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Lonely Boy
I measure my success in the game by the level of obsession that vets in my veins theres a part of me lookin' back at my reflection, and i wish i knew him, but he dosen't believe we’ll get it someday still, got this passion. its strange, it returns every few months that i burn, words that fall tongue to the earth. maybe, they ain’t ready for my psychopathy or maybe they just don’t want to accept new philosophies, like, its not the words its the context it came in, and revelations are lame cause they're not entertainment, we all jus' wanna sink a bit slower, love a bit stronger think that we know her, but mann the cuts just get longer, the drinks jus get fuller n' the drunkenness wanders, then you blink n’ its over then you fuckin’ go bonkers how many texts did you send that night? not sure totally, put your lips on my mine, n' take controlll of me., could have won an Oscar how she spoke to me.... then u Bowed so deep that ya' broke the sea, could have changed the world with ur potency but between us, we both know that you need love, she got, a coliseum that the Romans keep im ur game. unleash the Lion n' stroke the mane jus' a Decepticon with full Auto ways so why do i feel we can be the real deal, babyyy? . . . .
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08-25-2014, 05:36 AM | #2 |
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i dig it --- dunno what that youtube beat is all about.
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08-25-2014, 06:27 AM | #3 |
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Too.many rhymes at the end.....and the middle too...
Every text u sound the same....eh eh eh eh .....eh eh... Gotta.change it.up theres a reason no one here writez like this.....think about....before u fuck up forever |
08-25-2014, 01:28 PM | #4 |
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kin dude, i typed that reply cause i thought you would listen. but ur too foolish to listen to anything that will actually help u... thats why u wont go anywhere
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08-25-2014, 01:28 PM | #5 |
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thanks muzzle, i dig the grain of salt
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08-25-2014, 05:08 PM | #6 |
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lol athis faggot droppin shit like this n thinkin he can come shit on other people
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08-25-2014, 05:36 PM | #7 |
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dont be mad bro. noone of the writers here are actually saying anything worth listening to. my lyrics literally talk to u. say it out loud, ur shits dry and boring. a bunch of misplaced armchair academics (who aren't that smart) trying to sound scholarly. its actually pathetic
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08-25-2014, 05:37 PM | #8 |
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but why should i waste my energy even trying? fuck i dont know. dont know why i came back to this type of thing
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08-25-2014, 05:51 PM | #9 |
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U make.no sense dog...if ur words need to be read outloud then put them on the beat!!!!!....lotta skilled writerz in here...an this is simply not on there level....if u writin like 2 chainz then record it cuz people dont wanna read that shit.....ive told u that before!!!...expect the disrespect...especially wit how u be actin
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08-25-2014, 05:59 PM | #10 |
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you idiots complicate things and believe there is some value in complexities. there is no value in complexity. its easier to confuse than to be crystal clear. just like ur lyrics. ur one dimensional, always talking bout how tomorrow's going to be better. ur going to wake up in 10 years and write another track like that i bet still waiting. thats what im doing here anyway, waiting and not taking action. part of what you said is right
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08-25-2014, 06:38 PM | #11 |
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im not mad. Its just kinda lame how I came to read a amazing text post by someone whos is obviously the greatest to ever do it.
and then i read shit like this son i am dissapoint. lmao girl take control of me. u wack bitch fuck
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the girls that you will never ur hands on would dig that line
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Changed my life
I just pictured Drake rapping this on a bed of record deals and came buckets You're doing the lords work, Dexlabb
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woah dude you got time on ur hands?
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08-25-2014, 07:49 PM | #16 |
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that tantrum tossing high school boy tho, relax
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LIKE A SCANNING ELECTRON MICROSCOPE
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i wasnt even talking to u lol
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