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Old 08-11-2016, 12:43 AM   #1
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Caged gorilla on the stage in the age of filler
Daffy Duck sprayed speech, enraged the killer.
applaud the skeleton & wherever the poem leads
another slur will meet with a backward blown beak..
or bill, get your fill with your inflated innards...
you on eggshells Ferris Bueller, fake Godzilla..
ancient wizards that send a beast attracted to flame.
fashioned for fame & popularity...imagine the gains
tragedy's to blame until you start racking your brain
but you think so deeply like...why cant I complain?
too fashioned to luxuries such as an ass kissed.
if wine is meant to dwell in a cellar, your mothers an attic..
an addict for subtlety until you have to point it out.
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Im prolly trippin my whole game is Scottie Pippen
so ill that I can be chill & let Mr Miyagi kick it...
get your oreo dunked & get your coins in check.
the wizard had the power glove annoyed with stress.
thats so Fred Savage...
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Old 08-11-2016, 01:29 PM   #2
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Daffy Duck sprayed speech was dope

Uber dope how you started "or Bill" as a run on, I liked that a lot

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I actually spit out my water reading the attic line again
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