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Old 07-25-2015, 03:54 AM   #1
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16 due as soon as possible. whenever u get chance? iono

im bout to finish write right now coz I feel like it. I started as soon as u said sunthin lol
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Old 07-25-2015, 04:00 AM   #2
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so you British? so what merlin u dont flow with a wand
Ill treat you like a Drawbridge. ill leave you Stiff as a Board over the Pond
bitch ill catch u NAPPING. whole bedroom get dumped w/ the K
Ull see that Rocket n itll be a Dream Shake that would Leave Olajuwon fucking amazed
My stuff is just cray. incredible, mind you
When I Ride I Eat Snakes. n the Steel'll Hold you Up like the Pegs on a Mongoose
Fuck around. my dude got that scope sweepin ya ride, bruh
Im Tiger on Par 5. I aint gotta pull that Iron out. My nigga just Reach for the Driver
Im Andretti on Beats. Semi confetti the streets
U need to Take A Seat Coach. That Tray'll Pop Out when Im Ready to Eat
Rob me? Your ATLAS. we'll set UP w/ the Pound
Coz when them Two Arms Go Up? You better Hold Up. Or ur whole earth comin crumblin down
When I Pitch this Heat? theres no Warmup or Scuffin the Mound
N if you think you All Star Caliber? Ill be the one to Put the Snub to this Clown
Say im washed up? u must be dumb/lethargic
If im Over the Hill..im looking for a nice concealed spot to dump ya carcass

*sucks teeth*

16

this some rap shit right here fwm
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Old 07-26-2015, 06:03 AM   #3
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Some of us have lives....

leave ya house stop dissing everyone take like me n have a kind mouth
see the grass'll be greener on other side if you wern't such a faggot to go outside n find out
on that hush subject, showed he bitch made couldn't even hold a banger steady
if muff beef n pullin the strap out he proved it'd only be his handbag at the ready
the way u reacted was sad how'd you ever expect to get wife
funny u throwin ur dummy out but that inflatable was ur best shot of a sex life
u poor as fuck got that gawping look that makes girls want u to leave them alone
if he finding silver in his pocket it's only the twerk vids stored on this stalkers phone
try so hard to set-up bars, but ur service is hard for anyone to get it g
so u can post it fast but that shits not landing till the next day with ya best delivery
don't leave the net stay in your dark room like a creature
only way he'll find a friend is if this fag uses a search bar feature
we're tired with the way u board, have u heard urself u whore
cus u bore ppl to sleep so much that if u tried it ur insomnia would find a cure
In a dark place now gotta win the next tourney cus ya legend status lies
but I hope u go out in the summer n burn from the sun catch skin cancer & die

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Old 07-29-2015, 04:54 PM   #4
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so you British? so what merlin u dont flow with a wand
Ill treat you like a Drawbridge. ill leave you Stiff as a Board over the Pond
My stuff is just cray. incredible, mind you
When I Ride I Eat Snakes. n the Steel'll Hold you Up like the Pegs on a Mongoose






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u poor as fuck got that gawping look that makes girls want u to leave them alone
if he finding silver in his pocket it's only the twerk vids stored on this stalkers phone
try so hard to set-up bars, but ur service is hard for anyone to get it g
so u can post it fast but that shits not landing till the next day with ya best delivery
we're tired with the way u board, have u heard urself u whore
cus u bore ppl to sleep so much that if u tried it ur insomnia would find a cure




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Old 08-04-2015, 04:11 PM   #5
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Old 08-04-2015, 05:28 PM   #6
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So you British? so what merlin u dont flow with a wand
Ill treat you like a Drawbridge. ill leave you Stiff as a Board over the Pond
I LIKED THIS BAR. GOOD IMAGERY IMO. WISH U COULDA THRW A WORDPLAY IN THERE

bitch ill catch u NAPPING. whole bedroom get dumped w/ the K
Ull see that Rocket n itll be a Dream Shake that would Leave Olajuwon fucking amazed
THIS WAS EH. U COULDA WENT WILD W THIS REFERENCE

My stuff is just cray. incredible, mind you
When I Ride I Eat Snakes. n the Steel'll Hold you Up like the Pegs on a Mongoose
CRAZY

Fuck around. my dude got that scope sweepin ya ride, bruh
Im Tiger on Par 5. I aint gotta pull that Iron out. My nigga just Reach for the Driver
HMM. I FUCK W THIS, BUT IT READS KINDA WACK

Im Andretti on Beats. Semi confetti the streets
U need to Take A Seat Coach. That Tray'll Pop Out when Im Ready to Eat
COULDA BEEN CRAZY, BUT THE SETUP HAS MULTIES AN U COULDA PUT A LIL MORE CONNECTIVITY TO THE PUNCH BESIDES THE GUN ANGLE

Rob me?Your ATLAS. we'll set UP w/ the Pound
Coz when them Two Arms Go Up? You better Hold Up. Or ur whole earth comin crumblin down
NAH
When I Pitch this Heat? theres no Warmup or Scuffin the Mound
N if you think you All Star Caliber? Ill be the one to Put the Snub to this Clown
OK.
Say im washed up? u must be dumb/lethargic
If im Over the Hill..im looking for a nice concealed spot to dump ya carcass
NICE

