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Old 01-15-2020, 07:31 AM   #401
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Old 01-16-2020, 09:43 PM   #402
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For millineas billions of fish have swam from the fishing swim of fishing swim
I am the fishing swim of fish; the fishing swim of fishing swam
Fish have swam from the rivers of beaches to besieging
The fish have adventure from the shore to the beachy shore of water
I am a fish; a gentle fish with seldom wish; seldom fortress
I am the chorus of light and life; the seldom fish of a school of fish
I am the fish of light and life; the fish in seas
I am a fish of light and life; the fish in seas
For I am a fish with a wish to fly into the seas of adventure
I am a adventure of flying wings with flying fish seas
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Old 01-17-2020, 03:56 AM   #403
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Minus 2.6 outta 10...Work on that dismount k pop.
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Old 01-17-2020, 07:16 AM   #404
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Old 01-17-2020, 08:01 PM   #405
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I am a king from the grounds of Jerusalem; the sound of the souls of men
I killed thousands with swords and trumpets; I stand triumphant
I am the devil in the night; awakening plight
I am a ember sky; the devil's sword in a fight
One early morning, a silver sword from a knight arrived
It arrived at the bridge of my fortress; a dark sources
The end was nigh; when the silver sword entered my home
Yet the sword was quickly jolted with a defense; and didn't reach the throne
One early morning, the golden trumpets were playing in the early morning
The early morning sun; the early morning water
A golden sword came to me from a knight of white armor
The knight killed my defense; it was the end from the descendants
The golden sword entered my heart; a demon from the ruins
I am a king that was dethroned from the golden sound of angels
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Old 01-18-2020, 06:54 PM   #406
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Alabaster stone seas of siege; sea the leaves
Fish swim in abundant joy and happiness; lavishness
Alabaster stone seas; onyx seas; onyx siege
Alabaster stone seas; onyx seas; onyx siege
Alabaster stone seas; onyx seas; onyx water
Alabaster stone seas; onyx seas; onyx water
For alabaster stone seas siege; besiege in seas
Alabaster stone seas; besiege; besiege in seas
Alabaster stone seas; alabaster stone seas of siege
Alabaster stone seas; alabaster stone seas of siege
Alabaster stone oceans; alabaster stone mountains of oceans
Alabaster stone seas; alabaster stone oceans
Alabaster stone seas; alabaster stone seas of siege
Alabaster stone seas; alabaster stone seas of siege
Alabaster stone mountains; alabaster stone seas
Alabaster stone mountains; alabaster stone seas
Alabaster stone mountains of oceans and seas
Alabaster stone mountains of oceans and seas
Alabaster stone mountains of oceans and seas
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Old 01-18-2020, 10:34 PM   #407
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Old 01-19-2020, 01:57 AM   #408
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Old 01-22-2020, 02:51 PM   #409
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“I kill thousands with sword and trumpets I stand triumphant”

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Old 01-23-2020, 03:31 PM   #410
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Old 01-23-2020, 10:37 PM   #411
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Lol @ repeatin' the same shit 28 times, your my idol man...
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Old 01-24-2020, 04:28 PM   #412
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Old 01-25-2020, 04:28 AM   #413
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Fish of light; fish of hope; fish of freedom
Fish of thorns, fish of light; fish of darkness
I am the fish of hope; the fish of water
I am the fish of light; the fish of life
\I am the fish of darkness; the fish of hope
I am the fish of light; the fish of hope
The fish of hope; the fish of light
I am the fish of water; the fish of hope
I am the fish of water; the fish of love
I am the fish of water; the fish of faith
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Old 01-25-2020, 04:41 AM   #414
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Chikety China I don't like fish in my kitchen
Maybe Chop Suey your bitch and pan fry up her liver...
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Old 01-26-2020, 01:08 AM   #415
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I like the poetic tone of your pieces and though repetition works up to a point, i think you should reiterate only to a certain extent, we get it after the second time. It adds nothing to the piece it just seems like unnecessary filler, get a little more creative.
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Old 01-29-2020, 06:59 PM   #416
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I'm the onyx stature; onyx rapture; onyx zapper
Porcelain pen'; ending the winds wisp with scapegoat and sin
Marvelous rapture; carving the niche' of levels and sticks
I'm the monastery; onyx rapture from the baal of master
I'm the pen' game insane; the insane zealot
I captured pens' with wind and insane peacocks
I'm the ninth dimension writer with burning flame
I'm the source of wind; the source of sin
I'm the worshiper of baal; the worth of jolt
I quenched hell's dimension with rain from heaven
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Old 02-01-2020, 03:58 PM   #417
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Guardian demon; the heart of the gleaming; the golden temple
Golden temple; the golden rod of asherah; the demon from fire
I am a demon guarding a angel; a seraphim of light
Blaring in the sky; heaven's gate; levitate through penetrate
I am the golden sky; the golden clouds on golden stars
I am a guardian angel from the solace of stars; golden stars
I am the sentiment of good through sentiment of good
I am the evening light; the evening day; the evening light
Guardian demon; I am the guardian demon from the harvest of eden
Somber is reason; the solemn of weakness; the strength of Goliath
Golden angels battling demons in the heart of screaming
I am the guardian; guarding angels from hell; hell's fire
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Old 02-02-2020, 02:49 AM   #418
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Default Poisonous Serpent

Jedi Mind tricks a general to commit suicide
Paint the sky red; blood bursts in the bluest sky
In the destiny of law; tortured 20 million seaphims
I killed my dog with a law Warhammer than force grammar
I tongue tied twenty million people to each other; burning the moon
I tortured the sun; with the force of a sun from the benevolent sound of torture
A million years ago; I killed a planet with electricity
Synchroncity tortured a dog; with science and mathematics a spiritual revolution
I am eons ahead of a path of war; I began war zillions of years ago
I tortured the sun; brought the flames into the moon; and created two suns
In the evening light; made it black; gave a spider a heart attack
I'm burning lizards with the force of the sun; the sun ripped apart the second sun
I am a zillion years old; living on the plains of a seraphim
I killed a angel with a rainbow halo; than killed Father Time with somber lines
The end is near; I killed a lion when I brought the sun's flame to his mane
I ripped off a elephant's nose; than ate it with a grain of salt

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Old 02-02-2020, 09:37 PM   #419
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Poisonous serpent; the zillion sword demon swordsman; the sea is scorching
I tortured millions with fire and flames; the flames of hell tortured a skeleton
I'm the sentiment of hell; the bending of dimensions from God's scale
I'm the ender of days; the beginning of night; the descendant of rays
I am a onyx rapture; conquer seas of alabaster stone with ascending angels
I tortured seraphims in the astral plane; with swords and torturous scimitars
I'm the sea of change; I killed thousands of angels with rainbow halo
I conquered the world with a golden fist; the siss of a snake was heard from the axis
I conquered the planet; atomic bombs circle the granite of the ending of atlas
I killed a thousand horsemen with endorphins from a thought of savior
I'm the demon swordsman; release the horsemen into the fields of daisies
Than sea the seas change and rip when I grab a sword and begin the apocalypse
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Old 02-02-2020, 10:13 PM   #420
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Your so terrible at this craft. You honestly suck and should do something else.
Your like the shit kid at the skate ramp thats been going down for 5 years and
still cant drop in, and everyone makes fun of. I mean your past being sarcastic
about you dont take on any feedback or help and I dont think you even read anyone
elses work. Look at the column of I's on the left side of your verse! Your shit.
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