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Old 11-10-2014, 04:40 AM   #1
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Default WK7: [5]Mr. J (4-2) vs. Cereal_Killa (1-1) [Cereal_Killa wins by NS.]

AOWL Season IV, Week 7


OFFICIAL RULES:

Verses are due Friday, November 14th, 11:59p.m. PCT/2:59a.m. EST/7:59a.m. UK. There are NO extensions.

Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words).

Votes are due Sunday, November 16th, 11:59p.m. PCT/2:59a.m. EST/7:59a.m. UK. Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week.


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Good luck. @Mr. J @Cereal_Killa


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Old 11-10-2014, 05:00 AM   #2
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#3- "The Prestige" (2006)
The underfoot Humm, some Marble dust & a Guild of thy lily



Every magic trick consists of three parts, or acts

..
Surprise

A person is not a belief system
Thank You
and
Good NIGHT
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The first part is called the pledge.
The magician shows you something ordinary.


destiny defined Danni’s blindness to the facts
that she burned too bright for this world, this world and its facts

If destiny loved with all the powers of its puny being,
She could in a day fly from the page in each story told
But she cannot; so for now she is darwinism’s dirty lil glory hole

No borders in boundaries, her harp fell without harmony
On unsharpened symphonies by smilingly*silly peanuts in a gallery
but only when you enter..

Her veins. Allergic to algae, the golden goose of our era
Whether you are a God, Darwin or a structure of remorse
perched to purge on the constant air that buries her cords
in
Terror will keep her coil mortal
As wall by wall thirst covers the moss
their sound of her clock
all the way to the last lash of notice, then too late for forgot
She maybe almost raped but not famous enough to brush'off all of their cost
is this “how it’s suppose be” she asks

Darwinism and Destiny are neither a person but substance much like an ointment
A chemical or distraction depending on the offspring and or voyeur
Danni on the other hand is literally a person
Not a vacuum, not a flux
not an air duct and certainly not seduction

Now thank HER for her warm and very welcoming introduction
..

The second act is called the turn.
The magician takes the ordinary something and makes it into something extraordinary.


Litracy:
From Umm to Un(…)
you insert what you want

The fact is,
that purdy poor unorthodox Danni
honours thy neigbouring thoughts
So to do one to others, whilst you think you are THE ONE
She has now dethatched you and all of yours

On a loop, on a cycle of
“damn it, nearly there, got it and 3rd person’alized states of affair”

From every molecule of pain
she must keep in good health and not die
Incurably objectionable
Knowing people lie to her, if she takes’ it out of context to survive.
SOME manners vs A matter of her life
As everything seems for her to be free, independent all these
everything’s
(its)(thems)(him)(her)(you) disease

Taught, told and sold a paper bag to heal her wound
It must be
left in play
left where it lay
left penetrating her veins
her strains, to strain.. as if even if they didn’t give birth to her they;
now are able to populate as the single cells out of her DNA
But she is the one, the one too vain
every time she retaliates
with what she consider to be their true f*cken lies
pondering just pondering
Do you really think she has a right to say
I saw a miracle today
at all said and done terminal of the decayed
still waiting, from plane to plane
say’in
I was the knew it girl
that everyone else knew it
like a relevant pat on the back as they all smile

“I knew you would get there”




But you wouldn't clap yet, because making something disappear isn't enough. You have to bring it back. Now you're looking for the secret. But you won't find it because of course, you're not really looking. You don't really want to work it out. You want to be fooled

"What must you do to avoid it?"




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Old 11-11-2014, 01:32 PM   #4
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Old 11-16-2014, 02:47 AM   #5
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