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Old 08-02-2022, 09:41 PM   #1
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Old 08-02-2022, 10:34 PM   #2
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Go max you faggot I got some shit to say
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Old 08-03-2022, 04:29 PM   #4
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Your rap style’s butt cheeks, you’re black and you’re ugly
And I hate to split hairs... how could I with dreads that fuckin crusty?
When I switchblade, there’s NO hesitation slittin your neck
When Rod switchblade, just means he wants to fuck his sister instead
2 2 packed for that action...really fam you packin guns?
Last tutu you packed went to dance class with your faggot son
Your girl got a bulldog face, I bet you’re regretting your wedlock
Arthur drew Blade from the stone, I’da smashed her head into bedrock
Seth always trying to ban you from the chat room...that shit ain’t fair
They ever ‘cut you from the Cord’ hope it’s after you kicked the chair
Wife’s a slut, son’s a faggot and you ran through your sis
One look at yours got Dom Toretto rethinking this whole family shit
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Warned Ad to retreat, or be prepared to Tragically Suffer...
Now Sons in the street and missing a head like black family structure....
He bust in the door four four waving and spitting...
Not a robbery...thats just adverse retarded ass making a entrance
When blade gets to topping, its sloppy, she tha queen and it's great
When your wife thinks messy topping...she's aggravated from cleaning your face
I got a goal when I emerge with the tech and get to bucking...
It's population control, like adverse effect on reproduction...
I got a trio of shooters, that'll send you to hell...
Ad ain't seen 3 9's this bad for his heath..since tipping the scale...
Ya wife's a groupie, BBC junkie..loves to lick and swallow it...
She's at the mercy of black rods like the British Parliament....
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Old 08-05-2022, 12:39 PM   #6
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This was a pretty GOOD BATTLE..

THE EXCALIBUR line was dope..

BAR OF THE BATTLE..

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Old 08-05-2022, 10:17 PM   #7
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Decent read here. Seemed to me both were pretty sloppy putting this together. Mostly misses punch wise from both. But the cut the cord line was the best punch here and think adverse was overall more solid throughout his verse so I'm voting for him.

Sorry I didn't give a better breakdown.
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Old 08-06-2022, 02:39 AM   #8
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no time for a full breakdown on this but I’ll do my best to explain..

For me, LGI had line of the battle with his opener.. black family structure dope (even though without a head was a slight reach) fire concept and well worded

In regards to the rest.. overall, Ad was more consistent with less misses

For that reason, I gotta vote - Adverse
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Old 08-07-2022, 09:06 AM   #10
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Your rap style’s butt cheeks, you’re black and you’re ugly
And I hate to split hairs... how could I with dreads that fuckin crusty?
Cool
When I switchblade, there’s NO hesitation slittin your neck
When Rod switchblade, just means he wants to fuck his sister instead
Lol ok, pretty good
2 2 packed for that action...really fam you packin guns?
Last tutu you packed went to dance class with your faggot son
Lmaooo. I mean the tutu/.22 wp is old but coupled with "packed a" and the personal tie in plus harsh and humorous wording... yeah this was a hitter to me
Your girl got a bulldog face, I bet you’re regretting your wedlock
Arthur drew Blade from the stone, I’da smashed her head into bedrock
Decent. Creative.
Seth always trying to ban you from the chat room...that shit ain’t fair
They ever ‘cut you from the Cord’ hope it’s after you kicked the chair
HEH.
Wife’s a slut, son’s a faggot and you ran through your sis
One look at yours got Dom Toretto rethinking this whole family shit
Ehhhh the personal helps but not really feeling the dom toretto/family concept. This was your only miss IMO, would've been better to end on the previous bar

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Warned Ad to retreat, or be prepared to Tragically Suffer...
Now Sons in the street and missing a head like black family structure....
Hahahaha. Funny/creative attack bar. This is good
He bust in the door four four waving and spitting...
Not a robbery...thats just adverse retarded ass making a entrance
OK, not bad
When blade gets to topping, its sloppy, she tha queen and it's great
When your wife thinks messy topping...she's aggravated from cleaning your face
Eh not big on this one
I got a goal when I emerge with the tech and get to bucking...
It's population control, like adverse effect on reproduction...
OK
I got a trio of shooters, that'll send you to hell...
Ad ain't seen 3 9's this bad for his heath..since tipping the scale...
Decent jab
Ya wife's a groupie, BBC junkie..loves to lick and swallow it...
She's at the mercy of black rods like the British Parliament....
Had to google it but yeah, it works. Cool

