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Open Mic Magazine
Long Overdue Edition



[IMPORTANT NOTE REGARDING HOF/ VOTM]

The HOF Nom thread shall be replaced with 'Verse of the Month' Nom thread. Any nominated piece automatically gets paneled for HOF. The piece with the most nominations automatically gets VOTM. If there's a tie, it's paneled to determine VOTM.

Panels will be determined by those in charge of the Open Mic and general topical portions of the site.

These changes will decrease the load on moderators with regards to finding time to appoint panel members & hound them for verdicts. Furthermore, more recognition will be brought towards those who actively participate and post read-worthy content.

With these changes, we hope to reintroduce accomplishments to the topical community without forfeiting the prestige of the OM HOF, or making it so that the community is unwilling to nominate any verse due to exceedingly high standards.

To summarize: the VOTM thread is where you nominate what you believe is one of the best writings of the month, the most nominated verse will be awarded a VOTM accomplishment AND considered for HOF via panel


State of the O.M. Address
[Introduction]

Well my friends, here we are. At the start of writing this magazine, it has been 263,520 minutes since the last Open Mic Review magazine was left. For those interested, here is a link. October 2014 Review [by zygote]
So to say that it has 'been a minute' since the last magazine would be quite the understatement. This magazine, though perhaps not feature-rich, seeks to give credit where credit is due for many of Netcees finest writers.

In fact, I think that the [formerly deplorable] state of the OM has allowed for a very interesting dynamic to develop amongst its writers. For instance- some trends have emerged, others have died out, and others still have evolved into entirely new creations. While in some ways, this forum has languished, in others it has grown immensely. It is with this idea in mind that we dive into the Reincarnation of the Open Mic- with an open-ended analysis of it's comings and goings.


[Trends]


Whatever Happened to Swag and Flow?


While it would not be accurate to say that this style of writing has died out, it certainly has experienced a severe decline in popularity. The disappearance of writers such as @Neighbor, @dull boy, @beretta, @Nigma, and @ill nik-A means a sudden dearth in swaggage production. Furthermore, writers who had previously been following suit have found other outlets for their creativity. It has been a long time since @Fig, @oats murkel, @Allen Knight, or @Zen have tested the waters with a flex verse.

However, a few staunch stalwarts of the style hang around in the shadows. @CopyPat, @Genocide and @big baby still drop pieces with flex-ish airs at the very least. I suppose that the BA's S&F title and the likes of @Chyeahhh Guevara had kept the style going for quite some time, ushering in both controversy and constant front page attention.



Variations on a Theme

One of my favorite new trends in the Open Mic- a regular posts a killer drop with a powerful title, and several others post quasi-related pieces entailing the same material, and often referencing one another ubiquitously. This brings a sense of life & dynamicism into the Open Mic where the lack of detailed, exploratory feedback has become noticeably apparent.

Some notable examples:
Yarnish, Varnish, Tarnish, Garnish
8 am, 6 am, 12 am


Death of the Collab Verse

This trend perhaps saddens me the most. While our writers continue to grow and develop individually, the Open Mic had seen a fantastic boom where very unique and different writers regularly collaborated on verses, producing a wide range of elaborately descriptive & tangentially thematic works that often pushed the boundaries of readers' perceptions and sense of wonder. It seems that perhaps a lack of motivation or activity has largely contributed to this drought of interwriter communication.

Rebirth of Write Week!

This is not necessarily a trend, rather a piece of news: write weeks will be coming back, just in time for the summer months!



[Quotient Quotables]

lmao u like that title? ibet u do bish

This section will simply be a smattering of notable lines from the MASSIVE number of verses overlooked since October with a little blurb as to why it was noticeable.

All quote-links have been preserved, feel free to jump to the verse & read in depth by clicking the arrow next to the writer's username.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Zen View Post
Instead I drifted onward to madness.
Wrapped in my thoughts.
It would seem I’m unraveling at the seams.
This is only a dream. It doesn’t matter.
This is a more unrefined Zen, and as these quotes progress you will really see how his writing has come into it's own in the last 6 months.

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Originally Posted by Mr. J View Post
Hello moto, get a razor to your side like old folks
with old phones, I lay it down for those who don't know
I deliver tri-weekly while most of y'all try weekly..
got a style that you can't just buy freely...
~Q~ as long as I've known him has always had a very freeverse style, and while his drops can sometimes come below the average of what the Open Mic expects, I almost always read his verses for that 'just written not noveled' feeling. You know, the kind that is always faked by people who explicitly say "yea I keyed this in like 3.245 minutes lmao nbd it takes skill to type fast and not edit." Qwarterz' writing is simply characterized by a sort of free-association type of thought pattern, and it sneaks up on you- here is one of the few writers to have champed the AOWL, and one of the fewer to have defended that title.

