WK4: Contender Match: Flow 1-1 vs. DynamiCz 1-2 - DynamiCz WINS!!

[Incredible]

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@Flow @DynamiCz

[DynamiCz]

In

Contenders match? Lets give em 16 Flow!

[DynamiCz]

This object become a arrow! When you in the bullseye you can't abort
If I get my point across-The bow aimin for the target, this a archery sport
Lately your actions been one of a bad actor-Ex champ I get it...You a x factor
Switch up his flow-Shells empty...make contact w/ the spine-chiropractor
One call-I let the tech support if im the one assisting
Blew his brains behind him! Had him thinking in the past like he reminiscing
Bad timing, Let it blow in the wind! What you rap ain't surprising
Shoot on top of his head! His figure flying free in the air-that's paragliding
Undisputed? lets talk what you accomplish..If I decide to ask
You debate live w/ the sig stuck to ya lip-Shannon Sharpe goat mask
When guard is my position, the wolf howling under the shirt-Jeff Teague
I don't discriminate-Different colors leaking from the gun then a paintball league
Read your content! Against me this where the chapter end
Street sweeper-Ya sound get edit..I fire then clean up flow-mix & mastering
You get it soon...The 12 rising up on me! Its close to noon
Bullets in his throat! I can change the voice on flow like he autotune!

[Flow]

Dynamicz "a refreshing style"?!?... lmao i bout to expose this faggot

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=127989

Try finishing a bar without "like a", shiit hed rather face a hollow tip
More likely to "sigh an hide' while we just wish hed man up an swallow it
N he jacked the URL style like that shit is the hardest
but Diversion just distract us from the fact that hes garbage
Dy or dyna? Either way D ya girl works mine as if she was earning
hit it back and forth til i finished an Federa ball as if it was him who was serving
Real recognise real an tbh i dont care for what i see
We not alike... thats jus what you use to connect all your wack ass similies
Knew this be a easy kill, ive got the shovel ready to boot
I'll throw a box over you at the end of the round LIKE crash bandicoot
Refreshin style gtfoh faggots what the fucks the attraction
He got his hands on so many Likes it could bring up a list of Facebook Reactions
You a faggot nobody, til today id never peeped your battles son
Not me to ghost one, so im exposing your whack ass lines like he did to Boston
Run my pen game aggressive u cant touch me as a writer
This his first slip as a fighter, so if Diner rating high its only on Trip Advisor

[Twodrop]

This object become a arrow! When you in the bullseye you can't abort
If I get my point across-The bow aimin for the target, this a archery sport
huh? elbows? The bow aiming? this was light to me
Lately your actions been one of a bad actor-Ex champ I get it...You a x factor
Switch up his flow-Shells empty...make contact w/ the spine-chiropractor
lot going on here, didn't catch it
One call-I let the tech support if im the one assisting
Blew his brains behind him! Had him thinking in the past like he reminiscing
ok
Bad timing, Let it blow in the wind! What you rap ain't surprising
Shoot on top of his head! His figure flying free in the air-that's paragliding
naw….
Undisputed? lets talk what you accomplish..If I decide to ask
You debate live w/ the sig stuck to ya lip-Shannon Sharpe goat mask
Yea i saw this, wasn't feeling the line tho
When guard is my position, the wolf howling under the shirt-Jeff Teague
I don't discriminate-Different colors leaking from the gun then a paintball league
concept dope, execution was off to me
Read your content! Against me this where the chapter end
Street sweeper-Ya sound get edit..I fire then clean up flow-mix & mastering
this was coo
You get it soon...The 12 rising up on me! Its close to noon
Bullets in his throat! I can change the voice on flow like he autotune!
wasnt feeling this

