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Old 02-12-2018, 11:36 PM   #1
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Old 02-13-2018, 12:24 AM   #2
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Old 02-13-2018, 01:26 AM   #3
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Check.

I'd like to do 12 lines. Are you fine with that, @Joe Boston?
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Old 02-14-2018, 12:03 PM   #4
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12 @Sovereign

Whats bitch gonna do when shots start to Hover
Cant "trust yourself", gun'll leave u naked quicker than Aly Raisman on the swimsuit cover
Your brother is a fag i imagine thats where u inherit ur traits
No wonder i Rippon you cuz ur feminant as fuck and probably own a pair of figure skates
All your dates stand you up they realize your Corny as fuck
Bitches refer to you as IT so just take a seat on the bench cuz ur shit out of luck
Keep the nine nickle with the new finish shine tucked, in these streets im fucking Captain
Chopper leave holes size of the Grand Canyon, big enough for a helicopter to crash in
Im smashin ur bitch on the daily, valentines day u give her chocolates n roses
Got her bent over in the Hall Mark my territory, remember u gotta run there before it closes
On the Gram doing hood poses rocking tight gear makes u look funny
Stop trying hard to Fit in, asking how these pants make my ass look honey?

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Old 02-15-2018, 04:29 PM   #5
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Says he resells stolen property. Pfft, that is some old shit
He wouldn't be known for good fencing as a champion swordsman
He wants to give me a licking, but can't stop rapping with the stupid stuff
I call him BJ, because it's all backwards when he moves his tongue
I'll toss his body parts aside once I've shredded this fucker
It won't be horny teenage boys when your head's in the gutter
Your momma’s poor. (How poor?) She thinks a computer is a freaking large expense
Can’t even afford e-mail, just has more hand-written letters than cheaters on a test
No ghetto blasters blare his tracks. You can bet this ho's white
My shit's heard on the radio, you're just the stereo-type
Got the machine gun for Joe Boston, I drop that cunt with stupid force
You'll see feed streams connected to his dome like live broadcasts of the super bowl
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Old 02-16-2018, 08:01 AM   #6
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Whats bitch gonna do when shots start to Hover
Cant "trust yourself", gun'll leave u naked quicker than Aly Raisman on the swimsuit cover
why the fuck is a gun gonna leave him naked and why are you rapping about doing something to make him naked? jesus lol
Your brother is a fag i imagine thats where u inherit ur traits
No wonder i Rippon you cuz ur feminant as fuck and probably own a pair of figure skates
this was decent. Is every bar gonna be a winter Olympic themed bar tho? lol
All your dates stand you up they realize your Corny as fuck
Bitches refer to you as IT so just take a seat on the bench cuz ur shit out of luck
didn't like this
Keep the nine nickle with the new finish shine tucked, in these streets im fucking Captain
Chopper leave holes size of the Grand Canyon, big enough for a helicopter to crash in
wish youd shorten up the first line a bit shits mad stretched. this was decent tho
Im smashin ur bitch on the daily, valentines day u give her chocolates n roses
Got her bent over in the Hall Mark my territory, remember u gotta run there before it closes
played and not executed well at all
On the Gram doing hood poses rocking tight gear makes u look funny
Stop trying hard to Fit in, asking how these pants make my ass look honey?
didn't like this

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Says he resells stolen property. Pfft, that is some old shit
He wouldn't be known for good fencing as a champion swordsman
didn't like this
He wants to give me a licking, but can't stop rapping with the stupid stuff
I call him BJ, because it's all backwards when he moves his tongue
not feelin this
I'll toss his body parts aside once I've shredded this fucker
It won't be horny teenage boys when your head's in the gutter
head in the gu tter punches are olddddd as shit. ill give a jab here for effort
Your momma’s poor. (How poor?) She thinks a computer is a freaking large expense
Can’t even afford e-mail, just has more hand-written letters than cheaters on a test
didn't like this
No ghetto blasters blare his tracks. You can bet this ho's white
My shit's heard on the radio, you're just the stereo-type
stereo-type old as shit too. not feelin this
Got the machine gun for Joe Boston, I drop that cunt with stupid force
You'll see feed streams connected to his dome like live broadcasts of the super bowl
shoulda talked about breaking his jaw in the first line or something.. the punch was decent but impact was hindered due to lackluster execution.

