Round 2: 1. Jabari Black vs 9. Plot - JB WINS

Jabari Black · 09-18-2018, 12:14 AM

IMPORTANT RULES:
- No biting
- No swaying
- No recycling
- No feeding
- Votes must be at least ONE sentence with a decent explanation.
- ONLY 1 EXTENSIONS ALLOWED THE ENTIRE PLAYOFFS

MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 2 BATTLES

PUNCHES DUE BY SATURDAY
VOTING ENDS MONDAY
ROUND 3 UP BY MONDAY NIGHT

@Jabari Black @Plot

Plot · 09-22-2018, 02:45 AM

Ext

Jabari Black · 09-22-2018, 06:47 AM

You’re out of extensions homie. I’ll grant you this one though since it’s me but get you bar on as soon as possible. @Plot

Plot · 09-22-2018, 02:35 PM

Gunbarz lol.
You aint got diss ability Jab, coz when I get retarded the steel becomes a disgrace
A Stuttering problem? Nah, but this stupid bastard will just keep repeating in your face.

Jabari Black · 09-22-2018, 07:26 PM

Catch him slipping at a red light! Soon as I creep up this wimp fucked/
Revolver lift up...you’ll see a barrel spinning in traffic like a cement truck/

Diablo · 09-23-2018, 06:07 AM

I got Jab here

liked Plot’s idea for real just happened to like Jabs that bit more conceptually and wording wise

Big Bolo · 09-23-2018, 07:45 AM

Think they both put some good twists on gun bars here so that's cool wasn't a landslide skill wise but think JB got it here, better wording which allowed me to picture what he was saying better, so yeah got JB

Destroyer · 09-23-2018, 08:58 AM

I’m going plot because while I’ll take gun bars seriously, not ones involving a revolver in 2018

V/plot

Hush · 09-23-2018, 09:16 AM

I like both
Since it’s only one bar I feel I gotta grade ten harsher

And plot was vague
He didn’t really set the bar up in the 2 lines

He had to tell us it was a gun bar in the intro portion

Jb was More concise

V black

Amen · 09-24-2018, 09:43 AM

I thought this was close both being gun bar attack lines.

JB's was kind of a reach. The barrel doesn't spin on a revolver. The cylinder does. So wording right there kind of hurt the bar for me, all though many wouldn't know that and I knew what you where you were TRYING to go with this - I did enjoy the imagery your bar provided. Plot's setup had a lot going on, I think he could've cleaned that up a bit to help his concept have more of an impact.

This is mad close but I think from a technical aspect and enjoyment factor Jab will get my vote here barely.

v/Jabari Black

BodySnatcher · 09-24-2018, 10:15 AM

Dope read fellas, I got JB here with a hot gunbar. Plot was cool too, I honestly think you should've led with ur opener and finished different but either way good 1-2 fellas.

John Dillinger · 09-24-2018, 10:23 AM

Digging Plot here more

Both were cool just thought Plot brought it more

Jabari Black · 09-24-2018, 10:50 AM

JB up 6-2.

Needs more votes.
@Cashius @Blue Bayou @DynamiCz

DynamiCz · 09-24-2018, 11:41 AM

Dope on both ends...

I got JB here tho with the cement truck joint, creative! Plot shit was nice to as well, but overall I just think Jabari line hit a lil tougher. Good shit to both

V-JB

Jabari Black · 09-25-2018, 06:02 PM

JB wins 6-2

09-18-2018, 12:14 AM	#1
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764495	Round 2: 1. Jabari Black vs 9. Plot - JB WINS IMPORTANT RULES: - No biting - No swaying - No recycling - No feeding - Votes must be at least ONE sentence with a decent explanation. - ONLY 1 EXTENSIONS ALLOWED THE ENTIRE PLAYOFFS MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 2 BATTLES PUNCHES DUE BY SATURDAY VOTING ENDS MONDAY ROUND 3 UP BY MONDAY NIGHT @Jabari Black @Plot Last edited by Jabari Black; 09-18-2018 at 12:17 AM.

09-22-2018, 02:35 PM	#4
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	Gunbarz lol. You aint got diss ability Jab, coz when I get retarded the steel becomes a disgrace A Stuttering problem? Nah, but this stupid bastard will just keep repeating in your face. Last edited by Plot; 09-22-2018 at 02:40 PM.

09-23-2018, 09:16 AM	#9
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	I like both Since it’s only one bar I feel I gotta grade ten harsher And plot was vague He didn’t really set the bar up in the 2 lines He had to tell us it was a gun bar in the intro portion Jb was More concise V black __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

09-24-2018, 10:50 AM	#13
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764495	JB up 6-2. Needs more votes. @Cashius @Blue Bayou @DynamiCz Last edited by Jabari Black; 09-24-2018 at 11:51 AM.

09-24-2018, 11:41 AM	#14
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829177	Dope on both ends... I got JB here tho with the cement truck joint, creative! Plot shit was nice to as well, but overall I just think Jabari line hit a lil tougher. Good shit to both V-JB __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

09-22-2018, 02:45 AM	#2
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	Ext

09-22-2018, 06:47 AM	#3
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764495	You’re out of extensions homie. I’ll grant you this one though since it’s me but get you bar on as soon as possible. @Plot

09-22-2018, 07:26 PM	#5
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764495	Catch him slipping at a red light! Soon as I creep up this wimp fucked/ Revolver lift up...you’ll see a barrel spinning in traffic like a cement truck/

09-23-2018, 06:07 AM	#6
Diablo Badgerdick Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: Showdown City Posts: 2,604 Battle Record: 11-2 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 22685548	I got Jab here liked Plot’s idea for real just happened to like Jabs that bit more conceptually and wording wise

09-23-2018, 07:45 AM	#7
Big Bolo B on the look out Join Date: Aug 2018 Location: Not being seen Posts: 785 Rep Power: 0	Think they both put some good twists on gun bars here so that's cool wasn't a landslide skill wise but think JB got it here, better wording which allowed me to picture what he was saying better, so yeah got JB

09-24-2018, 09:43 AM	#10
Amen As-salamu alaykum! Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 8,470 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6 Rep Power: 0	I thought this was close both being gun bar attack lines. JB's was kind of a reach. The barrel doesn't spin on a revolver. The cylinder does. So wording right there kind of hurt the bar for me, all though many wouldn't know that and I knew what you where you were TRYING to go with this - I did enjoy the imagery your bar provided. Plot's setup had a lot going on, I think he could've cleaned that up a bit to help his concept have more of an impact. This is mad close but I think from a technical aspect and enjoyment factor Jab will get my vote here barely. v/Jabari Black

09-24-2018, 10:15 AM	#11
BodySnatcher Hail Mary Haymakers Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: You know where I be at Posts: 1,785 Battle Record: 17-7 Champed - BAL Roast - Battle Arena League - BAL Season Champ Rep Power: 3840895	Dope read fellas, I got JB here with a hot gunbar. Plot was cool too, I honestly think you should've led with ur opener and finished different but either way good 1-2 fellas.

09-24-2018, 10:23 AM	#12
John Dillinger Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 885 Battle Record: 8-7 Accomplishments -NBL Pic Roast Champed -Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 10281356	Digging Plot here more Both were cool just thought Plot brought it more

09-25-2018, 06:02 PM	#15
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764495	JB wins 6-2