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Old 05-10-2019, 02:53 PM   #2741
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my whole life living tactical, a radical
after sabbatical its back to you
a trend yall battle through, snaggle toothed
rhyme harder than when Pac had the juice.
remnants of the past packed with clues
watch me whip, yall keep the mask & noose
the tragic truth wrapped in tombs
speaking on your behalf clasping jewels
this is who you want to bring action to?
working with half a screw, thats obtuse
what a scenario that could carry you.
catch shots while I catch the venereal
schedule a dr appt the next day
give a flock what my ex say.
you birds all the same
word usage ill & launch like catapult
coming in bolder, I laugh at dolts
associated press got me on hold
ran up in a plane yelling Geronimo
years of penning flow with no repentence
end it the same way I finish this s...
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Old 05-11-2019, 07:37 AM   #2742
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unbox the tale and let the people savor the plot
we all feel the weight of the clock as we race to the top
age is a bob, swinging with biological rhythm
everything is in steady flux in a cosmic transition
negative or positive, the constant shift is implicit
a billion changes are encapsulated within a minute
a blend of potions and poisons, smoke and anointing
life is parallel to the dice-rolls and the coin spins.

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Old 05-13-2019, 11:46 PM   #2743
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Call the jailer & the jeweler
lace me with gems for the humor
embezzler & mover
rhyme like he flailed in a stupor
writers dont write like they used ta
escape & W like DB Cooper
make the shot, And1 on ya losers
ball & point, Triangle offense in Bermuda
holla at me if you need a tutor
been writing free before the computers
cleaner than users of the loofers
bang heads harder than sub-woofers
ukulele in the background got me heated
roasting pigs like we feasting
catching up to styles from last season
get lifted & walk on water, a personal jesus
restoring faith to the lost & egregious
consider it demeaning
consider it senseless or conceited
a bag full of cheez its
topped with cheese whiz
left the contenders like gee whiz
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Old 05-14-2019, 04:52 AM   #2744
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and i mean this another chapter with a rather mean fix
toss some water on that phoenix with a mean drip
heres some kleenex make some room im gonna squeeze in
cheap seats with the cheap gin big chief with a mean grin
always gave momma grief head feet in the deep end
these turns got some deep bends you gotta learn how to lean in
counting cheese wiz melting while the seas red doritos with a free spread
preplexed so preserve now a perverted reflection only seems worse
when the weeds next i move like a creeps thirst smooth like a beach shirt
sally sold some sea shells but she only sees dirt i told her baby get clean first
and maybe you will see worth and thats worth a steal if you seem hurt
you was already worth a meal with a free smirk in a jean shirt that energy works

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Old 05-14-2019, 03:58 PM   #2745
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the way I swing swords, fall, off balance
make fun of what you hold to yall standards
spin the earth towards the wrong axis
misinterpret the line they caught backwards
back-flip judo kick its the calm master.
hold the globe within my palm....
Atlas
answer to these man made etchings
God is in your presence its worth mentioning.
the clips are extending
the whips we presenting...
build pyramids, fools feel fear in this.
clearly its the new hope
hang like new rope its the experience
forget appearances if you too close
outta ya perimeter, too clear to miss
hitting each shot like Toni Kukoc
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Old 05-17-2019, 11:46 PM   #2746
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Cops asking "who's dope?"
The only time you'd say it was me when you vote
Only 2 weeks left on paper, then it's back to audios
Back to supplying you with lines to go inside ya nose
I'm talking; violent blows,
a bullet through the head the way ya mind explodes
Brain matter everywhere/ your mind just roams
Waiting for me, wondering if i will show,
Take it from me, get the money, chat, we go
After that? you smoke, a relationship as simple as that, you know,
Never though u would crack the code,
asked, "where did u get that?" and the cracker told
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Old 05-18-2019, 12:32 AM   #2747
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Im caught up in a weird mix, societal experiments
others lack experience, I blend inside
expel them bloodsuckers & push the pest aside.
things are too clear to miss, if you next to ride.
dont touch the knob, just vibe when you hearin this
seats cocoa & lavender, yall local perimeters
we out of bounds twisted like the blunt, Cocoa & Lavender
Im leanin in the cut like peroxide
ladies take they clothes off & show me their soft side
ever since we got high she think we a thing like mock trials
feel the sigh in I, she react like Eva Braun & pop vials
let caps peel when the doc is operatin
study a gemini hemisphere during copulation
restore the population while the beat fades out
aroma fills the sky like there was blue cheese laid out
expensive taste with the expense of God
explore each cavity too deeply it will leave mental scars
take it how you want it, my pen soooooo long
that it will have another rhyme sent tomorrow
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Old 05-18-2019, 07:04 PM   #2748
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you suckers on here acting all nerdy
you're not worthy
you probly have herpes
it's okay i'm just being mirthy
mid-life crisis when you turn thirty
older females acting flirty
my pen is so short
abort
what's your next retort?
i'd like to build a fort
or play a sport
on a court
just watched that johnny cash movie
it was just okay, truly
you'll have to do more to fool me
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Old 05-19-2019, 03:06 AM   #2749
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I ponder days of being a giraffe
I knew what was coming, seeing the path
Twas I who was now leading the pack
My neck would stretch with the deepest of laughs
Man you'd spot me, see, I'm a giraffe...
An instrument of the past hidden in glass
Tickets to grab and associated wisdoms alas
I wonder and I ponder, chew the highest leaf
You wish you could also be a giraffe.
It's ok....it's all good
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Old 05-20-2019, 06:03 AM   #2750
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Consciousness-altering electronics,lower brain logic
Follow the same promises,dollars spent omish grin
spark up the pot with the common sense, opening rite
future is bright , illuminati,but don't remember losing your life
get your arugula sliced, with a tuna fish knife,movement at night

unusual,clearly these styles are unpleasant,absolutely real, your pretending
ya bitch waits for a day to exit,my bitch begs me to bring the next chick,
chik fil lay with the bread sticks, sam i am with a deathwish,
your a ham ,your a dead snitch,time is endless and so confusing
smell the ozone threw neon tubing , immersive experience to consuming
inhuman,i don't know whats real and whats in movies, lost boy for real
so remake the goonies ..

