01-21-2013, 05:08 PM | #1 |
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Hi, i'm dope. How are you?
my monster clicks during chronic burning and coughing fits
chubaka chewing verses in the back room of the hostel, hid doctors, nurses, optical surgeons cant find a cause for this you see nice in my keys right?, i cant afford an optometrist poking at the obvious, it sucks when pricks play phlebotomist they say its hot but ends up a display of props for proctologist i got a doctorate from oxford for piling dockets of pompous wits acknowledge my accomplishments or abolish my consciousness it's barack obama on ghanja piff, jus dropping phenomenal politics i got madonna on jalapic sniff's, hollering provocative kaballah shit hot as ugandan goddesses in cottages taking shots of mustafa piss saddam on the block with pens, jotting promises to the congressmen my prerogative is to get islamic operatives to bomb ya confidence... so stop the nonsense or be demolished in a project gotham wreck... dahmer's prominance when donning a document, honor my dominance |
01-21-2013, 05:18 PM | #2 |
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you see nice in my keys right?, i cant afford an optometrist
poking at the obvious, it sucks when pricks play phlebotomist they say its hot but ends up a display of props for proctologist i got a doctorate from oxford for piling dockets of pompous wits acknowledge my accomplishments or abolish my consciousness ^^^Sick drop, brah. Best parts imo |
01-21-2013, 05:53 PM | #3 |
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Super nice flow and vocab.
Dope aiiiiite. |
01-21-2013, 08:02 PM | #4 |
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i got a doctorate from oxford for piling dockets of pompous wits
i got madonna on jalapic sniff's, hollering provocative kaballah shit hot as ugandan goddesses in cottages taking shots of mustafa piss haa that was pretty smooth. i love cluttering a bunch of different concepts into one verse, keeps it interesting. thought you could probably word things better but other than that i liked those lines |
01-21-2013, 08:07 PM | #5 |
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all i got to say is word shit better and this could be easy FIRE fam...
nice shit though... |
01-22-2013, 11:43 AM | #6 |
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I'm not even gonna quote my favorites from this drop because I loved the whole fucking thing. DOPE
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01-22-2013, 05:09 PM | #7 |
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word, thanks to all who stopped in and peeped me....more to come!!!
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