. Or maybe I should speak for myself? Anyways, Relatability is key with a hard hitting punch or else it loses the zing.

MVGT huntsman

Meth · 08-12-2014, 08:41 PM

Spring break is played as hell

Plus no new flip to make it fresh

Deviants was kind of over my head and I had to google

I usually don't vote for stuff that i have to google but spring break?

Nah, sorry man

V/ defiant

Certain · 08-12-2014, 11:11 PM

K Huntsman: You stole a "your mama's so fat" joke that I hadn't heard since the 1990s.

Defiant: This was really, really, really poorly worded. But the concept in general was there. Tighten up and consider what the goal of the line is, then word around that. But you win for originality and specificity.

Vote: Defiant

Split · 08-13-2014, 05:51 AM

K Huntsman had a fake personal that didn't have credibility, seemed like it was pulled out of a database of Fight Night filler. Nothing wrong with it other than no pertinence or creativity

Defiant, I think you did a great job with your setup, but I don't think there was a way to make that punch line come across smoothly nahmean? The twist to the punch was nice but the meat of it "hunt for red October" is never how you'd say someone was gonna be broke that month

v/ Defiant, because tho it wasn't technically sound, there was no technique whatsoever to K's bar

jilti · 08-13-2014, 12:36 PM

Vote-K hunts
good, simple, to the point
Defiant had an ok punch, just wasn't enough

KnowP · 08-13-2014, 11:36 PM

I was riding with Def until he said Connery was playing Hunt. That killed it. Hint had a indirect punch but the word play had a nice midsection.

V. Hunt

08-08-2014, 01:05 AM	#1
Meth Back again. Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,653 Battle Record: 12-5 Champed - Time to Kill IV - 1-2 Punch Panic Room Rep Power: 4489507	K Huntsman vs. Defiant - K Huntsman wins The 1-2 Punch League Due Monday Midnight Pacific @K Huntsman @Defiant __________________ Crystal

08-12-2014, 03:58 PM	#6
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	i really hate the "your girl" bars but defiant hunt for red october bar was just too stretched and the movie way too old. vote: hunt __________________ get high. write rhymes.

08-12-2014, 06:02 PM	#7
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247256	K- filler piece but this still a funny punch. I wudda been pissed if somebody said that to me in the street lol. Defiant- the np had more potential than a punch strongly tying in a movie that a lot of ppl haven't seen. Or maybe I should speak for myself? Anyways, Relatability is key with a hard hitting punch or else it loses the zing. MVGT huntsman __________________ Ahem.

08-12-2014, 08:41 PM	#8
Meth Back again. Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,653 Battle Record: 12-5 Champed - Time to Kill IV - 1-2 Punch Panic Room Rep Power: 4489507	Spring break is played as hell Plus no new flip to make it fresh Deviants was kind of over my head and I had to google I usually don't vote for stuff that i have to google but spring break? Nah, sorry man V/ defiant __________________ Crystal

08-12-2014, 11:11 PM	#9
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	K Huntsman: You stole a "your mama's so fat" joke that I hadn't heard since the 1990s. Defiant: This was really, really, really poorly worded. But the concept in general was there. Tighten up and consider what the goal of the line is, then word around that. But you win for originality and specificity. Vote: Defiant __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

08-08-2014, 07:20 AM	#2
K Huntsman Siberian Rocky Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 63 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 0	Check

08-11-2014, 07:19 AM	#3
K Huntsman Siberian Rocky Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 63 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 0	I've been out on vacay, now I'm back cuttin heads... Only spring break he knows is when his fat ass wife is in bed

08-12-2014, 03:00 AM	#4
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442244	So broke he'll be in the red August and September, n here il prove g That 'Hunt for red October' is such a sure thing they got 'Connery' playing u in the movie

08-12-2014, 03:14 PM	#5
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	I have K taking this. Defiant went too hard and I thought he could have dumbed it down a bit. The np itself was complicated in that he had to tailor much of his bar to progress the concept and in doing so made the concept really intricate. v-K

08-13-2014, 05:51 AM	#10
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,904 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899395	K Huntsman had a fake personal that didn't have credibility, seemed like it was pulled out of a database of Fight Night filler. Nothing wrong with it other than no pertinence or creativity Defiant, I think you did a great job with your setup, but I don't think there was a way to make that punch line come across smoothly nahmean? The twist to the punch was nice but the meat of it "hunt for red October" is never how you'd say someone was gonna be broke that month v/ Defiant, because tho it wasn't technically sound, there was no technique whatsoever to K's bar __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com Last edited by Split; 08-13-2014 at 05:54 AM.

08-13-2014, 12:36 PM	#11
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816225	Vote-K hunts good, simple, to the point Defiant had an ok punch, just wasn't enough

08-13-2014, 11:36 PM	#12
KnowP Nasty Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 221 Battle Record: 6-3 Champed - BA Cypher Rep Power: 3463485	I was riding with Def until he said Connery was playing Hunt. That killed it. Hint had a indirect punch but the word play had a nice midsection. V. Hunt