2014 - Verse a day till i blow up - Day 6

[DexLabb]

Inspirational song of the day:


Journal: "enough when i say enough..." don't know if i'll hit that wall soon but
trying to keep those thoughts outta my head... i want to plow through that feeling fuck the writers block, man.
will smith says runnin & reading, so gotta block out that voice in my head that protests everything.
can't skip a day not ever. keep learning, keep pushing, lets get it


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...ongID=12568541
(scroll down to bottom for the beat)


Verse 1


(start after the line begins.. hard to explain but yeahh
also note it's double time between the bold words)


&, im only in town for the nightttttttt,
aerodynamic loveeee, feel the connectin' flightttttt
ooh, love that feelin', ooh, i-love-that, no-rhyme-or-reason,
she's so rosy. girl, my heart is ce-ment.

-how'd-you-find-your-way-through-the-cracks,
why'd ya wanna put me in a place in my past,
i could go lightyears runnin' from my fears but i'm here,
right here, fadin' (******************)
those lips are soft as damnnn, n' i can't do it,
no i canttt. i can't lose it... i'm-so-digitized
girl,-im-a-browser-please-minimize, i know, we got,

all these. moments. you cant de. scribe, if you haddd it,
lost con. trol of. the wheel, now we crashin',
i'd say, pull-the-handbreak, but, god damnit-im-on-another-planet
just hope, they got, two spacesuits, where we landin',

& i dont quite get it, but hey, what do i know?
they-say-the partys. almost. over, shit it's time to head home
but your electric feel got me overdosed,
the kind a' dope that can't be overthrown by shock therapy,
(*********) marry me? (***********)
but, we get it...


&...Chorus
(the melody, not the actual words)
rise. rose. highs. lows.
i. wont. recy. cle.

[Vulgar]

It'd be funny if it was:

"the kind a' dope that can't be overthrown by shock therapy,
soon as the charges drop, marry me?"

Not my cup of tea @ the beat choice, but I've been around rappers who exclusively do club tracks so it's not strange territory. You weren't talking about anything in a stale way. You played with some concepts and they seemed relevant to the soundscape at hand.

[DexLabb]

Lmao, dude that actually sounds better... i might roll with that... reminds me of timbo definitely need a quick burst of sylables @ the end

thanks for the good looks