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Old 01-21-2013, 05:08 PM   #1
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Default Hi, i'm dope. How are you?

my monster clicks during chronic burning and coughing fits
chubaka chewing verses in the back room of the hostel, hid
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you see nice in my keys right?, i cant afford an optometrist
poking at the obvious, it sucks when pricks play phlebotomist
they say its hot but ends up a display of props for proctologist
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it's barack obama on ghanja piff, jus dropping phenomenal politics
i got madonna on jalapic sniff's, hollering provocative kaballah shit
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so stop the nonsense or be demolished in a project gotham wreck...
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Old 01-21-2013, 05:18 PM   #2
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you see nice in my keys right?, i cant afford an optometrist
poking at the obvious, it sucks when pricks play phlebotomist
they say its hot but ends up a display of props for proctologist
i got a doctorate from oxford for piling dockets of pompous wits
acknowledge my accomplishments or abolish my consciousness

^^^Sick drop, brah. Best parts imo
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Old 01-21-2013, 05:53 PM   #3
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Super nice flow and vocab.

Dope aiiiiite.
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Old 01-21-2013, 08:02 PM   #4
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i got a doctorate from oxford for piling dockets of pompous wits
i got madonna on jalapic sniff's, hollering provocative kaballah shit
hot as ugandan goddesses in cottages taking shots of mustafa piss

haa that was pretty smooth. i love cluttering a bunch of different concepts into one verse, keeps it interesting. thought you could probably word things better but other than that i liked those lines
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Old 01-21-2013, 08:07 PM   #5
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all i got to say is word shit better and this could be easy FIRE fam...


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I'm not even gonna quote my favorites from this drop because I loved the whole fucking thing. DOPE
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word, thanks to all who stopped in and peeped me....more to come!!!
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