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Old 08-13-2013, 02:50 PM   #421
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WATCHIN FOR FALLIN PIANOS WHILE IM WATCHIN SOPRANOS
GET MONEY UP PUT PUSSYS DOWN LIKE BONPENSIERO
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Old 08-13-2013, 03:00 PM   #422
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@Split Eight right into the corner, grip fate like its a disorder,
I've ripped faith on sick days but this way I can do postmortem.
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Old 08-14-2013, 03:53 PM   #423
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I wanna, drop faces till my rhymes melt,
rock more cocaine than Winehouse,
and if I drop dead yesterday- my medic state
will be more morbid grace than pathetic lie-down.
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Old 08-14-2013, 04:05 PM   #424
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I wanna, snort lines to enhance my imagination,
transform lions into a man with claws.
Conform with time until I stand there sedated
by a storm of flies that'll condemn us all.
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Old 08-14-2013, 07:29 PM   #425
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You see,


Most of these men have always been in these enclosed cells
Repent for their sins, attempt to change the reflection of self
Yet most of them i'm noticing, fail to break that connection to hell
The department of correction, collects them, expecting it'll help
Let's build a criminal school and deliver em food a dog wouldn't eat
Chain em, keep each convict on leash to teach them how to be(neat!)
Seperate each of the dudes by race, affiliation, and sexual views
Hire a crew of corrupt guards to patrol the tiers and plush yards
Enable the perspiring fear and rivalry sneer to callus the hard

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Old 08-14-2013, 08:51 PM   #426
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Not long ago, the Winter snow built a throne,
God's role was overthrown by a shield and sword.
A glass of wine was over filled by the devil's drone,
the last time God shouldered guilt - special no more.
Demons burned the sky, the kingdom jeopardized,
freedom turned to lies, the reasons were crystallized.
Faith was a nostalgic bliss, erased by passionate sins,
fate would lead a tragic end, sprayed by leviathan's mist.
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Old 08-15-2013, 04:19 PM   #427
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Carnivorous extinct, my consciousness is falling apart,
monstrous killings, something ominous is calling my heart.
Sittin' on habits, television static gnawing at my nerves,
wishing for passion when trafic is blocking the herd.
A glass shatters, I gasp faster than a newborn baby,
I dash backwards to drag after the queue formed lately.
Walk into the kitchen, shocked by a smitten wife,
God isn't listenin' as she's dropped by a submissive strike.
A freak with his teeth deep in her arteries,
I reach for his sleeve but she can't hardly breathe.
Punches rain on his stomach and face,
stuck a blade through his fuckin' brain.
As I fall to my knees, begging God please,
she says she loves me, then is off to peace.
My tears drench her cheeks, I feared this for weeks,
guess I'll bury her body, the idea shears me deep.
As I attempt to wrap her in a sheet, she finds a breath,
and the woman of my dreams bites my neck.
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Old 08-15-2013, 06:58 PM   #428
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I got, suckers tryna spin in my execution
like I bred em into students, left as a nuisance
read up on the craft & said I'm a Judas
but I'm beheading the dead taking head's of the losers
more in the swing of things than y'all medical rumors
testicle tumors, I'm not upset it's just humorous
I'm nothing but a threat introducing you to a bed full of tulips
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Old 08-16-2013, 02:17 AM   #429
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its that flow the whole line shit. that quote on quote fly shit. the most engrossed rhyme slick, overdosed high spit. holy smokes I'm sick, and coast to coast i rip. From Okotoks where i live to the Poconos Islands. motorboat fly chicks for those with most sized tits. no one knows why its just protocol i guess....
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Old 08-16-2013, 05:37 AM   #430
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Flow is all a mess. Never is this author's pen dragging.
Pull a sword from my stoned mind: Arthur Pendragon.
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Old 08-16-2013, 07:16 PM   #431
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Listen Mary...what you make go round...
sticks with me forever and I won't go out...
no I won't run out, when I get high up
you like to go down...
no doubt...

but now I'm deliberately skipping town without you
I'm doubtful you'd understand, so I'm not about to...
no...don't say a word, show no doubt...& don't speak
in your mind is where I stay but your heart is where you hold me
I'm moving to my own beat..we in different hospitals
basically when you are this broken..that recovery shit's impossible
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Old 08-18-2013, 03:31 AM   #432
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im literally gross disgusting and sick fuck
im spitting these flows as much as i wish brah
lyrically dope, im such an enigma
you hearin me yo? fuck it, i give up...
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Consorted with my assortment over smorgasbord accomplishments
honored with the topical slaughterer, armor of God with armament..
surrounding my hardest of hardships...borderline schizophrenic
another alias with my name attached to the book open-ended
broken head...arm...leg....& nose from tennis...you bitches belong on Venus
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Seriously drinking Old Milwaukee. beers be sinking oh so softly, cheers for thinking cokes and vodka spirits be for ho's and not ya peers who be ya bro's its awfully weird sticky gross and sloppy here you bitches know when pop appears i hit the road. the bottles clear? its simply no. i'm not a queer, i drink alone to calm the fear of leaving home
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It’s Cognac and Bourbon til I’ve gone past the verge of eye-contact, just serve ‘em in my shot glass like ‘Perfect,’. I’m beyond acting personable.
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its that flow the whole line shit. that quote on quote fly shit. the most engrossed rhyme slick, overdosed high spit. holy smokes I'm sick, and coast to coast i rip. From Okotoks where i live to the Poconos Islands. motorboat fly chicks for those with most sized tits. no one knows why its just protocol i guess....

Hold the phone, side kick! Lets both just throw right fists ‘til they’re comatosed by this, on some blow-for-blow hijinks! We’ll hold our own, go for broke in focus mode, doja throws’ll leave ‘em with broken noses & I hope they choke while hit – I don’t evoke Heimlichs to so-and-so rhymers!
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It's no mystery, anger lives in me, brutality visionry, no vitality
Typically just suicidal puzzling, tongue is idle, vile bubbling
You didn't earn it, your vermin, the envy in me is churning
It's troubling, its torment, I'm crumbling, my spirit is burning
Your a bully, a hornet, but i'm through ignoring, i'm warning
If you continue, this story gets gory, the blood will be pouring
My life is on the menu, no restoring, I'll be gone, and you morning
You'll be left hoarding a guilty conscience, turning monster at forty
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Peep how I blaze it leave suckas in amazement
eyes sunk in like an asian. burnin like a cajun
chasin bank statements and worldwide recognition
only keep your girl for the head and upkept kitchen
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Your slit is up to view. Miss "I'd be less promiscuous with you".
I'm sorry, but life's taught that if I believe that, I'm some idiot or fool.
You've a pretty face. Pressed against mine, in a camera fit into view,
but you're just a bar. Another dozen'll come that'll slip into stools,
with quirks, and tits just like you.
I'm no charmer. Just a more poetic version of missives drooled,
but I would admit, life would be much prettier with you.
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