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Old 08-09-2022, 02:03 AM   #81
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Shit my bad I thought I already called universe a fagit lol brb I’ll vote
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Old 08-09-2022, 02:03 AM   #82
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Old 08-09-2022, 09:00 AM   #83
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Ya that Zelph vote doesn’t jibe with me at all
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Old 08-09-2022, 11:23 AM   #84
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Old 08-09-2022, 12:05 PM   #85
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Old 08-09-2022, 08:43 PM   #86
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Old 08-09-2022, 09:00 PM   #87
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Let’s vote guys, get this last week on the roll
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Old 08-09-2022, 11:46 PM   #88
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Imma vote on that champ match in a few.
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Old 08-10-2022, 01:08 PM   #89
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This is the 11th day of Week 15. Whatever the result on these battles is this evening is how it’s going to be, we can’t linger this long on a couple of battles
@Dominate @Eviction @dead man @timeless @White LGI @Objective @Mike Wrecka @Candy if you guys get the chance please vote so we can move on
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Old 08-10-2022, 05:43 PM   #90
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not one of those viewers read those verses LOL
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me after trying to read that shit

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Old 08-10-2022, 11:20 PM   #93
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Everybody wants to write nobody wants to vote. Literally have 16 people signed in and six voters

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Old 08-11-2022, 12:53 AM   #94
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I’ve read the champ battle. Here’s the thing.

- There was no clear winner to me
- The verses are very long, so it would take me a long time to analyze them more thoroughly to determine who I really thought took it, but
- I honestly found both verses an absolute fucking chore to read through even once and I have no desire to reread either of them more closely

So, I don’t know what to do with that.

Both are great writers in general and certainly I consider both to be better than I am so I hope they don’t take this the wrong way, but it is what it is.

Frank was technically impressive as ever but the content was boring af to me this week. I have Z E R O interest in hair styling. And the ending was just like oh ok I’m at 60 lines now I guess I’m done?

NYC’s story was more engaging but still not exactly gripping. I struggled with keeping up with who’s POV he was writing from. Ending was weird? And rhymes seemed forced a lot of the time.

Overall, Frank’s writing was better, but NYC’s piece was more engaging. I don’t know what’s more important to me.

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Old 08-11-2022, 02:48 AM   #95
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We don't have writers here... We have self absorbed bloggers. We have tourists. I've dropped more votes while SIGNED OUT than most of the people that have been here for 3 months... combined.

My project X piece got one response and it was the best verse of the year. This shit is standard for topical leagues unless you have more exceptional people like myself, Adverse, and sraL who give their time to other people and enjoy writing votes and reviews because it is just another form of WRITING.

Anyway, the Champ match is 3-2... close it. What's the problem here? You closed my Champ match at 2-1... You've had mine and dead man's pieces gathering dust in the archives for DAYS now and they are the two best verses of the week.

I fail to see the issue here. This is nothing new. Move it along.
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Old 08-11-2022, 04:06 AM   #96
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Universe literally couldn’t be more complete dog shit than he already is lol
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Good match @Rawn MD

We’ve collabed countless times over the course of, it pains me to say it, a twenty year time span. Pretty cool our battle unwittingly to us at the time of writing basically turned into a “collaboration” Enjoyed it
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What's the problem here? You closed my Champ match at 2-1...

I fail to see the issue here.
Newbie, That's the problem! You lost 3-1 to NCYSPITZ. Adverse discredited my vote, remember?
because you bitched? Now it's only right adverse doesn't count yours either!
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I literally miscounted and this guy thinks I discredited his vote lol and the champ match is 3-3 with Rock voting
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This is too much fun...

Franklin, your vote was a complete hate vote with no specific breakdowns and clear bias everywhere. My vote was legit with a lengthy breakdown. I provided WAY more evidence of why you lost and those sentiments have been echoed by both Adverse and Dom.

It's over. And it sucks because I wanted you to win. My ultimate goal has ALWAYS been to take you out and being able to do it on the last week would've been PERFECT. But it's not my fault you chose to write 100 lines about a hairdresser and completely shit the bed. I couldn't vote for that. It was fucking dumb. Sorry.

NYC wins with the vastly superior story. And, Frank..
I will agree to the stipulation that votes against each other won't count going forward.

@Adverse please go tally the votes up again... It's not that difficult, bro. It's 3-2 NYC.
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