Week 2: MMLP VS Dynamicz DYNA WINS

Flow · 03-25-2019, 02:47 PM

Week Two

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

@MMLP
@DynamiCz

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

MMLP · 03-28-2019, 10:24 AM

Imma draw the line through his voting ring, fuck the Cliques referrals
Im outta their radius and twice the Dy amateur in his circle

DynamiCz · 03-28-2019, 02:38 PM

I'm appalled... That tough ACTING uh get a rope around ya neck - then a fall
Never been student of month - he'll be one when they find a star hanging off the wall

Blas · 03-28-2019, 03:12 PM

MMLP, valid attempt but dy-amateur doesn't = diameter if thats what u were going for? correct me via PM if im wrong

dy, got kinda choppy/weird wording wise but this concept is really cool & that's all you needed to do here

v/ dyna

Ghost1 · 03-29-2019, 08:53 AM

not sure if diameter is even pronounced the way u suggesting here in the UK? also the flip itself was clunky...there were a lot of circular associations which was admirable but twice the dy amateur in his circle? imagine saying that to him or anyone else? u wouldnt.

trying too hard to put associations into the flip and u lost the ability to actually say something coherently

thought star hanging on the wall was dope....simple but effective

v dyna

Saint · 03-29-2019, 08:58 AM

V -- Dynamicz here, star hanging was cool.

MMLP good effort here w/ the tieins but they looked just hashed together if I'm being honest.. plus st amateur don't work in any accent afaik.

Sharp · 03-29-2019, 10:21 AM

DynamiCz had a cool bar, dy amateur doesn't sound like diameter to me but it was a cool attempt

V/DynamiCz

Destroyer · 03-29-2019, 12:27 PM

His bar probably works a lot better in that cockney accent but I got nam taking this with a simple more effective hit anyway

V/nam

White LGI · 03-29-2019, 01:19 PM

Vote dyn I just felt it was more polished n more creative

Miss Netcees · 03-29-2019, 10:22 PM

I enjoy both punchlines nam more soild
Vote nam

zelti · 03-31-2019, 08:38 AM

MMLP was on the right track but it was too much of a reach

DynamiCz took this one fair

Vote DynamiCz

Kill Spree · 04-01-2019, 06:53 AM

Nam wins

Flow · 04-01-2019, 06:56 AM

8 - 0 dyna wins

03-28-2019, 02:38 PM	#3
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829178	I'm appalled... That tough ACTING uh get a rope around ya neck - then a fall Never been student of month - he'll be one when they find a star hanging off the wall __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

03-31-2019, 08:38 AM	#11
zelti Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 346 Rep Power: 0	MMLP was on the right track but it was too much of a reach DynamiCz took this one fair Vote DynamiCz __________________ Words bitches don’t say: 1. Hazel (hey zel)

03-28-2019, 10:24 AM	#2
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 600 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768087	Imma draw the line through his voting ring, fuck the Cliques referrals Im outta their radius and twice the Dy amateur in his circle

03-29-2019, 08:58 AM	#6
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,209 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535865	V -- Dynamicz here, star hanging was cool. MMLP good effort here w/ the tieins but they looked just hashed together if I'm being honest.. plus st amateur don't work in any accent afaik.

03-29-2019, 10:21 AM	#7
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	DynamiCz had a cool bar, dy amateur doesn't sound like diameter to me but it was a cool attempt V/DynamiCz

03-29-2019, 01:19 PM	#9
White LGI Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 2,034 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Vote dyn I just felt it was more polished n more creative

03-29-2019, 10:22 PM	#10
Miss Netcees Netcees's Hottest lady <3 Join Date: Mar 2019 Posts: 99 Rep Power: 335414	I enjoy both punchlines nam more soild Vote nam

04-01-2019, 06:53 AM	#12
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,439 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645695	Nam wins