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Originally Posted by Wise Wiggles View Post
The knife twist. Rorschach would like it. See, I tore back your eyelids
& Hocked a fat one on your grave.
Honor's fastened to your monstrous name
Now I always watch for phantoms that wander late
Do you though. Sober ain't safe. It just falls
Haha. Sorry. I'm all over the place like pin ball
Speaking of that, I want to play that on acid and Molly
Find Will Ferell and beat his ass while I practice my Arnis
It's like I need to raise the dead. It's crazy..
A side of Wise we haven't seen in recent times- following some recent hardships, trials & tribulations. Sort of nonchalant, easygoing yet poignant & pointed. Very Wise indeed.

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Originally Posted by Wise Wiggles View Post
It's all a joke, except there's no laughing part
No last regards. Just bad dreams of stabbing dark
While I was treating points like caviar, the sad scene starts
You were at the bars.. In the industry.
In the midst of all the happy hours.. just a pistol found
I miss you. Loud woofers pound.
Please. Lord. Give thee thine bass to smoosh this town
Holding on, when I need to put it down
Again. One of the most admirable things about Wise's writing is how strong his presence is. Read this section again. Then read it again. This is how you string together emotion to visuals.

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Originally Posted by brokenhal0 View Post
so i play the creator of a ancient land feelings duplicate a willful spell
ill will will tell well the well filled up well wishes spilled from a spit filled cup
sips filled up you see give and take effect create a real world up
Can't shake the feeling that this young man is a writer whom we are all familiar with, but his wording & concepts pack a serious punch exactly as often as they fall totally flat. That statement is not a detriment to him whatsoever.

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Originally Posted by big baby View Post
in particular, inarticulate guy with philosophers breath
cotton linen robe; tonight i uncover the secrets you stashed
underneath the cardinal chasm embedded deep in the cracks
try to unfurl the english, through your lips on contours
christmas carolers scarf, closed captioned lyrics encore
wept for concourse, a few have witnessed my characters arc
behind the lighthouse, my sailors boat tried to signal off shore
Sometimes bb seems to be parodying another writer to the point of derision. At other times, he seems to be imitating them with an air of endearment. And it is times like these where his words show through the veils of many personas.

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Originally Posted by dead man View Post
habit dependent. majora's mask of resentment
its sad when solitude becomes your antidepressant
back at the breakfast table you were asking me questions
which i answered indirectly for the palpable tension
relish the wait, a hunter's etiquette. the silence erupts
7 seconds delayed. now we're feeling awkward as fuck
This is how you do an opener.

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Originally Posted by NYCSPITZ View Post
Meta mind, effortless merge with this this mestiza misses
her diffident piercing glare's another test of submission
dead in a prison. keystyle indifferent; ball skeet hug me
insouciant insubordinate slick and wall street loves me
stepping from poor to upper class in a bound it's honestly bonkers
meditating in subway cars merging my conscious unconscious
NYCSPITZ has a knack for imagery and making lacksadaisical verses and lines work. When he comes correct(see AOWL finals) he comes CORRECT- but this is the only offering he has posted in the OM in recent memory.

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Originally Posted by Zen View Post
We’re such a mismatch. In fact, I’m maddest when I’m with you, but that doesn’t change the happiness we imagined that we lived through. You see, love turned to madness. We became addicts. I was smoking your breath – ‘till we turned to ashes taking tokes to our death.
Zen is so sad. And it makes me sad. And it makes me mad that I cannot write like he can.

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Originally Posted by oats murkel View Post
meaning "you" are just a mixture of your friends and your parents
any sense of awareness boasted is illogical strides
life's a stage of nurtured monologues and genomic asides
I wanna be honest in spite the lack of plaques that I've captured
Oats, even in his sabbatical of inactivity as he fondles Korean schoolboys for counterfit yen, has some of the most effective wording and delivery this side of 2008.

Quote:
Originally Posted by david stern razor burns View Post
I’m getting it large, tremendously big; incredible hulk with a pen and a script. And the denim is ripped, the venom equipped so I can crush a rapper down to the skeletal system. The general condition is degenerative sickness… so consider assistance if you get in my business. Fuck a federal prison; I’ll fuck a fella for slippin. I’m talkin Shawshank Redemption when I’m off shankin bitches during their conjugal visits. And fuck a shotgun or pistol, my thrusters launchin this missile, the underboss with a trigger finger to cause you an issue.
Das it mane. Das it.

