Hello, Melancholia (EP)

[Adverse]

I dropped this little EP on Friday, know my couple tracks I posted had a mixed reception but I wanted to put this out here for the people who did enjoy my last offering. I appreciate this site and the people here; I want to turn my attention more towards audio because I just feel like I have a lot to say. Thanks for anyone listening

http://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/djGibmCowACFPFE36

[Geno]

Edited in after post. (I just realised who you remind me of yo. Lmfao, yo, yoursound reminds me of Necro. Lmao, but thats not a bad thing or anything, necro is one of the rawest voices out there. So its dope)

So just got through the intro track.

Idk man. Its something about your sound that i really fuck with. Im gonna give this a listen front to back (i never listen to music anymore, so this is odd for me)..

I still feel like, just based on this first track i just heard, that your vocals could use turned down a bit. Your a touch to high over the beat. Ill have to listen with headphones on to be sure. But thats what im thinking. Anyway. Shit sounds dope man

[Geno]

[Ouch]

Doesn’t sound like necro at all

[Pakistani Hand Cannon]

necro is absolute garbage juice mann

anyway

how longs the ep yo?

i might give it a listen start to end if im in the mood n its not too long

[Geno]

I meant his voice. Not anything else

[The Dead Poet]

Not bad. Not a style I like. But you sound like you know what sound you're going for so props for figuring that out. Keep building on it. Some double ups on vocals in spots would really help you. Especially when your doing the Sing songy hook shit. Vocals mixing come across real straight forward. I hear the sligh adlibs here and there, but think if you work on that shit a little more it help make the vocals sound fuller in the mix.

[Pakistani Hand Cannon]

Originally Posted by White Earl

I meant his voice. Not anything else

yeah, nah i gotchu.

was just sayin i cant stand that nigga

[Ghost1]

Originally Posted by White Earl

I meant his voice. Not anything else

Maybe old necro

Definitely more mac miller tho

Voice wise

[Adverse]

Originally Posted by Pakistani Hand Cannon

how longs the ep yo?

i might give it a listen start to end if im in the mood n its not too long

I believe it clocks in at 23:00 or so, so it’s not very long at all. I appreciate you for wanting to listen

Thanks @The Dead Poet I appreciate the critique and yeah mixing was kind of rough, I recorded all of this on bandlab so I haven’t mastered all of their mixing tools and what not. I was using audacity last time I was making music so there’s a learning curve but I appreciate the kind words. Think I finally figured out that the whole punchline heavy, quick rap wasn’t really my thing so I’m going to continue with this style from now on.

@Ghost1 that’s the second time I’ve got Mac Miller comparisons, which he is a huge inspiration of mine artistically but I wasn’t trying to sound like him too much, I did pay homage to him though in this track

https://m.soundcloud.com/user-601544...miller-tribute

I really appreciate all the critique and everyone for listening guys means a lot

[Adverse]

Originally Posted by Pakistani Hand Cannon

how longs the ep yo?

i might give it a listen start to end if im in the mood n its not too long

I believe it clocks in at 23:00 or so, so it’s not very long at all. I appreciate you for wanting to listen

Thanks @The Dead Poet I appreciate the critique and yeah mixing was kind of rough, I recorded all of this on bandlab so I haven’t mastered all of their mixing tools and what not. I was using audacity last time I was making music so there’s a learning curve but I appreciate the kind words. Think I finally figured out that the whole punchline heavy, quick rap wasn’t really my thing so I’m going to continue with this style from now on.

@Ghost1 that’s the second time I’ve got Mac Miller comparisons, which he is a huge inspiration of mine artistically but I wasn’t trying to sound like him too much, I did pay homage to him though in this track

https://m.soundcloud.com/user-601544...miller-tribute

I really appreciate all the critique and everyone for listening guys means a lot

[Ouch]

I’ll listen tonight and give you some feedback... 23 mins isn’t too much to ask I support people still trying to make music for fun.. always wanted to be musically inclined I just wasn’t... rapped on a few songs that other people did the work for... wasn’t too bad for being a kid, but never went any further... I’ll play this a little later

[Pakistani Hand Cannon]

23 mins isn’t too much to ask I support people still trying to make music for fun

then go head & listen to it nigga stead of giving fuckin speeches all the time