02-18-2019, 07:07 PM | #1 |
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Allen Knight vs Incredible - AK WINS
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Wk 5 Due Thursday, Feb 21 Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree 24hr ext to be granted by opponent NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You MUST check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls |
02-18-2019, 08:11 PM | #2 |
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Probably 12, could be 14.
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02-18-2019, 08:59 PM | #3 |
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yea w/e
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02-21-2019, 07:09 PM | #4 |
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Yo ima try to drop tonight, but ext just in case.
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02-21-2019, 08:36 PM | #5 |
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Word ext is cool.
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i'd neva be homies w/ a bittin pussy, u'll see a uzi spark eight we ain't Chums faggot u just rip off concepts & bite'em like it's shark bait jump u w/ the crew nonstop, switchin ppl till ur hurt more those stomps'll Fade-In till this faggots face blends into the earths core ur 2-2 rec's laughble as fuck, i'll put a blade in ya side ur ranks Disappearing Inc cuz everythin u write fades away in our minds ur moms a gang bang veteran & she says her head screwed i got it w/ Eavesdrop my dick in her mouth till u can hear her choke from ur bedroom & this pussy neva gets bitches, i got sluts w/ naughty minds if u hear Indica ho down it's a blow up doll he smashes til he gets body highs
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02-23-2019, 06:45 AM | #7 |
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Think he a Lyon in this empire, listen squire just retire
We seen your tricks before in chiraq but daddy's fgt son is just a liar My plug like the outlet but best believe that surcharge ain't cheap Your plugs all over your whole body he'll be left in the hospital for weeks Shotty resembles a strip of land mines send this dork flyin When you really break him down his reach is setting records on sports science I literally have 5k in savings bitch, this fkn dude Knight not fiscal Let him know when I pull up.... that light goes off, is not ur Blind spot signal "F u! I'm glad your dead!" That's what the card on the flowers read Cuz when I see ur bread, Its shootin all kind of crazy ways like a broken shower head |
02-23-2019, 11:19 AM | #8 |
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ALLEN
i'd neva be homies w/ a bittin pussy, u'll see a uzi spark eight we ain't Chums faggot u just rip off concepts & bite'em like it's shark bait NAH STATEMENT jump u w/ the crew nonstop, switchin ppl till ur hurt more those stomps'll Fade-In till this faggots face blends into the earths core MORE STATEMENT, SWITCHIN PPL TILL UR HURT MORE??? WTF IS THAT? ur 2-2 rec's laughble as fuck, i'll put a blade in ya side ur ranks Disappearing Inc cuz everythin u write fades away in our minds I LIKE IT! GOOD NP, PROLLY NOT TOO PLAYED SINCE HES KINDA NEWBIE ur moms a gang bang veteran & she says her head screwed i got it w/ Eavesdrop my dick in her mouth till u can hear her choke from ur bedroom IS THIS EAVES/EZZ? THATS A REACH. his pussy neva gets bitches, i got sluts w/ naughty minds if u hear Indica ho down it's a blow up doll he smashes til he gets body highs DUNNO WHY 'DOWN' IS THERE, BUT PRETTY GOOD NP. INKY Think he a Lyon in this empire, listen squire just retire We seen your tricks before in chiraq but daddy's fgt son is just a liar WHUT? WHO U DISSIN MAN? ALLEN OR THE STUPID ACTOR? My plug like the outlet but best believe that surcharge ain't cheap Your plugs all over your whole body he'll be left in the hospital for weeks I DONT GET IT, PLUGS WP??? Shotty resembles a strip of land mines send this dork flyin When you really break him down his reach is setting records on sports science WHUT? I literally have 5k in savings bitch, this fkn dude Knight not fiscal Let him know when I pull up.... that light goes off, is not ur Blind spot signal HUH? YOU HAVE A BLINDSPOT WHEN YOU DRIVE, THERES NO SIGNAL. WHAT IS THIS? "F u! I'm glad your dead!" That's what the card on the flowers read Cuz when I see ur bread, Its shootin all kind of crazy ways like a broken shower head THE BREADS SHOOTING LIKE A BROKEN SHOWER HEAD??? V-ALLEN KNIGHT, EASY WIN FOR AL, INC STILL HASNT GRASPT HOW TO MAKE A BATTLE VERSE. |
02-23-2019, 11:30 AM | #9 |
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i'd neva be homies w/ a bittin pussy, u'll see a uzi spark eight