Quote:
Originally Posted by UnbornBuddha View Post
I guess I myself too, am wrapped in a metaphorical blanket.
An emotional latching of anything that is comforting
Otherwise, without our crazy family stories this galaxy boring
We need an Amityville horror to put our phantoms in order
Until, even our sexual passions are sorted, fantasy portals…
We swore to be the best, but instead we became average in our quotas
The heavy anchor that have hold us is the adages that we know of
The force used our soul to acknowledge the statuses of these Yoda’s
It’s no mystery how we became the model drunkard, non-stoic lovers.
Our circles of friends watching as we slowly lose our motor function
Their encouragement isn’t to reach a sober junction
UnbornBuddha deserves more shine than he receives. He has exquisite conceptual mastery, but sometimes struggles with rhyme-placement and general clarity. Here he shines.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Certain View Post
Crusted corners of eyes sweeping the room,
strained by the fluorescent lights' deepening gloom.
We're fucking glowing in sadness.
Track delay, explosive reactions,
with coffee and body odor corroding the transit.
And we're bundled.
It's cold outside. We're stuck in the sweat pit.
Funneling frustrations through each thrust at the exits.
The mad scramble. It's love at first neck twist.
She wore leather boots and kept her head down as she texted.
Avoid eye contact, part of the (dys)functional checklist,
along with keeping track of belonging,
but none of us should be here. We're passing along.
Vagabonds of the moment. Glum cast of despondents.
She wore a winter hat, revealing a flash of her blond head.
Amanda. Might be her name. Looks like an Amanda.
The scrum reduces us to ticket numbers, turnstiles and bar scanners.
Book readers. Nook readers. Newspaper glancers.
With the turn of each page, no escape and no answers.
The seats are padded, yet the backs jettison any attempt at rest.
Still Amanda coils her boots under her leggings to stretch.
We're two hours late, discussing the weather but stuck inside,
refreshing devices in hopes of finding another ride.
Security points. Don't pet the dogs. Please step up and right.

"Now boarding":

Amanda, my love,

good-bye.
Certain has said that he will stop writing soon, and that is a tragedy. He gets the honor of being the only completely quoted verse in this section of the magazine. It was simply sublime.

Sorry to all that as I write these I am running out of descriptors, but I want to highlight some of the quality writing of the past few months so that a deeper look can be applied to future editions of the mag- issued on a bimonthly basis.



Quote:
Originally Posted by Exis View Post
then flip things around and fully shake up the system
amaze 'em with brilliance 'fore they fade from existence
noticed you prayed for a savior yet only Satan would listen
so I came to pay you a visit,
let's get some change out these bitches
the newest craze is to follow me and pave the way where you isn't
I thought this was good, Exis rarely if ever posts, but certainly deserves recognition for tightly wound flow right here.




Highlights
[Standout Verses]

Black
Quote:
Originally Posted by dead man View Post
i'm


not sure anymore why i bother at all
something sticks if you can throw enough collage at the wall
heal my scars. fill the bathtub. watercolors, we talked
of love and sacrifice and how i worded it wrong
if you follow along it's all a part of the same
piece of memory i strained into a siphon and hanged
by the bed. so we could stare at it on turbulent days
i felt your chevy passing while i walked to the train
i'm sorry i can't focus on a chain of command
or a central theme. like destiny or taking a stand
we're strangers in a house. it's like we're making the band
strangers on a website where we speak with our hands
i'll never be the same as circa sometime before
guess i'm entertained the most when everybody is bored
born into a body with benevolent force
let it go to waste and wait to be a corpse. washed ashore
endorphins for a run and nicotine to absorb
breathe mist, remember all the nights i slept on the floor
my friends were all enlisted in a president's war
with a blanket from salvation army keeping me warm
if you made it this far you are my brother in arms
watched me rise and struggle hopelessly until i dissolve
it's only natural like highway traffic after the dawn
everybody left me so i'm finally calm
if you think it's deprecating for the sake of applause
you may be right. i hope you don't remember me at all
i hope this watch rusts and all my problems are solved
i hope they let me drive my honda home from the bar
caught in the riptides. searching for the sum of your parts
you know me best as your own interpretation to carve
so write me off. i'm somebody you've seen from afar
who's seen too many suicides to write for the art
fuck poetry and prose and all the things we revere
i tried to live for others and it landed me here
i'm no vonnegut or tolkein, hunter thompson or king
just a vulture with no wind beneath my wings





