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Old 05-09-2021, 04:21 PM   #1
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Old 06-18-2021, 09:27 PM   #2
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Old 07-24-2021, 08:28 PM   #3
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I like this man lyrics are cool, beat is cool as well. I do like your voice too I just feel like you could maybe bring the intensity to a higher level, it just sounds like you’re speaking to your audience instead of rapping to them. It might also help to throw down another track or two of vocals and layer them, I understand this was probably just something you throw together quick and didn’t really get too deep into the mixing process. Just some ideas from my standpoint, keep spitting man
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Pretty good for early stuff man, flow is decent, and stayed on beat most of the time, lyrics wise I felt you were just making sure your were rhyming, content wise seemed like a freestyle. "my rhymes are worth their weight in carrots?" LOL

keep going its gets easier the more you do fo sho
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lmao I think he meant as in 24 carat gold. Not in the Bugs Bunny sense.
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lmao I think he meant as it 24 carat gold. Not in the Bugs Bunny sense.
makes the line even worse, as that's not measurement of weight but purity if referring to "karat"
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basically said his rhymes hold no weight, and I agree
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this was dope. ^^^^
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shoutout to "Murkin_Dem"...
LATE EDIT**** Shoutout to BOTH (Murk too), BUT It's
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I saw him on Youtube, but pretty sure he may have been somewhere else...
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