01-08-2014, 05:24 AM | #1 |
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UnBeautiful Life: VERSES 1 & 2. ..that much closer!
Eyo, real life shit..
Would sell his soul if he could change the past And a few of these mistakes made over a taste of ass Face the facts, its one of those funnier days he's had Raised his glass, drank until the pain was trashed A brainiac, who stays stuck in his head for days His time bombs tickin over these beds he's made A bitchs feminine ways creates his fetish for hate If he'd of let'er be he'd be a lot better today brought a baby in the world and ain't know for a year The paternity test results what he totally fears Choked on his tears, mixed in with so many beers Over a daughter in his life he ain't know would appear Coke on the mirror, tryina make his thoughts escape Talks insane, afraid his fucking life's been tossed away Another baby gil's on his plate, what she cost to raise But the kid ain't mean to ruin his night All she came here to do is live her own beautiful life She grew up despite the hate and despair And laughs when people say her life isn't as crazy as thiers At a young age wanted to run from the storm And away from her parents who fought just because she was born Looked at the pouring rain, afraid, tired of being a burden Feeling the pain, how much could fucking be in one person!? Her demons were perfect, the curses, and the blood in her veins Her fathers addictions, and mothers would uncover her fate The steps she would take to avoid the feelings she fought The feelings of fault, that caused her world to really dissolve building a vault, concealiing the thoughts she wouldn't share Cause it was easier to hide, then to find people who cared Scared, seemed like people were scarce, and nature would hit Like a brick, she gets high, calls it the only way to exist
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01-09-2014, 01:05 AM | #2 |
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I remember reading one of these verses, cant remember if i fed or not but you know me i always dig that real life shit. I feel a lot of negative emotion in this peice, almost a sense of confusion. Like you wanna be pissed off at the world but you can't fully let yourself cuz of ur kid n shit ionno. Anyways man decent drop, prefered the first verse over the second.
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01-09-2014, 07:40 AM | #4 |
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Bump. Deserves more feed
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01-09-2014, 09:45 PM | #5 |
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Would sell his soul if he could change the past
And a few of these mistakes made over a taste of ass Face the facts, its one of those funnier days he's had Raised his glass, drank until the pain was trashed A brainiac, who stays stuck in his head for days His time bombs tickin over these beds he's made A bitchs feminine ways creates his fetish for hate If he'd of let'er be he'd be a lot better today ^^Slick Geno. I've already commented on the second verse so Ima just feed the first one...again emotion is the drivin' force behind this, and content wise it's pretty clean.Good use of multies kept the flow smooth and I like that the structure is such that it makes for a very fluent read...would probably say I felt the first slightly more than the second but overall shits nice with it man, I'm sure there are numerous people that could relate in some way or another...great stuff hombre. Stay upwards. |
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