Try finishing a bar without "like a", shiit hed rather face a hollow tip
More likely to "sigh an hide' while we just wish hed man up an swallow it
lol
N he jacked the URL style like that shit is the hardest
but Diversion just distract us from the fact that hes garbage
simple, yet effective
Dy or dyna? Either way D ya girl works mine as if she was earning
hit it back and forth til i finished an Federa ball as if it was him who was serving
yup
Real recognise real an tbh i dont care for what i see
We not alike... thats jus what you use to connect all your wack ass similies
liked this
Knew this be a easy kill, ive got the shovel ready to boot
I'll throw a box over you at the end of the round LIKE crash bandicoot
decent
Refreshin style gtfoh faggots what the fucks the attraction
He got his hands on so many Likes it could bring up a list of Facebook Reactions
lol
You a faggot nobody, til today id never peeped your battles son
Not me to ghost one, so im exposing your whack ass lines like he did to Boston
this was light, didn’t rhyme to me
Run my pen game aggressive u cant touch me as a writer
This his first slip as a fighter, so if Diner rating high its only on Trip Advisor
this was coo re-reading it

Thought flow got this one.

Good contender match fellas, gl in the upcoming weeks.

v/ Flow

[GUDELJ]

This object become a arrow! When you in the bullseye you can't abort
If I get my point across-The bow aimin for the target, this a archery sport
are you calling him a bow/arrow? Lol idk if I’m missing something or if this bar just wasn’t good
Lately your actions been one of a bad actor-Ex champ I get it...You a x factor
Switch up his flow-Shells empty...make contact w/ the spine-chiropractor
wasnt feelin this either bru
One call-I let the tech support if im the one assisting
Blew his brains behind him! Had him thinking in the past like he reminiscing
this is similar to a Rum Nitty bar, but not close enough to call it anything. I liked this
Bad timing, Let it blow in the wind! What you rap ain't surprising
Shoot on top of his head! His figure flying free in the air-that's paragliding
i liked this too lol
Undisputed? lets talk what you accomplish..If I decide to ask
You debate live w/ the sig stuck to ya lip-Shannon Sharpe goat mask
coulda been done better, was a miss for me as is
When guard is my position, the wolf howling under the shirt-Jeff Teague
I don't discriminate-Different colors leaking from the gun then a paintball league
omfg this could have been so damn fire bro but you messed up the second line. Overall wasn’t worded good, proof read your shit bru cause now I’m mad you messed this line up. Would have put that shit in my sig smh
Read your content! Against me this where the chapter end
Street sweeper-Ya sound get edit..I fire then clean up flow-mix & mastering
alright this was cool
You get it soon...The 12 rising up on me! Its close to noon
Bullets in his throat! I can change the voice on flow like he autotune!
fuckkkkkk. This was dope af. Done perfectly


vs



Try finishing a bar without "like a", shiit hed rather face a hollow tip
More likely to "sigh an hide' while we just wish hed man up an swallow it
???i don’t get it man /:
N he jacked the URL style like that shit is the hardest
but Diversion just distract us from the fact that hes garbage
alright
Dy or dyna? Either way D ya girl works mine as if she was earning
hit it back and forth til i finished an Federa ball as if it was him who was serving
ok again
Real recognise real an tbh i dont care for what i see
We not alike... thats jus what you use to connect all your wack ass similes
nah this was a miss to me
Knew this be a easy kill, ive got the shovel ready to boot
I'll throw a box over you at the end of the round LIKE crash bandicoot
lol could have done without the sarcastic LIKE, but overall this was nice
Refreshin style gtfoh faggots what the fucks the attraction
He got his hands on so many Likes it could bring up a list of Facebook Reactions
1 more like bar and ima go nuts. Decent bar here
You a faggot nobody, til today id never peeped your battles son
Not me to ghost one, so im exposing your whack ass lines like he did to Boston
alright this was pretty cool
Run my pen game aggressive u cant touch me as a writer
This his first slip as a fighter, so if Diner rating high its only on Trip Advisor
hmm I’ll give this to you. Decent


Well....DynamiCz came with the nicer bars, I like his style. Idk about refreshing but it’s shit I can smile at for sure. Flow came more consistent but had a few decent lines whereas Dyna had more haymakers and shit that made me nod in appreciation. Very close call and I had to reread this a couple times to make my final decision. Good ass battle fellas.

