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Old 08-18-2021, 03:27 PM   #21
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Old 08-18-2021, 03:36 PM   #22
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Ahhh shit I need someone to delete my last post. Apparently, I was writing at the same time Objective was casting his vote.
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Old 08-18-2021, 03:49 PM   #23
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Ahhh shit I need someone to delete my last post. Apparently, I was writing at the same time Objective was casting his vote.
Lmfao, that makes sense in my head. I tried to see if you were going for some bait and switch concept at first, lol

Delete my last comment regarding the piece posted. Post it in the OM regardless Activate Self, both of those are fire and the one that ties into the picture deserves shine.

I can cast another vote as well if you're within the deadline and I was early on the trigger in terms of that
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Old 08-18-2021, 03:53 PM   #24
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Lmfao, that makes sense in my head. I tried to see if you were going for some bait and switch concept at first, lol

Delete my last comment regarding the piece posted. Post it in the OM regardless Activate Self, both of those are fire and the one that ties into the picture deserves shine.

I can cast another vote as well if you're within the deadline and I was early on the trigger in terms of that
It’s all good, O. I’m pretty sure I missed the deadline by a day or two. I had a lot going on. In any case, thanks for the thorough breakdown and vote. Respect.
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Old 08-18-2021, 04:26 PM   #25
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Old 08-18-2021, 04:37 PM   #26
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Old 08-18-2021, 09:00 PM   #27
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All contestants let's get some votes in...I will have all votes in by tonight.
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Old 08-18-2021, 11:42 PM   #28
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Old 08-19-2021, 12:44 AM   #29
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@Master Rock - breeze'll = breeze will tip. It's a contraption and grammatically sound, believe it or not. Good stuff, loving the video votes

Also, oh shit. Mixed the days up cus I'm heavily sleep deprived. Can get votes in by tonight but haven't slept for 24+ hours and only got 4 hours of sleep between monday and Tuesday (it's now 7am where I'm at). After my vote in the battle with activate self my focus/mental capacity is gone. I will not disrespect anyone's writing, especially not to the extent of Universe etc., with less than subpar reading cus it deserves full attention. Not that I can't but I won't until I've gotten at least a few hours of sleep. Will vote when I wake up
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Old 08-19-2021, 08:13 AM   #30
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Creativity--
Entertainment--
Flow-- candy
Rhyme Scheme-- candy
Consistency/Topic-- candy
Literary Devices (alliteration, assonance, allusion, etc..) -- objective
Emotion-- candy
Imagery-- candy


I feel candy had most of the elements to make this a complete verse. Objective came pretty nice DOnt get me wrong, but candy seemed to outclass his opponent.


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Hey Smod, please provide quotable examples or a sentence or two with reasoning for each of the sections. Thanks.
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Old 08-19-2021, 07:30 PM   #33
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close one in activate self vs master rock get around it
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There's your reason why I said earlier I don't want him vote (or it to count) on my battle and poking sticks (not giving either of us a name on creativity department f.ex) I don't trust he's not biased/give proper reads, he might edit with good enough reasoning but I don't trust him to see writing for writing plus only voting on my battle is telling. I respect your decision regardless but I want that to be known.

Ask anyone on this site if I've ever requested such a thing as well, and I've had my feuds with people. Lars, Geno, Inno, Mike Wrecka etc. I still trust those people 100% to keep it real in terms of text without fault. I honestly don't think smod got integrity enough to differentiate disc-agreements and writing.

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Old 08-19-2021, 10:51 PM   #35
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There's your reason why I said earlier I don't want him vote (or it to count) on my battle and poking sticks (not giving either of us a name on creativity department f.ex) I don't trust he's not biased/give proper reads, he might edit with good enough reasoning but I don't trust him to see writing for writing plus only voting on my battle is telling. I respect your decision regardless but I want that to be known.

Ask anyone on this site if I've ever requested such a thing as well, and I've had my feuds with people. Lars, Geno, Inno, Mike Wrecka etc. I still trust those people 100% to keep it real in terms of text without fault. I honestly don't think smod got integrity enough to differentiate disc-agreements and writing.

Getting to voting now
I hear you, I talked to Candy about making a more streamlined voting process with those guidelines. But yet if you're choosing the person based off those guidelines you got to provide examples. So I'm waiting on smod to give us some quotables or deeper reasoning behind it so we can consider the vote.
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Old 08-19-2021, 10:59 PM   #36
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I definitely am cus I know there's grounds for it, and from his actions alone in this tourney/chat, that should be examples enough.

No entertainment or enjoyment on the vote to either me or candy, the only battle he voted on was the one a person didn't want him to vote in. How you're still taking him seriously/asking for more examples the way he gives 0 fuck about the tourney is boggling my mind.

It's your tourney. You do what you think is right, and I'll respect that decision but I personally don't want his vote to count regardless of what he does cus there's strong reasons for bias and the amount of effort into the only battle he's dropped a vote in. Nah, shit stinks and you know it
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Personally I don't like the multiple picture idea.

Isn't the point of topicals to both write to the same picture and see who does it better?

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Isn't the point of topicals to both write to the same picture and see who does it better?

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Agreed. Next round that is cut.
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@everyone We need your help with voting on this battle to close it out.
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