we ain't Chums faggot u just rip off concepts & bite'em like it's shark bait Nice opener jump u w/ the crew nonstop, switchin ppl till ur hurt more those stomps'll Fade-In till this faggots face blends into the earths core This is coo ur 2-2 rec's laughble as fuck, i'll put a blade in ya side ur ranks Disappearing Inc cuz everythin u write fades away in our minds Fiya ur moms a gang bang veteran & she says her head screwed i got it w/ Eavesdrop my dick in her mouth till u can hear her choke from ur bedroom This is coo & this pussy neva gets bitches, i got sluts w/ naughty minds if u hear Indica ho down it's a blow up doll he smashes til he gets body high Lol funny, but not heavy ------- Think he a Lyon in this empire, listen squire just retire We seen your tricks before in chiraq but daddy's fgt son is just a liar Didn't get this one My plug like the outlet but best believe that surcharge ain't cheap Your plugs all over your whole body he'll be left in the hospital for weeks This ok Shotty resembles a strip of land mines send this dork flyin When you really break him down his reach is setting records on sports science Lost me here bro I literally have 5k in savings bitch, this fkn dude Knight not fiscal Let him know when I pull up.... that light goes off, is not ur Blind spot signal Wording threw this off "F u! I'm glad your dead!" That's what the card on the flowers read Cuz when I see ur bread, Its shootin all kind of crazy ways like a broken shower head Again wording, when u see bread what exactly are you shooting? Overall coo read I got Allen taking this one tho V-Allen
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02-23-2019, 11:43 AM | #10 |
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jump u w/ the crew nonstop, switchin ppl till ur hurt more
those stomps'll Fade-In till this faggots face blends into the earths core ur moms a gang bang veteran & she says her head screwed i got it w/ Eavesdrop my dick in her mouth till u can hear her choke from ur bedroom v I literally have 5k in savings bitch, this fkn dude Knight not fiscal Let him know when I pull up.... that light goes off, is not ur Blind spot signal (best attempt) although aside the point idk how 5k in savings is bragworthy lolz. allen didn't seem like he tried but he had some coo shit, incredible felt pretty statementish and there was nothing too complex or hard hitting. cool stuff, v/ Allen |
02-23-2019, 12:11 PM | #11 |
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i'd neva be homies w/ a bittin pussy, u'll see a uzi spark eight
we ain't Chums faggot u just rip off concepts & bite'em like it's shark bait never knew chum was a synonym for close friend lol had to look it up. This was a good line jump u w/ the crew nonstop, switchin ppl till ur hurt more those stomps'll Fade-In till this faggots face blends into the earths core mmm wasn’t feein this one ur 2-2 rec's laughble as fuck, i'll put a blade in ya side ur ranks Disappearing Inc cuz everythin u write fades away in our minds alright, not a bad inc flip ur moms a gang bang veteran & she says her head screwed i got it w/ Eavesdrop my dick in her mouth till u can hear her choke from ur bedroom lol ok, fresh wordplay I can dig & this pussy neva gets bitches, i got sluts w/ naughty minds if u hear Indica ho down it's a blow up doll he smashes til he gets body highs damn that wordplay was tough but the blow up doll part made it kind of corny for me, overall it’s still creative and works for what it is Vs Think he a Lyon in this empire, listen squire just retire We seen your tricks before in chiraq but daddy's fgt son is just a liar ahh this is a fresh concept that I was hoping to see this week. Had mad potential with it here but you needed more tie ins to make it really connect. This is decent at best as is My plug like the outlet but best believe that surcharge ain't cheap Your plugs all over your whole body he'll be left in the hospital for weeks my imagination led me to believe this was super dope until I read it a few times and realized it doesn’t make a lick of sense and is worded like hell Shotty resembles a strip of land mines send this dork flyin When you really break him down his reach is setting records on sports science this is actually pretty good lol I literally have 5k in savings bitch, this fkn dude Knight not fiscal Let him know when I pull up.... that light goes off, is not ur Blind spot signal ok not bad "F u! I'm glad your dead!" That's what the card on the flowers read Cuz when I see ur bread, Its shootin all kind of crazy ways like a broken shower head lmao yoooo “shootin all kind of crazy ways like a broken shower head”. That’s fire bro. Only problem is “when I see your bread” brought it from a solid 9 to a firm 6. Hey incredible you’re getting better each week man, if this weeks verse is a glimpse of a new style you’re testing out, I like it a lot. Work on wording and better tie ins though. But as far as concepts, you got that down pact. AK you had a solid verse, very consistent and some examples of how wordplay should be done. Props to both but AK outshined incredible here. Vote Allen Knight |
02-23-2019, 01:32 PM | #12 |
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AK took this on consistency. Inc improving each week and I do see the improvement. I also still wanna face him next week. @Incredible come get this L. But nah legit you improving bro an this was a solid showing. Maybe would of been a W against your own standard but you were on a uphill battle against ak soon as it was announced. AK was consistent here an even his misses are a tier above. Opener was fire as well dunno why someone was giving that shit.
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02-23-2019, 02:58 PM | #13 |
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lmao posting just to confirm Inc got annihilated
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