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2014 - Verse a day till i blow up - Day 8
Inspirational track of the day:
Journal: seems like this shit is all i got. alot of people would roll their eyes and shit... i get it i do. but you cant do this for anybody but yourself, seriously thinking bout some studio time. had some fun with it today.. Beat is rap game instrumental: Verse 1 (start before the beat begins, like how eminem says "imm'a get snuffed" in his part of the song) oh you wanna'say prayers?, well bitch, we spray first, i hunger for this shit, got sixteen tapeworms my life's fucked up, but couldn't it be way worse? seems like i struggle every day with the same words, got a few a screws lose, i been hospitable ever since i jacked a blimp, then flipped, n' hit a wall, n' stumbled round drunk like some kids on demerol over purple hills, the fuck were these purple pills? im good for nothen, just a criminal with a backpack took off the backpack, n 'put on a gasmask like fuck all backpack rap, here, let me poison the herd n' put on a track bout' the joys of the world, fuck-it-if-imm'a-get-cancelled, wouldn't it be ample to sample a striptease in the Sistine chapal, n' split an ounce of shrooms with this dude james franko, wearin' a spiderman suit, under shoes n' a raincoat, i'll stare out this window, with anne a' green gables n' wait till' her titties droop down to her ankles to step up to the mic, and let all a' this pain go sometimes i just don't know why i lay low... &...Chorus
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01-07-2014, 06:32 PM | #2 |
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And this has been my fav from you.. Seems like you actually put a decent amount of thought in it. Remnants of Slim. Don't know what the stars inside these () things meant... But yeah. Loved it man! Fuck the haterz..
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01-07-2014, 07:17 PM | #3 |
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thanks dude, good motivation. i put around 2-3 hours into all my verses it just seems different when lyrics are on the screen you know? love rap game though cant get it outta my head. the () is usually what i put in notepad when iuno what to write there yet
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01-07-2014, 08:27 PM | #4 |
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nice rhymes/line progression in this that were very relevant to the verses as a whole... hard not to compliment on dat
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01-07-2014, 09:08 PM | #5 |
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i appreciate the love fellow traveler, good eye ^
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