Infiltration (2-0) vs Barcotic (2-1) - Barcotic WINS

[Cred]

NBL Season 10
Week 5

Due SUNDAY 12/18/16

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

[Barcotic]

anywhere from 12-16 is good

[Saint]

Alright.

[Barcotic]

listen to barc
im fixin to spark. cred brought the style in, I lifted the art
shots finna go thru Inf armour n hit the snitch in his heart
our LAST visit? 7-0 when the match finished, dog
in votes I'm seven up 'n U the one gettin ur cap twisted off
wont do pics cuz on the down low, cat's the fattest ..
wow yo. a couple straps'll drop this cow, no raptor paddock
other names for inf? sheep, flake & softy
they gave this Inf lamb a bull n ima cremate the body
str8 cryyying whnevr u get this mf to open his mouth
s' one thing to claim politics, it's another to vote for urself
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=124829
wanna dispute that? hold ur fake words instead
u've pushed so much under the rug
.. I'll stab the roll to make sure ur dead
ur bitch fucks for $. ur just the lil whore's mascot
laid enuff pipe over the green for Happy Gilmore's last shot
shit ya, ur chick's ass is fucked mate
staring at the fullback as I hit, that's a pump fake

16
no exts

[Saint]

Last week

U weren't hittin hard; shot a full load but missed the mark
Your craft was set on a self-destructive path up in Aerospace & u forgot to disembark.
Your fondest memories in the HOF grow distant; & since been a fall
That was Brain Candy....Now you're a canadian joke we LOL@ when thinkin a/b this kid in the hall
Legacy took a kick in the balls; u hit a wall u cant climb out
Can Mike find the Will? Boy, I've seen Stranger Things....but THIS world aint upside down.
Dog your bitch on some borg shit & you act like a white knight
Barc serves his queen, b....assimilate while every nigga shares that thot; that's a hive mind.
Only have yourself to blame for losing battles; reverse it, carefully
What Mike Pens gets no votes &'ll lead to swaying like a faggot...til he needs Conversion Therapy.
I'll put holes in your top, wont stop if ya blood is splattering
Shot after shot; we'll see the metal building UP in your frame like construction scaffolding.
Your girls a freak, on her knees beggin me to peg her painfully
Lars gift thread: I gave the bitch disciplinary action when her box opened w/ anal beads.
This body is labeled; next intro will be u talkin to angels.
No names so fuck a teaser, a 'Cold Open' will describe ya corpse on an autopsy table.

[Schadenfreude]

This is extremely close, I almost did a bar-by-bar breakdown. Both had some great creativity in their metaphors & wordplay, yet both lacked in overall punch impact. Barc it seemed as tho you dumbed-down yo bars, don't simplify your concepts, just aim to be more harsh. Inf first off you were stretched asf, but more importantly, you saturated the verse w/ word association schemes, which are creative, but those are best utilized in helping punches, not being the punch. Anyway, my personal preference would be to vote for Barc, but I'm edging it to Inf, because he had more to offer substantively & literally..long winded ass bars, VOTE - INFILTRATION.

[Cred]

1-0 Infiltration



Lets get some votes!

[Jayson Fresh]

I saw this differently.
I thought Barcotic brought heat. my favorite line was under the rug - it was a cool concept/personal sting. I thought Infiltration was a bit verbose with weak associations between the set-ups and closers of his punchlines. I do respect that he's thinking outside of the box in his lines.

vote = Barcotic.




our LAST visit? 7-0 when the match finished, dog
in votes I'm seven up 'n U the one gettin ur cap twisted off
wanna dispute that? hold ur fake words instead
u've pushed so much under the rug
.. I'll stab the roll to make sure ur dead


vs

This body is labeled; next intro will be u talkin to angels.
No names so fuck a teaser, a 'Cold Open' will describe ya corpse on an autopsy table.

[Mr. J]

The whole flow from twisted off top and raptor paddock is smooth
I really enjoyed that whole Inf lamb a bull play that was cool.
Happy Gilmore leaned me...I don't know why though perhaps nostalgia.

Inf had some cool concepts but didn't pick up for me until upside down & conversion therapy.
The Lars gift and closer had me applauding ya work though

Tough choice, I enjoyed bits & pieces of both verses
One had the better delivery which was Barcotic
But both brought some dope material to the table here.
I'm leaning towards Bar due to the name play though

[Destroyer]

Seven up, inf lamb a bull, rug stab

Vs

Aerospace, brain candy, conversion therapy

This was close. Even on quotes... inf was wordy as fuck but overall I think more impactful with his bars and just a slight bit more creative.
It was a good read, but I got inf edging it

V/inf

[Cred]

Barc

I liked ur opener, cremate the body was good, stab the rug was dopee

vs

Aerospace was dope, metal build up was good, anal beads was decent


This was a close match here. Neck in neck wit quotes, but idk I thought barcs rug joint was lotb and his hits were a little harsher. Im givin him the edge here.


Vote - barcotic

[Cred]

3-2 Barcotic

Bump for votes.

[Blanco Bishop]

Raptor paddock, 7up, vote for self

Vs

Scaffolding n conv therapy


I dug barcs style more cuz it was less wordy IMO.

V barc