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Old 07-28-2018, 02:07 AM   #1
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Old 07-28-2018, 02:20 AM   #2
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2 votes to call a FN battle huh??, if u ever say ur dope, u a liar
‘sharp peed’ on ur last verse, & we wish you’d done that to yours prior
Canucks go nuts on doughnuts. I hear u like them wide girls, eh?
ur homeland is known for Horton’s and I hear that’s how much all of urs weigh
Canadian freak. it’s plain to see u were made to be weak
des’ll rockabye with the rattle, &&& put this baby to sleep
come in with the dub twins & watch me light up these candles
parts of blue swirling all up in the sky... looking like starry night by van gogh
des can’t be handled. I’m known to splatter fools
turn away to avoid me, & the spray just enters bilateral
breakups are rough, & I’m here to talk, if it gets heavy...
denies ex tensions... but what’s that say about ur past relations w/eddie??
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Old 07-28-2018, 02:21 AM   #3
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omfg the troll you married....


allll types a flaws, like i’d ever see that dyke in awe..
ya i'm Canadian sayin Ehh.. u say he same when u buy ur wife a bra
is she seeing a shrink?! say no and you’re lying so spare me..
she looks like she's gotten ‘so much of her chest’ she's gotta be care free
the bitch i date is precise.. urs has the face of a dike..
to you she's a Heroine.. to me she's Demi after her 5th taste of the night
acting all hormonal losing to Sharp, ur nuthin but a herb n' a faker..
which is funny, cuz when i fuck ur wife the hormonal be heard by the neighbors
i'll smash this twirp, here to show em how the slashing hurts..
stab at his Retinas & won't stop til i ‘bring out his eyes’ like a matching shirt
Blue's too fresh.. the .40 Cal finning to bruise flesh..
my handguns a Rude Boy.. fitting since it's hitting everyone in ur Crudest
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2 votes to call a FN battle huh??, if u ever say ur dope, u a liar
‘sharp peed’ on ur last verse, & we wish you’d done that to yours prior

(Lol I wanna call this corny but that’s pretty funny. I will say the double meaning isn’t smooth both ways though. Overall okay)

Canucks go nuts on doughnuts. I hear u like them wide girls, eh?
ur homeland is known for Horton’s and I hear that’s how much all of urs weigh

(I liked the tie in and “eh” on the end is funny to me. I’m missing the wp. I get the donut shop meaning but is Horton a weight measurement? If it’s some play on ‘ton’ then it’s a reach)

Canadian freak. it’s plain to see u were made to be weak
des’ll rockabye with the rattle, &&& put this baby to sleep

(This one missed. I’m personally not a fan of ‘bye’ name flips but I’m woulda let it slide. However, the ‘a’ part throws off the wp and makes it seem forced. Also the rattle parts just thrown in there)

come in with the dub twins & watch me light up these candles
parts of blue swirling all up in the sky... looking like starry night by van gogh

(Ha! I like this. Swirl/spin works imo and I think that’s a clever np)

des can’t be handled. I’m known to splatter fools
turn away to avoid me, & the spray just enters bilateral

(Decent, a bit statementish)

breakups are rough, & I’m here to talk, if it gets heavy...
denies ex tensions... but what’s that say about ur past relations w/eddie??

(Lol true on the extension part. I like the angle and pretty funny. Solid closer)




allll types a flaws, like i’d ever see that dyke in awe..
ya i'm Canadian sayin Ehh.. u say he same when u buy ur wife a bra

(And I’m saying the same about this bar....ehh)

is she seeing a shrink?! say no and you’re lying so spare me..
she looks like she's gotten ‘so much of her chest’ she's gotta be care free

(Lol okay I like the angle. Slight typo but I understand it. Pretty funny)

the bitch i date is precise.. urs has the face of a dike..
to you she's a Heroine.. to me she's Demi after her 5th taste of the night

(This is pretty clever writing for 10 mins. Good current even reference and nice little double entendre. Also I’m actually a fan of when you use multiple bars to attach the same angle)

acting all hormonal losing to Sharp, ur nuthin but a herb n' a faker..
which is funny, cuz when i fuck ur wife the hormonal be heard by the neighbors

(The wp is really slick. Only critique is that hormonal/emotional meaning coulda used another tie in)

i'll smash this twirp, here to show em how the slashing hurts..
stab at his Retinas & won't stop til i ‘bring out his eyes’ like a matching shirt

(I liked the concept. Wording held it back a bit. You wouldn’t use the phrase ‘bring out his eyes’ to describe stabbing eyes out so that made the wording a little less clean)

Blue's too fresh.. the .40 Cal finning to bruise flesh..
my handguns a Rude Boy.. fitting since it's hitting everyone in ur Crudest

(Okay. Crudest is a bit of a stretch and the word association wasn’t the strongest. Not bad though and kinda witty)



Good way to end a great night fellas. I’m impressed of the quality of bars y’all are able to put together with such a short time limit.

I got blue taking this one. With slightly better concepts and execution.

Mvgt blue

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Old 07-28-2018, 06:34 PM   #6
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This shit was dope, hormonal was fucking flames.

I liked Des' nameplay in 1-2 better tho this one was still decent.

Really close but I think hormonal and that demi lovato shit took it

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I give the edge to blue though, since his bars I didn't quote hit a bit harder than Des. Good shit guys, especially after two FNs
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damn this fn was dope. forsure read like an actual battle

des had some nice shit, van gogh was crazy.

blue was jus more consistent here.

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