Aero 0-0 vs Yppih 0-0 - AERO WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

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Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 23th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Aero @Yppih

[Yppih]

Goin 14'
Aero aka Malayse aka Starfaggot aka the other million names you got.

You got a big ego, but these hammers will feel like a Thor hit.
& u got ya head up so far ya own ass all you can see is your shit.
No RW D/r to save you now honestly your work has always been common see
Since RW Aer hasn't been gettin love on the net.. you got a better shot wit E-harmony.
You been sellin ya wack mixtapes on the streets them shits should be free whore.
Cuz I know from personal experience that no one followin Aero unless its a detour.
Gettin dudes drunk, so they can big you up Aero? I'm not sure what u think it solves.
Ask any sober vet about him, they say this bud light with no drinks involved.
I see your view on stuff but your all talk Aero only about that jaw action.
The way this bitch be voicin her opinion I could mistake him for Tamar Braxton.
You can quit that thug talk, b4 Hip puts you in a bad place then.
I mean what do I have to lose when Aer only squeezin a pump at a gas station.
From Star to Malayse, with all these names how many times will u get warned kid.
Obviously your aliases are sufferin an identity crisis worse then Bourne did.

[Aero]

He harassed me
trying to sell this battle, I said just elevate a bit
pushed aero & got a fast ball thrown at his head, that's an elevator pitch
Your girl came over but I scoffed, bitch is still upset
She got out the car and was so Bland I told her to kill herself (#blacklivesmatter)
I mean yall seen his pics right? he's so fat I fear for this guy
If a girl say lean is her pref he'll produce that through tears in his eyes
parents never loved him, his flashbacks show he aint nothing
asked about a website
I said GoDaddy? he said "nooo, don't go daddy please! Mom, say something!!"
I created this persona and lived up to it, im what the fuss about
what you create from scratch? besides your herpes sore pussing out
he pm'ed for advice on his bars, I'm like who is this dumb hoe?
didn't think I'd use Algebra again but here I am trying to solve for the unknown
this backwards hippy broke as fuck, new apparel you really need some
last time you had a pair of shoos you asked two women for a threesome

[Unfukwitable]

YPPIH

You got a big ego, but these hammers will feel like a Thor hit.
& u got ya head up so far ya own ass all you can see is your shit.
- Na, its not creative & no sting was there.
No RW D/r to save you now honestly your work has always been common see
Since RW Aer hasn't been gettin love on the net.. you got a better shot wit E-harmony.
-Seen better eharmony concepts this was just basic and dull.
You been sellin ya wack mixtapes on the streets them shits should be free whore.
Cuz I know from personal experience that no one followin Aero unless its a detour.
-Arrow/Aero is nameplay thats been over done so if u think to use it u gotta come up with some mind blowing shit.
Gettin dudes drunk, so they can big you up Aero? I'm not sure what u think it solves.
Ask any sober vet about him, they say this bud light with no drinks involved.
- seen over and over.
I see your view on stuff but your all talk Aero only about that jaw action.
The way this bitch be voicin her opinion I could mistake him for Tamar Braxton.
- :-/
You can quit that thug talk, b4 Hip puts you in a bad place then.
I mean what do I have to lose when Aer only squeezin a pump at a gas station.
- :-/
From Star to Malayse, with all these names how many times will u get warned kid.
Obviously your aliases are sufferin an identity crisis worse then Bourne did.
- ehh nah

.... U need to focus on concepts and lines u think people won't think of off rip or just learn how to take your lines to the next level get deeper with the bars and be more harsh or u can take the clever approach but this verse wasn't it right here.



VS



AERO

He harassed me, trying to sell this battle, I said just elevate a bit
pushed aero & got a fast ball thrown at his head, that's an elevator pitch
- no I wasn't feelin this.
Your girl came over but I scoffed, bitch is still upset
She got out the car and was so Bland I told her to kill herself (#blacklivesmatter)
-doesnt rhyme and was just a concept.
I mean yall seen his pics right? he's so fat I fear for this guy
If a girl say lean is her pref he'll produce that through tears in his eyes
-nahh not feelin it.
parents never loved him, his flashbacks show he aint nothing
asked about a website
I said GoDaddy? he said "nooo, don't go daddy please! Mom, say something!!"
- get what u tried it just didn't work.
I created this persona and lived up to it, im what the fuss about
what you create from scratch? besides your herpes sore pussing out
- this was a weird but better than everything else Ive read in a way.
he pm'ed for advice on his bars, I'm like who is this dumb hoe?
didn't think I'd use Algebra again but here I am trying to solve for the unknown
- ehhh not really
this backwards hippy broke as fuck, new apparel you really need some
last time you had a pair of shoos you asked two women for a threesome
- best bar of the battle....

Idk if this is really Aero cus Ive read some dope shit from u in the past but this here wasnt nothing I expected tbh it just seemed rushed and thrown together no real heavy hits...

v/Aero

[Ace]

hippy man, i was feelin some of the concepts but the execution and creativity fell a lil flat.. aero was more polished here, algebra was coo and herpes sore was lotb

v aero

[Pinot Grij]

Yppih - detour line was nice.. Bud Light and Air Pump lines were also cool flips. Had to say I hated the weird tiny font and the lines also felt a little long overall.