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Leave ya house stop dissing everyone take like me n have a kind mouth
see the grass'll be greener on other side if you wern't such a faggot to go outside n find out
THIS WAS OK

on that hush subject, showed he bitch made couldn't even hold a banger steady
if muff beef n pullin the strap out he proved it'd only be his handbag at the ready
NAH

the way u reacted was sad how'd you ever expect to get wife
funny u throwin ur dummy out but that inflatable was ur best shot of a sex life
DONT WORK FOR ME

u poor as fuck got that gawping look that makes girls want u to leave them alone
if he finding silver in his pocket it's only the twerk vids stored on this stalkers phone
MISS

try so hard to set-up bars, but ur service is hard for anyone to get it g
so u can post it fast but that shits not landing till the next day with ya best delivery
TJIS WAS GOOD, BUT A LIL WORDY

don't leave the net stay in your dark room like a creature
only way he'll find a friend is if this fag uses a search bar feature
NOOOO

we're tired with the way u board, have u heard urself u whore
cus u bore ppl to sleep so much that if u tried it ur insomnia would find a cure
AVERAGE. NO STING HERE

In a dark place now gotta win the next tourney cus ya legend status lies
but I hope u go out in the summer n burn from the sun catch skin cancer & die
NO


Ok. This was food. Muff made a meal of this guy. @Muff i likes ur style.
Lotto, ur wording and lack of creativity hurt u here


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This was closer than it shoulda been cause muff had a bunch of generic bars...really i felt like I was reading the same bar over n over just with diff references. I liked a couple of ur lines but it was just underwhelming.

On the other hand lotto had time to sit n write his verse whereas muff dropped asap. Lotto had some decent personal references that made his verse seem harsher but at the same time his punches were under whelming.

Its really a tough call. I prefer the more personal angle but muffy had some good generics. Idk who to pick honestly. Imma have to give it lotto I guess for having a verse that actually directed at muff. Miffs verse coulda been for anyone and it had its share of wack lines too.

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My stuff is just cray. incredible, mind you
When I Ride I Eat Snakes. n the Steel'll Hold you Up like the Pegs on a Mongoose
Say im washed up? u must be dumb/lethargic
If im Over the Hill..im looking for a nice concealed spot to dump ya carcass

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try so hard to set-up bars, but ur service is hard for anyone to get it g
so u can post it fast but that shits not landing till the next day with ya best delivery


One had the better hits and the better misses overall v/Muff
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Muff

Opener was ok
Hakeem fell flat
Pegs on a mongoose was slick
Reach for the driver was dope
Seat coach was ooook
Wasn't diggin the wording in the 2 arms go up
Allstar caliber was light
Closer was slick

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Opener was pretty cool
Didn't like strap out
Didn't really like sec life either
Wasn't feeling the silver in his pockets that much
Post it fast was slick tho
Find a friend was weak
Bore people was ehh
Skin cancer was a miss



Iight lotto u had to many missed here man I've seen hella better shit from u bro.. Muff got this pretty easy he was just way more consistent


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so you British? so what merlin u dont flow with a wand
Ill treat you like a Drawbridge. ill leave you Stiff as a Board over the Pond
bitch ill catch u NAPPING. whole bedroom get dumped w/ the K
Ull see that Rocket n itll be a Dream Shake that would Leave Olajuwon fucking amazed
My stuff is just cray. incredible, mind you
When I Ride I Eat Snakes. n the Steel'll Hold you Up like the Pegs on a Mongoose

Rob me? Your ATLAS. we'll set UP w/ the Pound
Coz when them Two Arms Go Up? You better Hold Up. Or ur whole earth comin crumblin down

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I thought opening shit was dope as hell, and that Atlas line was smooth
as for the rest they were hit & miss for me, but still pretty decent
but the quoted above were on some slick banana peel bird shit for real
I felt like you kind of stutter stepped here & there but you did work regardless

leave ya house stop dissing everyone take like me n have a kind mouth
see the grass'll be greener on other side if you wern't such a faggot to go outside n find out

u poor as fuck got that gawping look that makes girls want u to leave them alone
if he finding silver in his pocket it's only the twerk vids stored on this stalkers phone
try so hard to set-up bars, but ur service is hard for anyone to get it g
so u can post it fast but that shits not landing till the next day with ya best delivery

^^^^
I thought these concepts were pretty cool, kind of streeeeetched but cool stuff
literally LOL'd at that Silver line though, which was just funny regardless
I feel like I can hear the accent as I read some of your other lines out..
like that cure line? if I'm not mistaken, either way this was a pretty good showing
had a few more misses than Muff but you still put in work which was smooth

v/Muff, I felt like he had some stronger punches that landed better
his concepts seemed bulkier than what Lotto brought to the table
both had some great ideas though, I just feel Muff delivered a stronger showing
Lotto had some funny concepts, I enjoyed that beef/leather strap idea
my only issue was that the wording came off funny and I had to read it a few times
otherwise I felt like if it didn't effect his performance as much as it did this battle would have been pretty close, dope battle fella's
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