11-10-2014, 04:40 AM | #1 |
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WK7: [5]Mr. J (4-2) vs. Cereal_Killa (1-1) [Cereal_Killa wins by NS.]
AOWL Season IV, Week 7
OFFICIAL RULES: Verses are due Friday, November 14th, 11:59p.m. PCT/2:59a.m. EST/7:59a.m. UK. There are NO extensions. Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words). Votes are due Sunday, November 16th, 11:59p.m. PCT/2:59a.m. EST/7:59a.m. UK. Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week. TOPIC: Click here. Good luck. @Mr. J @Cereal_Killa
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11-10-2014, 05:00 AM | #2 |
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Good luck sir..
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11-11-2014, 11:58 AM | #3 |
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#3- "The Prestige" (2006) The underfoot Humm, some Marble dust & a Guild of thy lily Every magic trick consists of three parts, or acts .. Surprise A person is not a belief system Thank You and Good NIGHT .. The first part is called the pledge. The magician shows you something ordinary. destiny defined Danni’s blindness to the facts that she burned too bright for this world, this world and its facts If destiny loved with all the powers of its puny being, She could in a day fly from the page in each story told But she cannot; so for now she is darwinism’s dirty lil glory hole No borders in boundaries, her harp fell without harmony On unsharpened symphonies by smilingly*silly peanuts in a gallery but only when you enter.. Her veins. Allergic to algae, the golden goose of our era Whether you are a God, Darwin or a structure of remorse perched to purge on the constant air that buries her cords in Terror will keep her coil mortal As wall by wall thirst covers the moss their sound of her clock all the way to the last lash of notice, then too late for forgot She maybe almost raped but not famous enough to brush'off all of their cost is this “how it’s suppose be” she asks Darwinism and Destiny are neither a person but substance much like an ointment A chemical or distraction depending on the offspring and or voyeur Danni on the other hand is literally a person Not a vacuum, not a flux not an air duct and certainly not seduction Now thank HER for her warm and very welcoming introduction .. The second act is called the turn. The magician takes the ordinary something and makes it into something extraordinary. Litracy: From Umm to Un(…) you insert what you want The fact is, that purdy poor unorthodox Danni honours thy neigbouring thoughts So to do one to others, whilst you think you are THE ONE She has now dethatched you and all of yours On a loop, on a cycle of “damn it, nearly there, got it and 3rd person’alized states of affair” From every molecule of pain she must keep in good health and not die Incurably objectionable Knowing people lie to her, if she takes’ it out of context to survive. SOME manners vs A matter of her life As everything seems for her to be free, independent all these everything’s (its)(thems)(him)(her)(you) disease Taught, told and sold a paper bag to heal her wound It must be left in play left where it lay left penetrating her veins her strains, to strain.. as if even if they didn’t give birth to her they; now are able to populate as the single cells out of her DNA But she is the one, the one too vain every time she retaliates with what she consider to be their true f*cken lies pondering just pondering Do you really think she has a right to say I saw a miracle today at all said and done terminal of the decayed still waiting, from plane to plane say’in I was the knew it girl that everyone else knew it like a relevant pat on the back as they all smile “I knew you would get there” But you wouldn't clap yet, because making something disappear isn't enough. You have to bring it back. Now you're looking for the secret. But you won't find it because of course, you're not really looking. You don't really want to work it out. You want to be fooled "What must you do to avoid it?" Dedicated to the Brontë sisters..
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11-11-2014, 01:32 PM | #4 |
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I see what you did there
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11-16-2014, 02:47 AM | #5 |
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You get this one
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