Close but Joe Boston edges it with the harder hitting punches.

v/jb
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Old 02-17-2018, 09:33 AM   #7
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Whats bitch gonna do when shots start to Hover
Cant "trust yourself", gun'll leave u naked quicker than Aly Raisman on the swimsuit cover
ill give this to you, ok
Your brother is a fag i imagine thats where u inherit ur traits
No wonder i Rippon you cuz ur feminant as fuck and probably own a pair of figure skates
decent
All your dates stand you up they realize your Corny as fuck
Bitches refer to you as IT so just take a seat on the bench cuz ur shit out of luck
what? Lol no
Keep the nine nickle with the new finish shine tucked, in these streets im fucking Captain
Chopper leave holes size of the Grand Canyon, big enough for a helicopter to crash in
first line didn’t have to be so stretched smh, decent again
Im smashin ur bitch on the daily, valentines day u give her chocolates n roses
Got her bent over in the Hall Mark my territory, remember u gotta run there before it closes
nah
On the Gram doing hood poses rocking tight gear makes u look funny
Stop trying hard to Fit in, asking how these pants make my ass look honey?
this was pretty bad


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Says he resells stolen property. Pfft, that is some old shit
He wouldn't be known for good fencing as a champion swordsman
thought this was pretty cool idk why
He wants to give me a licking, but can't stop rapping with the stupid stuff
I call him BJ, because it's all backwards when he moves his tongue
this wasn’t good
I'll toss his body parts aside once I've shredded this fucker
It won't be horny teenage boys when your head's in the gutter
nah
Your momma’s poor. (How poor?) She thinks a computer is a freaking large expense
Can’t even afford e-mail, just has more hand-written letters than cheaters on a test
i liked your set up, but second line wasn’t good, killed it
No ghetto blasters blare his tracks. You can bet this ho's white
My shit's heard on the radio, you're just the stereo-type
bro how don’t you know this is beyond played?
Got the machine gun for Joe Boston, I drop that cunt with stupid force
You'll see feed streams connected to his dome like live broadcasts of the super bowl
decent


Disappointed here tbh. Joe Boston had 1 ok line and 2 decents, sov had 1 ok and 1 decent. Sovereign could have easily won but dropped a lot of played shit from yeeeears ago. JB had stretched bars of course but he provided fresh concepts which made his verse more appealing than sovereigns.

Vote Joe Boston
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Old 02-17-2018, 11:51 AM   #8
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Whats bitch gonna do when shots start to Hover
Cant "trust yourself", gun'll leave u naked quicker than Aly Raisman on the swimsuit cover
umm nah
Your brother is a fag i imagine thats where u inherit ur traits
No wonder i Rippon you cuz ur feminant as fuck and probably own a pair of figure skates
no
All your dates stand you up they realize your Corny as fuck
Bitches refer to you as IT so just take a seat on the bench cuz ur shit out of luck
nah
Keep the nine nickle with the new finish shine tucked, in these streets im fucking Captain
Chopper leave holes size of the Grand Canyon, big enough for a helicopter to crash in
ok I liked this
Im smashin ur bitch on the daily, valentines day u give her chocolates n roses
Got her bent over in the Hall Mark my territory, remember u gotta run there before it closes
nah
On the Gram doing hood poses rocking tight gear makes u look funny
Stop trying hard to Fit in, asking how these pants make my ass look honey?
nah

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Says he resells stolen property. Pfft, that is some old shit
He wouldn't be known for good fencing as a champion swordsman
could've been worded better
He wants to give me a licking, but can't stop rapping with the stupid stuff
I call him BJ, because it's all backwards when he moves his tongue
eh alright
I'll toss his body parts aside once I've shredded this fucker
It won't be horny teenage boys when your head's in the gutter
nah
Your momma’s poor. (How poor?) She thinks a computer is a freaking large expense
Can’t even afford e-mail, just has more hand-written letters than cheaters on a test
no
No ghetto blasters blare his tracks. You can bet this ho's white
My shit's heard on the radio, you're just the stereo-type
eh didn't really hit dude ya know
Got the machine gun for Joe Boston, I drop that cunt with stupid force
You'll see feed streams connected to his dome like live broadcasts of the super bowl
that was better


overall: not a very good battle both dudes need to kind of come a bit harder... I think joe boston was a bit harsher though with his content so I'm going give it to him... sovereign was too soft with his punches and shit... so yeah...