Vote DynamiCz

[BodySnatcher]

This object become a arrow! When you in the bullseye you can't abort
If I get my point across-The bow aimin for the target, this a archery sport
meh
Lately your actions been one of a bad actor-Ex champ I get it...You a x factor
Switch up his flow-Shells empty...make contact w/ the spine-chiropractor
i see what you did, not bad
One call-I let the tech support if im the one assisting
Blew his brains behind him! Had him thinking in the past like he reminiscing
lol not bad either
Bad timing, Let it blow in the wind! What you rap ain't surprising
Shoot on top of his head! His figure flying free in the air-that's paragliding
cool line
Undisputed? lets talk what you accomplish..If I decide to ask
You debate live w/ the sig stuck to ya lip-Shannon Sharpe goat mask
lol line was decent but shannon was hilarious in the goat mask
When guard is my position, the wolf howling under the shirt-Jeff Teague
I don't discriminate-Different colors leaking from the gun then a paintball league
what could have been...
Read your content! Against me this where the chapter end
Street sweeper-Ya sound get edit..I fire then clean up flow-mix & mastering
st8
You get it soon...The 12 rising up on me! Its close to noon
Bullets in his throat! I can change the voice on flow like he autotune!
LOTB



Try finishing a bar without "like a", shiit hed rather face a hollow tip
More likely to "sigh an hide' while we just wish hed man up an swallow it
lol not bad
N he jacked the URL style like that shit is the hardest
but Diversion just distract us from the fact that hes garbage
light
Dy or dyna? Either way D ya girl works mine as if she was earning
hit it back and forth til i finished an Federa ball as if it was him who was serving
fed her a ball huh? lol ok
Real recognise real an tbh i dont care for what i see
We not alike... thats jus what you use to connect all your wack ass similies
cool line but light
Knew this be a easy kill, ive got the shovel ready to boot
I'll throw a box over you at the end of the round LIKE crash bandicoot
i know crash but i dont know the reference
Refreshin style gtfoh faggots what the fucks the attraction
He got his hands on so many Likes it could bring up a list of Facebook Reactions
st8
You a faggot nobody, til today id never peeped your battles son
Not me to ghost one, so im exposing your whack ass lines like he did to Boston
lolol good one
Run my pen game aggressive u cant touch me as a writer
This his first slip as a fighter, so if Diner rating high its only on Trip Advisor



I got Dynamic in a close battle. I think flow had more consistency but his verse lacked aggression IMO. I think he took it light on Dy to be honest. I like Dy's concepts but some were poorly executed but I think he hit harder in his verse. That paintball line could've been dope too. Good read gentlemen

[Jabari Black]

This object become a arrow! When you in the bullseye you can't abort
If I get my point across-The bow aimin for the target, this a archery sport

(This missed to me - maybe play at best. I get the bar but i knew what the punchline was going to be way before you said it. I feel like you didn’t know if people would understand it and you overcompensated in the setup.)

Lately your actions been one of a bad actor-Ex champ I get it...You a x factor
Switch up his flow-Shells empty...make contact w/ the spine-chiropractor

(This was okay. Just a jab imo)

One call-I let the tech support if im the one assisting
Blew his brains behind him! Had him thinking in the past like he reminiscing

(Ha creative. I like this one. The ‘thinking in he past’ doesn’t work perfect but I still like it.)