Aero ahd more comedy in his lines - Bland, Go Daddy, lean. Herpes sore was LOTB for sure... real nice and the closer was comical as well.

Overall, I liked Yppih's hilites lines a lot, but I felt Aero had more consistency and the LOTB.

Vote -- Aero

[Mr. J]

You been sellin ya wack mixtapes on the streets them shits should be free whore.
Cuz I know from personal experience that no one followin Aero unless its a detour.
Gettin dudes drunk, so they can big you up Aero? I'm not sure what u think it solves.
Ask any sober vet about him, they say this bud light with no drinks involved.
^^^^
wtf @ the font though...anyway I thought these were the harder hitting punches
the gas station line was smooth but needed a better set up in my opinion...
the eHarmony, Bourne, lines seemed kind of old to me and just really obvious
maybe if you had a better approach they would have came off better nah'mean?
either way nice verse...

he pm'ed for advice on his bars, I'm like who is this dumb hoe?
didn't think I'd use Algebra again but here I am trying to solve for the unknown
this backwards hippy broke as fuck, new apparel you really need some
last time you had a pair of shoos you asked two women for a threesome
^^^^
this was probably the better executed part of your verse...
that go daddy line was pretty funny but I hate set ups like that either way
I wasn't really feeling the Bland line just because the whole thing seemed off
other than that I felt like you executed a well rounded verse

v/Aero, I feel he just executed a better set of punches and decent set ups
Yppih seemed to be off his game and that font really had me fucked up..
had he weaved some better lines together it may have worked better in the end
but I feel like Aero swept this out from under his feet with that closer
/seewhatIdidthere

[Netcees Battle League]

4-0 Aero

[Kill Spree]

Wasn't feelin much of hippy' stuff. He had some real played concepts. He needs to bring fresher/witty concepts to the table
Or
He won't last here

Wasn't feeling much of faggots bars either but he executed them
Better and they were more attacking really. His closer was prob bar of the battle but the rest were misses for me

Vote starfagaero

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Yppih

Goin 14'
Aero aka Malayse aka Starfaggot aka the other million names you got.

You got a big ego, but these hammers will feel like a Thor hit.
& u got ya head up so far ya own ass all you can see is your shit.
this is a good try, but it is kinda of weak
No RW D/r to save you now honestly your work has always been common see
Since RW Aer hasn't been gettin love on the net.. you got a better shot wit E-harmony.
ok this is a good personal, cool punch, aight dig it
You been sellin ya wack mixtapes on the streets them shits should be free whore.
Cuz I know from personal experience that no one followin Aero unless its a detour.
light, but ok
Gettin dudes drunk, so they can big you up Aero? I'm not sure what u think it solves.
Ask any sober vet about him, they say this bud light with no drinks involved.
wording is good, but the punch is weak
I see your view on stuff but your all talk Aero only about that jaw action.
The way this bitch be voicin her opinion I could mistake him for Tamar Braxton.
naaaahhhhh
You can quit that thug talk, b4 Hip puts you in a bad place then.
I mean what do I have to lose when Aer only squeezin a pump at a gas station.
cmon dude, this is super played and weak
From Star to Malayse, with all these names how many times will u get warned kid.
Obviously your aliases are sufferin an identity crisis worse then Bourne did.
nah

Originally Posted by Starfaggot for life

He harassed me
trying to sell this battle, I said just elevate a bit
pushed aero & got a fast ball thrown at his head, that's an elevator pitch
wack
Your girl came over but I scoffed, bitch is still upset
She got out the car and was so Bland I told her to kill herself
wack
I mean yall seen his pics right? he's so fat I fear for this guy
If a girl say lean is her pref he'll produce that through tears in his eyes
wack
parents never loved him, his flashbacks show he aint nothing
asked about a website
I said GoDaddy? he said "nooo, don't go daddy please! Mom, say something!!"
cringe worthy
I created this persona and lived up to it, im what the fuss about
what you create from scratch? besides your herpes sore pussing out
admitting ur fake, awesome. this wack too
he pm'ed for advice on his bars, I'm like who is this dumb hoe?
didn't think I'd use Algebra again but here I am trying to solve for the unknown
this is dope
this backwards hippy broke as fuck, new apparel you really need some
last time you had a pair of shoos you asked two women for a threesome
pretty light but ok better than ur other shit

Hippy got to step it up
so does Aero , Aero your shit was trash b


v/ hippy

[~RustyGunZ~]