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Old 05-28-2019, 05:10 AM   #2751
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banshees and gargoyles , goblins and werewolves,
sleep paralysis ,praying to god somebody can hear you
vampires and reptilians , lodges of secrets,the eagle watches
apocalypse thesis , clocks have no meaning
time only stops when its repeating,
cause you don't question a reason, thoughts are deceiving
dreaming with a clever knife ,and it's not for a beatin
not for the screamish, fantasy's in my mind
placed there,from designs like Shakespeare or cape fear
chose your destiny,nobody stays here
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Old 06-11-2019, 08:12 PM   #2752
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I could care less what one represents/
now, later, or in the past tense/
Hench the reason I'm drenched fumagating your future clouded in nonsense/
how can one comprehend my dense? city fails to know what u have meant/
blasphemous, is the one upon the fence/ back up in the trench/ While u back up artists are stuck on the bench.
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Old 07-03-2019, 12:54 AM   #2753
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your black ass will still get chased down and lynched
They'll burn a crucifix in ya yard, then burn down your crib,
anit shit changed, cops pull you over? still shit stains
still getting a broken shoulder while getting detained
so don't cross over that line into his lane,
and this is the advice they use to give may
Now go to school and remember who's the enemy
don't fight him physically, use your mind mentally
everybody saying education is the remedy
I say that's what's feeding the beast, negative energy
By 23, most of them will be in jail, or dead, clinically
government funded study done independently

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Old 07-05-2019, 01:55 AM   #2754
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If you only knew the turth, you would lose your shit, you would lose your grip on reality, when everything becomes lies and fallacies, when you don't know what year it is because they calculated time inaccurately, on a level were people have to fasten their seats if they're going to try to follow along with the words that you speak, always the same responses, " what you on? won't ya burn one with me?", Makes you wanna write a song and murder a beat, when the writings on the walls of the caves, and hieroglyphs, begin to make sense, when you find out all the experts are really ignorant, and a college degree is just a tool used to rule men, you know it's over then, you're bird shit crazy, in the eyes of all your friends
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Urban dialect.. this shit is old news. I've been bored with these sources.
Ever since I first heard it been waiting on apoacalyspe holding all four of my horses.
For the spirit, you'll rap. Sure. And my wordplay is seen as godlike.
One thing clearly true in this string theory is all of these battle threads will not tie.
I spin niche. flex with arms like popeye, this chicken fried.
I aim the bars at you relentlessly get sentenced to death till their judges give em life
I missed my battle with hush. Lucky he no showed I would've turned him to shrapnel and dust
I no showed too I'm like 0 and 2. I planning a trip for me and you and the only thing I'm packing is punches
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Fuck a structure - glory hole.
Time after time is how the story's told
Concepts rich with words that's poorly wrote.
Yellow diarrhea with the shit, yes it's a corny flow
I took a cheap shot. In bad taste but it did the job
The votes I get are like how when you roll the strip - you're getting robbed
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Old 07-13-2019, 12:15 PM   #2757
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arrogance left the soul caught in the abyss
watching as she was rocking her hips
motivation left me lost in the same shit
so now I use caution when I claim chicks
they leave ya brain rotten, insane quick
consume ya soul, distraught in arrangement
schizophrenia takes over
how you face yaself when you made over?
girl ya need some help & some tame Oprah
drop the daytime TV
if you hate the life we see
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There is energy in movement
And the enemy can use it
Remember Lucy use to be
An entity of music
Then he split himself in half
To produce the first caduceus
The fusion of the two formed
An imperfect union
The lucidity of dreams
made the rudiments of humans
From Judas to Confucius
Or Jupiter and Cupid
Theology
Philosophy
Mythology
Confusion
Can science even prove it?
If humans are imperfect
That makes absolution rootless
Relying on our hubris
Their lying cause their clueless
Computerized Eden
Is dying cause it’s fruitless
Skynet is looming
My mindset is Lucas
I’m Luke Skywalker
And I’m sliding on the moon with
A ruby studded glove
Leaving Mike Jackson shoe prints
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Shoe prints ... ^ that dudes sick I move quick like a ten speed
I’m an Emcee going with the flow like a broken down jet ski
I’ll hit you with a right leave molars popping out your left cheek
I’m the type to skip the Rosetta Stone across the dead see
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Fentanyl pours across the concrete - lead sieve
In Bedstuy the wretch sleeps, and instead guys, let's gently
Hire Jack the Ripper on a contracting basis
so he can sever the tendonitis chords separating the subjects from their appendices
Debt, greed, cess, pleas, in an era of melons & tambourines
where a Greek chemist sleeps, where they developed a hellish septic grease
You can memorize a holy book, worship sepulchers in the dark
but with that photographic memory, why not take a snapshot of all that's been thus far?

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