Week 4: Letterman (2-1) vs. Defiant (2-1) - LET WINS

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

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@Letterman
@Defiant

[Letterman]

Ok.

[Defiant]

In

[Defiant]

Ext

[Letterman]

Originally Posted by Defiant

Ext

Cool.

[Defiant]

Sent 10 to blue

[Letterman]

U’ve been average for years. U could never compete, son
You’re Inno position to win, & that was proven after he beat you in Week 1
Have my Mexican homies kidnap him. They carrying plenty guns
Surround him with so many Aliens & Machines, he‘d swear he ended up at Area 51
& girls literally hate him. U come around & they all wish u would die
It’s ironic.. cuz that Near Def experience, actually makes em wanna commit suicide
U’ll die from one bullet. & after ur ghost pops out, ya soul gets seven
When the shots hit your spiritual journey off, Def you aura about to go to heaven
He’s addicted to Japanese porn. We all need healing, of course
But that’s a battle with anime, that would even make Ike Turner feel some remorse

[Blue Bayou]

Defiants Verse

Originally Posted by Letterman in LLL FINAL

You’re just as trash as him, but your bias got u thinkin u deserve clout
But the fact you hate Jem.. has nothing to do with why your concepts never work out

That's what wins the LLL? Would hate to see what this jerk got rid
Such a forced example of gym, it's resembles a home workout vid
Number 1 on rb now? here it's normal u fail
If youre top on paper.....il Take off letterhead like a more informal email
Wanted to be a artist, but ya pals were like 'please don't rap'
With just one drop your circle closes, similar to cod war zone map
After last week we wanted u to sign out, we wanted u to roll right!
Were saying u've wrote to much!......get rid of lines!.....weve even got Lars messagin the whole site
Never with a chick, getter better? Couldn't even convince his dreams
He's not just taking social distancing seriously, he's been staying away from bitches since his teens

[Neighbor]

Area 51, spiritual journey, closer

vs.

Opener, Letterhead, COD


Good back & forth, I’ve got Letter being slightly more consistent & polished here. Could really go either way, honestly

v/ Letterman

[Answer]

U’ve been average for years. U could never compete, son
You’re Inno position to win, & that was proven after he beat you in Week 1

solid, pronunciations on the rhythm is a reach though 7.5/10

Have my Mexican homies kidnap him. They carrying plenty guns
Surround him with so many Aliens & Machines, he‘d swear he ended up at Area 51

lol this is kinda funny but i've seen similar concepts 7.5/10

& girls literally hate him. U come around & they all wish u would die
It’s ironic.. cuz that Near Def experience, actually makes em wanna commit suicide

this is dope 8.5/10

U’ll die from one bullet. & after ur ghost pops out, ya soul gets seven
When the shots hit your spiritual journey off, Def you aura about to go to heaven

Nah i wasnt feeling this, the wording is just weird in a couple places 6/10

He’s addicted to Japanese porn. We all need healing, of course
But that’s a battle with anime, that would even make Ike Turner feel some remorse

Cool concept, think it could've been worded a little harsher 8/10

overall 7.5 / 10





That's what wins the LLL? Would hate to see what this jerk got rid
Such a forced example of gym, it's resembles a home workout vid

this is okay, kinda using the same concept he did though so its a bit redundant 7/10

Number 1 on rb now? here it's normal u fail
If youre top on paper.....il Take off letterhead like a more informal email

I realllllly like the concept, the execution could've been just a little cleaner. 8.5/10

Wanted to be a artist, but ya pals were like 'please don't rap'
With just one drop your circle closes, similar to cod war zone map

never played cod, but the concept is kinda self explanatory. Seems too similar to a lot of these types of videogame lines. 7/10

After last week we wanted u to sign out, we wanted u to roll right!
Were saying u've wrote to much!......get rid of lines!.....weve even got Lars messagin the whole site

funny concept, but again the wording on this just didn't connect the concepts together as cleanly as it could've. 7.5/10

Never with a chick, getter better? Couldn't even convince his dreams
He's not just taking social distancing seriously, he's been staying away from bitches since his teens

Nahhh I've already seen like 3 of these similar social distancing lines in the UP tournament alone. You gotta have a more innovative angle to pull this off. 7/10

overall 7.4/10


suicide and letterhead were my favorites from the battle. I think letter's wording was better executed and that edged it in his favor

mvgt - letterman

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Letterman

U’ve been average for years. U could never compete, son
You’re Inno position to win, & that was proven after he beat you in Week 1
Solid opener
Have my Mexican homies kidnap him. They carrying plenty guns
Surround him with so many Aliens & Machines, he‘d swear he ended up at Area 51
Ok kinda simple but hit
& girls literally hate him. U come around & they all wish u would die
It’s ironic.. cuz that Near Def experience, actually makes em wanna commit suicide
Nice nameplay, well worded,
U’ll die from one bullet. & after ur ghost pops out, ya soul gets seven
When the shots hit your spiritual journey off, Def you aura about to go to heaven
Don’t like too many name plays in a short battle like this but was still ok
He’s addicted to Japanese porn. We all need healing, of course
But that’s a battle with anime, that would even make Ike Turner feel some remorse
Not particularly feeling

Vs

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Defiants Verse



That's what wins the LLL? Would hate to see what this jerk got rid
Such a forced example of gym, it's resembles a home workout vid
What this jerk got rid? Not sure about that man
Number 1 on rb now? here it's normal u fail
If youre top on paper.....il Take off letterhead like a more informal email
Lol ok
Wanted to be a artist, but ya pals were like 'please don't rap'
With just one drop your circle closes, similar to cod war zone map
It’s ok, seen tonnes of warzone bars now
After last week we wanted u to sign out, we wanted u to roll right!
Were saying u've wrote to much!......get rid of lines!.....weve even got Lars messagin the whole site
Ok
Never with a chick, getter better? Couldn't even convince his dreams
He's not just taking social distancing seriously, he's been staying away from bitches since his teens
Nah kinda weak - executes we’ll just very predictable so not really feeling

Ok this was cool and kinda close. I thought Letterman JUST had the edge, being a tad fresher and read with a little more sting. I thought letterhead was LOTB but then a few bars from letterman followed that. He has to take it for consistency throughout. Enjoyed both verses guys, good shit from both

Vote - Letterman

[FGR]

Letters open was cool..decent hit
Near def was a cool np.....I thought it hit hard . Worded nicely ..
Everything else wasn't really worth quoting...to be honest this is one of the weaker letterman verses I've seen ...wasn't bad but it wasn't up to par with wat u normally post.. u usually have a bar or two in ur verse that is dope..and good punches that follow..here u gave nothing hard hitting but a decent hit and a few heavy jabs..no hate
VS
Workout vid didn't work for me... Letterhead I've seen a few times..this wasnt the best flip.. decent tho..not bad
Warzone map was ok... Closer is getting played..seen a few..and I pretty much had this bar in my video battle... Overall not bad.. nothing hard hitting but you were consistently jabbing
VOTE-LETTER slightly stronger bars but not bad from both

[Ryno]

Opener, Near Def
VS
War zone

...wasn’t feeling a whole lot from Def
Lines didnt come off clean. Letterhead
Was an almost

V/Letterman

[Aura]

opener, area 51, near def, anime

Vs.

cod war



V-Letter

[Blue Bayou]

Let wins