Bad timing, Let it blow in the wind! What you rap ain't surprising
Shoot on top of his head! His figure flying free in the air-that's paragliding

(Yep this is different. Dope concept. It creates a nice visual and it was very well written. Idk the terminology for this, but you can flip really long phrases. ‘Shoot/chute on top of his head! His figure flying free in the air’ is all part of the paragliding flip which is dope. Plus the blow in the wind tie in helped put it together)

Undisputed? lets talk what you accomplish..If I decide to ask
You debate live w/ the sig stuck to ya lip-Shannon Sharpe goat mask

(Ha! Cig/sig is a basic and been done a lot, but the Shannon sharpe reference made it fresher that it normally would have. Decent)

When guard is my position, the wolf howling under the shirt-Jeff Teague
I don't discriminate-Different colors leaking from the gun then a paintball league

(This is good. I think you made a typo in the punch which takes away from the line but we still get the point. I like when folks punch in their set up. The punch itself was nice but had like I said that typo -I’m assuming it was a typo - took away from it because it didn’t flow right. Overall it was good)

Read your content! Against me this where the chapter end
Street sweeper-Ya sound get edit..I fire then clean up flow-mix & mastering

(This is a solid flow flip. Pretty good.

You get it soon...The 12 rising up on me! Its close to noon
Bullets in his throat! I can change the voice on flow like he autotune!

(Grimey! This was dope. And once again, punching in the set up again elevated the bar)





Try finishing a bar without "like a", shiit hed rather face a hollow tip
More likely to "sigh an hide' while we just wish hed man up an swallow it

(Lol good opener. The wp isn’t perfect but got the job done here. Also Flow is really good at using personal angles and a part is because you throw little jabs and hints at what angles your going to take. You didn’t it here with the ‘try finishing a bar w/ like a’. It’s like jabbing a nigga to set up a right hook or running the ball to set up play act)

N he jacked the URL style like that shit is the hardest
but Diversion just distract us from the fact that hes garbage

(This is cool. Straightforward but the wp came off effortlessly. I like the angle as well)

Dy or dyna? Either way D ya girl works mine as if she was earning
hit it back and forth til i finished an Federa ball as if it was him who was serving

(Lol I’m giving fed her a ball a pass. This was okay)

Real recognise real an tbh i dont care for what i see
We not alike... thats jus what you use to connect all your wack ass similies

(This is a good angle. There’s not really many angles to take on Dynamicz just based on what I’ve seen so this is a good angle to take - just breaking down his style. The punchline itself was simple, but got the job done. Good line)

Knew this be a easy kill, ive got the shovel ready to boot
I'll throw a box over you at the end of the round LIKE crash bandicoot

(The “LIKE” floored me lol. The punchline was nothing crazy. I couldn’t remember if they put boxes over your head at the end of round but I’m taking your word for it. I thought it landed)

Refreshin style gtfoh faggots what the fucks the attraction
He got his hands on so many Likes it could bring up a list of Facebook Reactions

(The punchline wasn’t crazy but once again, this is a good angle to take. Decent.)

You a faggot nobody, til today id never peeped your battles son
Not me to ghost one, so im exposing your whack ass lines like he did to Boston

(This was a light jab. Punch was basic but landed)

Run my pen game aggressive u cant touch me as a writer
This his first slip as a fighter, so if Diner rating high its only on Trip Advisor

(Good closer. I liked this)


Really dope contenders match! The battle was very close and didn’t disappoint. You got Dynamicz who is a straight punch who’s starting to develop a lot of intri***ies with his pen against Flow who is becoming a master at creating and attaching personal angles.

This was highly debatable imo and another case of do you take consistency vs standout moments. Dynamicz has a lot of heavy punches and it’s like the got heavier and heavier as the verse progressed. He did have some misses though. Flow on the other hand was extremely consistent. Didn’t count any misses and he was taking angles and jabbing at them throughout.

I think the difference maker in this was the fact that I think not having any big angles to attack hurt Flow. Flow did a good job of attacking the angle he had but it wasn’t an extremely harsh angle. I think part of the reason Flow’s able to upset he vets is because if you have dirt on you he’ll attack it hard. Like I said though his was really competitive but i think Dynamicz edged slightly.

Mvgt Dynamicz

Dope battle. Salute to both you guys.

[GUDELJ]

3-1 DynamiCz Wins