You got a big ego, but these hammers will feel like a Thor hit.
& u got ya head up so far ya own ass all you can see is your shit.
terrible
No RW D/r to save you now honestly your work has always been common see
Since RW Aer hasn't been gettin love on the net.. you got a better shot wit E-harmony.
eh
You been sellin ya wack mixtapes on the streets them shits should be free whore.
Cuz I know from personal experience that no one followin Aero unless its a detour.
played, good wording though
Gettin dudes drunk, so they can big you up Aero? I'm not sure what u think it solves.
Ask any sober vet about him, they say this bud light with no drinks involved.
seen it, okay though
I see your view on stuff but your all talk Aero only about that jaw action.
The way this bitch be voicin her opinion I could mistake him for Tamar Braxton.
lol ok
You can quit that thug talk, b4 Hip puts you in a bad place then.
I mean what do I have to lose when Aer only squeezin a pump at a gas station.
most air/aer stuff is played but I haven't seen this and the wording was on point
From Star to Malayse, with all these names how many times will u get warned kid.
Obviously your aliases are sufferin an identity crisis worse then Bourne did.
nah

vs

trying to sell this battle, I said just elevate a bit
pushed aero & got a fast ball thrown at his head, that's an elevator pitch
eh
Your girl came over but I scoffed, bitch is still upset
She got out the car and was so Bland I told her to kill herself (#blacklivesmatter)
there was no rhyme? eh concept and delivery
I mean yall seen his pics right? he's so fat I fear for this guy
If a girl say lean is her pref he'll produce that through tears in his eyes
nah
parents never loved him, his flashbacks show he aint nothing
asked about a website
I said GoDaddy? he said "nooo, don't go daddy please! Mom, say something!!"
terrible
I created this persona and lived up to it, im what the fuss about
what you create from scratch? besides your herpes sore pussing out
nah
he pm'ed for advice on his bars, I'm like who is this dumb hoe?
didn't think I'd use Algebra again but here I am trying to solve for the unknown
okay
this backwards hippy broke as fuck, new apparel you really need some
last time you had a pair of shoos you asked two women for a threesome
omg lmao how bad

v/hippy

aero is worse than ever

god is good

[Sharp]

You got a big ego, but these hammers will feel like a Thor hit.
& u got ya head up so far ya own ass all you can see is your shit.
old shit tbh. good delivery but the concept is just basic
No RW D/r to save you now honestly your work has always been common see
Since RW Aer hasn't been gettin love on the net.. you got a better shot wit E-harmony.
same as above though I've seen stuff like that
You been sellin ya wack mixtapes on the streets them shits should be free whore.
Cuz I know from personal experience that no one followin Aero unless its a detour.
alright
Gettin dudes drunk, so they can big you up Aero? I'm not sure what u think it solves.
Ask any sober vet about him, they say this bud light with no drinks involved.
not feeling that
I see your view on stuff but your all talk Aero only about that jaw action.
The way this bitch be voicin her opinion I could mistake him for Tamar Braxton.
basic
You can quit that thug talk, b4 Hip puts you in a bad place then.
I mean what do I have to lose when Aer only squeezin a pump at a gas station.
nope
From Star to Malayse, with all these names how many times will u get warned kid.
Obviously your aliases are sufferin an identity crisis worse then Bourne did.
see what you're going for but this kind of delivery is done to death for me


He harassed me
trying to sell this battle, I said just elevate a bit
pushed aero & got a fast ball thrown at his head, that's an elevator pitch
see what you're going for but not feeling it
Your girl came over but I scoffed, bitch is still upset
She got out the car and was so Bland I told her to kill herself (#blacklivesmatter)
basic but clever concept. true true tho, RIP.
I mean yall seen his pics right? he's so fat I fear for this guy
If a girl say lean is her pref he'll produce that through tears in his eyes
not feeling this
parents never loved him, his flashbacks show he aint nothing
asked about a website
I said GoDaddy? he said "nooo, don't go daddy please! Mom, say something!!"
nope
I created this persona and lived up to it, im what the fuss about
what you create from scratch? besides your herpes sore pussing out
feels old but I'll allow it cause half of hippy's verse was that effect
he pm'ed for advice on his bars, I'm like who is this dumb hoe?
didn't think I'd use Algebra again but here I am trying to solve for the unknown
clever
this backwards hippy broke as fuck, new apparel you really need some
last time you had a pair of shoos you asked two women for a threesome
nope nope nope

cool throwback kinda battle tbh. Hippy has ideas but I'm guessing has been out of text for awhile? Aero wasn't great but IMO the bland and algebra lines were enough to take it

v/aero

[Saint]

I did tho was knd of close, not really in a good way.

Tamar Braxton was straight, only thing I really felt

Algebra was aeros best... and wittier than hippys

Hippy had more played material, aero had some corny stuff (go daddy lol)

But I'm goin with Aero on consistency

V-aero

[murda sho]

Faggot

I mean yall seen his pics right? he's so fat I fear for this guy
If a girl say lean is her pref he'll produce that through tears in his eyes
parents never loved him, his flashbacks show he aint nothing
asked about a website
I said GoDaddy? he said "nooo, don't go daddy please! Mom, say something!!"



Yppih

You been sellin ya wack mixtapes on the streets them shits should be FREE whore.
Cuz I know from personal experience that no one followin Aero unless its a detour.


v/ Faggot... Hippy gotta get more of a sting to his bars they weren't really landing hard at all, the bar I did quote was well put together we need more like that from him. Faggot didn't drop as well as i've seen him but i've seen him drop terribly before too so whatever he dropped enough to edge the win here