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Quote:
Originally Posted by big baby View Post
the moment was so existentialist. I brought 3 apples.
one for the both of us. & 1 for the road
if it comes up I suppose we could split it
undisclosed disposition. hanging from the hammock ropes
in the stitching. there was hope, for half-robed demolition
bungalow; almost out of a dream- quite a bit intensive
fictitious; in the sense, paints peeling from white picket fences
Strange feeling, in front of the mowed lawn
in between the solstice of summer and spring
molded from the cumbersome explosions you’d bring
love when she hands me her half bitten apple - as if it comes with an asterisk.
an ad-lib example, of italics in the back of the index
take a bite out of the apple or take a bite out of me
fall in love in the castle. fall in drown to the sounds of the sea
comparisons to the moon - thought were drastically measured
but noticed high tide receded sunrise where my gravity centered
upset. I bite my lips till’ blood spills in the battlefront mist
not to inflict pain, but deflect the traces of that dispassionate kiss
teeth marks turn into tattoos covering the mistakes from the past
the china vase that bloomed flowers, but shattered, is only serrated as glass
like lately i feel, sort of amazing. yet displaced and unreal, unsanctioned
revealed. abated. idealistic adulation unveiled. just waiting
unrelated, too anxious to seal the tiny indiscreet places unfilled
out on the rock, by the creek. placing your hand on my cheek
detached since forever. you help me make these connections I seek
never thought i’d be formal, but make me feel normal. at least..
enthralled in coercion, your neglect changed me overall as a person
love was linear, so now i write love songs and sonnets in cursive
despondent. subversive. tire swing made from your 91′ Cherokee jeep
which showed me you still used parts from the past thrown away in the street
connective to the stylus of the records through music created
overuse of the grooves from the vinyl discarded my humanlike traits
describing an incentive to twist, a sigh and a scent of distress
its funny & sad, i write to remind myself to remember to live
if you’re reading this right now, i probably need to reevaluate my resolve
dissolve in the valium wake. retaliate from the maxims til’ i can barely walk
i could barely talk. my adolescence consisted of wishing i died.
living without really having lived, now i don’t even think im alive
now even feeling a feeling is feeling contrived
cause six feet seems like such a waste to shovel. just let the sediment dry
Chesterfield smoke on Elmora and 5th, such a vivid annoyance
beginning to fill my lungs with smoke, that i’ve come to avoid
now i play villain cause i just simply enjoy it
Soulstice
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The pen turns to rubble in a struggle with misery
repeating mistakes across a reductionist history
A sense of nothing is limiting - constrained when defined
By the placement of rhymes..... shaping my lines
Night feels saintly, divine. And when the vigor is felt
I take up the suicide mission meant to figure me out
Soon a bit of liquor compels to turn to the diffident shells
In my peripheral.. & play Mr. Infinite Svelte
Glasses clink, we're laughing quick to depart from sobriety
Life imitates art - I've mastered the art of society
As apartheids garnering apathy - we sip Singapore Slang
She giggles between kittenish whispers..
But I couldn't think of her name, due to the residual rot
from this saturnalia swelling and beginning to pop
And from there where do we go?
Back to the stack of coffins by D Street. Pardon the honesty
But my morning commute consists of garlic and coffee beans
And my nights more of the same.. a haunting endlessness
Monitored by my daunted penmanship - all of it. senselessness
A waste of my time, another grave shift while raving at night
Another matrix of lights, superficial serenade of the mind
And another piece of prose to note my corporeal decline
All while I wait to see you in the corner of my eye
[Around the Site]


Asides from yours truly getting back into modship, here's just a quick snapshot of what is going on in the other corners of the site:

AOWL Playoffs Enters the FINALS
Dead man and NYCSPITZ clash in a real nail-biter!
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...833#post479833

Cashius Champs the NBL
facing him this week is young upstart Sharp 9, make sure to check in and cast a vote.
http://www.netcees.org/forumdisplay.php?f=205



[Outrospection]

Though this edition focused largely on highlighting particular parts of popular writers' verses, future magazines will be able to focus in on the minutiae of the OM's goings-on.

I hope to accommodate interviews and Q&As, OM writers' editorial pieces, a detailed collab section, a special section where one standout verse is given an in-depth breakdown by one or more writers skilled in the art of feed.

The next magazine is slated for publication on June 14th.

Please remember to vote for the VOTM!!!
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when I write, lately, I feel as if I begin by stringing together ambient ideas and concepts, then i realize I'm just typing the words coffee, tawdry, and autumn over and over and over, again, then I pass out dru-

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Certain has said that he will stop writing soon, and that is a tragedy. He gets the honor of being the only completely quoted verse in this section of the magazine. It was simply sublime.
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It upsets me that your quitting too

As odd as tHat sounds

Nevertheless there it is

regardless

I enjoyed the read

Most specifically your in depth analysis of each writer's "style" or approach
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dope shit, too bad the bruins suck dick tho but nice mag
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@Drencrom Muff I am not quitting writing or modding, as of now. What do you mean?
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this has inspired me to write some more. thank you.
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