vote: joe boston
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Old 02-18-2018, 01:01 PM   #9
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12 @Sovereign

Whats bitch gonna do when shots start to Hover
Cant "trust yourself", gun'll leave u naked quicker than Aly Raisman on the swimsuit cover

Nah

Your brother is a fag i imagine thats where u inherit ur traits
No wonder i Rippon you cuz ur feminant as fuck and probably own a pair of figure skates

Okay

All your dates stand you up they realize your Corny as fuck
Bitches refer to you as IT so just take a seat on the bench cuz ur shit out of luck

Nah

Keep the nine nickle with the new finish shine tucked, in these streets im fucking Captain
Chopper leave holes size of the Grand Canyon, big enough for a helicopter to crash in

Ok

Im smashin ur bitch on the daily, valentines day u give her chocolates n roses
Got her bent over in the Hall Mark my territory, remember u gotta run there before it closes

Good

On the Gram doing hood poses rocking tight gear makes u look funny
Stop trying hard to Fit in, asking how these pants make my ass look honey?

Nah


Says he resells stolen property. Pfft, that is some old shit
He wouldn't be known for good fencing as a champion swordsman

Ok

He wants to give me a licking, but can't stop rapping with the stupid stuff
I call him BJ, because it's all backwards when he moves his tongue

Nah

I'll toss his body parts aside once I've shredded this fucker
It won't be horny teenage boys when your head's in the gutter

Nah

Your momma’s poor. (How poor?) She thinks a computer is a freaking large expensefat wife
Can’t even afford e-mail, just has more hand-written letters than cheaters on a test

Nah

No ghetto blasters blare his tracks. You can bet this ho's white
My shit's heard on the radio, you're just the stereo-type

K

Got the machine gun for Joe Boston, I drop that cunt with stupid force
You'll see feed streams connected to his dome like live broadcasts of the super bowl

Reach


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Boston won w/ a few more convincing hits
opener, chopper -- best ones

Sovereign had a few rly played out ideas, hurt em
Opener & closer were ur best attempts

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Boston -- Rippon is really good. Hall Mark was a cool concept, I followed along but execution was kinda lacking. Cool attempt tho.

Sovereign

I'll toss his body parts aside once I've shredded this fucker
It won't be horny teenage boys when your head's in the gutter
Your momma’s poor. (How poor?) She thinks a computer is a freaking large expense
Can’t even afford e-mail, just has more hand-written letters than cheaters on a test
No ghetto blasters blare his tracks. You can bet this ho's white
My shit's heard on the radio, you're just the stereo-type

LMAOOOO -- this shit had me rolling. This is super corny, but hilarious. Yo fuck it, I'm voting for Sovereign. That shit was like Sharknado -- I loved it, and it was awful. Boston had one good line and a bunch of shit ones.

Vote -- Sovereign
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Your brother is a fag i imagine thats where u inherit ur traits
No wonder i Rippon you cuz ur feminant as fuck and probably own a pair of figure skates
Keep the nine nickle with the new finish shine tucked, in these streets im fucking Captain
Chopper leave holes size of the Grand Canyon, big enough for a helicopter to crash in
doing hood poses rocking tight gear makes u look funny
Stop trying hard to Fit in, asking how these pants make my ass look honey?
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machine gun for Joe Boston, I drop that cunt with stupid force
You'll see feed streams connected to his dome like live broadcasts of the super bowl
Expected sov to drop some shit his last verse was better. Maybe just trying to adapt to the style but it didn't pan out. Jb had some decent stuff, enough to win

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Keep the nine nickle with the new finish shine tucked, in these streets im fucking Captain
Chopper leave holes size of the Grand Canyon, big enough for a helicopter to crash in

^ I like the tie in wit a current event

yea I think bostons quote hit a lil harder but im tryin to see yall both come harder next wk.

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