I liked LGI's opener a lot but I've got Adverse taking it. More aggressive and did a better job working the personal angles.
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Old 08-08-2022, 10:41 AM   #11
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Your rap style’s butt cheeks, you’re black and you’re ugly
And I hate to split hairs... how could I with dreads that fuckin crusty?
good wording, basic punch
When I switchblade, there’s NO hesitation slittin your neck
When Rod switchblade, just means he wants to fuck his sister instead
switchblade is a bit of a stretch for me. Still works, and by no means is it easy or intuitive to make a bar about LGI's wife's discord nickname, but switch blade as a verb feels a little off
2 2 packed for that action...really fam you packin guns?
Last tutu you packed went to dance class with your faggot son
solid
Your girl got a bulldog face, I bet you’re regretting your wedlock
Arthur drew Blade from the stone, I’da smashed her head into bedrock
I am EXCALIBUR

I was never going to be unbiased on this one

Seth always trying to ban you from the chat room...that shit ain’t fair
They ever ‘cut you from the Cord’ hope it’s after you kicked the chair
nice personal
Wife’s a slut, son’s a faggot and you ran through your sis
One look at yours got Dom Toretto rethinking this whole family shit
gotta be honest, had to google, which loses impact for me, but that's not your fault here imo. Safe reference tied to the personal well


Warned Ad to retreat, or be prepared to Tragically Suffer...
Now Sons in the street and missing a head like black family structure....
this is dope
He bust in the door four four waving and spitting...
Not a robbery...thats just adverse retarded ass making a entrance
this doesn't rhyme but otherwise good
When blade gets to topping, its sloppy, she tha queen and it's great
When your wife thinks messy topping...she's aggravated from cleaning your face
gone. Don't love that you're referencing a pic that was used a month ago tbh. Still could be done in a way that isn't just clowning on that pic
I got a goal when I emerge with the tech and get to bucking...
It's population control, like adverse effect on reproduction...
wtf this is dope
I got a trio of shooters, that'll send you to hell...
Ad ain't seen 3 9's this bad for his heath..since tipping the scale...
kinda reminiscent of yo mama so fat jokes. Predictable punch
Ya wife's a groupie, BBC junkie..loves to lick and swallow it...
She's at the mercy of black rods like the British Parliament....
solid


This is mad close. I'll reread and do a point breakdown

I think this is the best verse I've seen from both this season. It's close and comes down to preference but I think they were about equally consistent, I just thought LGI had slightly stronger punches. Def gonna be a preference thing that will take forever to close, good shit guys

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Adverse had more heat than lgi. This was a good battle tbh… jokes aside rod come correct when he’s zoned in


Adverse verse had a cool vibe the start to finish… no real bangers but not many fillers either. Consistent verse

Rod had some comedy bustin jn the door waiving the 4 4 almost won the battle by itself lmao but rod had some really weird lines also like the closer and the three 9s was a bit forced

By a hair, vote - adverse
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Your rap style’s butt cheeks, you’re black and you’re ugly
And I hate to split hairs... how could I with dreads that fuckin crusty?

Yea thaybwould make it super tricky to split one kf his hairs FUCKIN IDIOT

When I switchblade, there’s NO hesitation slittin your neck
When Rod switchblade, just means he wants to fuck his sister instead

Lol whooooo keeed

2 2 packed for that action...really fam you packin guns?
Last tutu you packed went to dance class with your faggot son

No one ever called a 22 a two two knock it off sauce face

Your girl got a bulldog face, I bet you’re regretting your wedlock
Arthur drew Blade from the stone, I’da smashed her head into bedrock

Doesn't work. How does srthur draw blade black assnwith a rock? Fucking monster head retardo

Seth always trying to ban you from the chat room...that shit ain’t fair
They ever ‘cut you from the Cord’ hope it’s after you kicked the chair

Thought this was an abortion line. Fucka sucked.

Wife’s a slut, son’s a faggot and you ran through your sis
One look at yours got Dom Toretto rethinking this whole family shit

Lol rods a gross black sister fucking Mongoloidian sicko

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Warned Ad to retreat, or be prepared to Tragically Suffer...
Now Sons in the street and missing a head like black family structure....

Too easy. Lgi bragging about abandoning his family wat is this a swag an flow verse

He bust in the door four four waving and spitting...
Not a robbery...thats just adverse retarded ass making a entrance

U guys shouldn't use numbers anymore

When blade gets to topping, its sloppy, she tha queen and it's great
When your wife thinks messy topping...she's aggravated from cleaning your face

The imagery lol

I got a goal when I emerge with the tech and get to bucking...
It's population control, like adverse effect on reproduction...

No way Rodney knows any of those words let alone their meaning

I got a trio of shooters, that'll send you to hell...
Ad ain't seen 3 9's this bad for his heath..since tipping the scale...

More numbers. Fucking sesame street failed u fuckin dirts. U really think ad weighs 9 hindred and 99 lbs THIS SEEMS FUCKING REALISTIC TO U UNFUCKIN STUPIDO

Ya wife's a groupie, BBC junkie..loves to lick and swallow it...
She's at the mercy of black rods like the British Parliament...

this prob lost u the battle. I'm actually angry.

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Burnt chiglet had sauce face bar vs monster man's sister fucking shots. Great battle and by great battle I mean fucking sucked thanks fucking moron stupid idiots.

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