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Old 05-26-2018, 11:58 PM   #1
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Frozen china white…fish scale older than sliced bread...call it Betty White
Keep it sealed up in turkey bags...Supply more sacks than Reggie White
Drugs laced up but I stay trippin like Saint Paul watching acid rainfall
Fiends share the same straw…& then snort the shit inside a magic 8-ball
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Old 05-27-2018, 02:11 PM   #2
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Old 05-27-2018, 02:25 PM   #3
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lol, this was dope. I'll breakdown after work
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Old 05-27-2018, 03:57 PM   #6
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2crip with the shade. Not seen you drop anything in time
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This is whats missing in the OM, I really enjoyed this piece.
the wordplay is on point even if some of it is the obvious.
regardless its enjoyable to me, I like the whole flow of this.
the wording was great all around, really worth the read.

No optometrist could see the pupils shrink when they’re next to a kingpin
Needles sink in...vain, made my name shippin opiates in an empty ink pen


I really liked how you put this together..nice work.
keep it up
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