W3: Cereal_Killa (0-0) vs. Pinot Grij (1-1) -CK wins via NS

King Ra. · 10-13-2014, 05:40 AM

AOWL Season IV, Week 3

OFFICIAL RULES:
Verses are due Friday, October 17th, 11:59p.m. PCT/2:59a.m. EST/7:59a.m. UK. There are NO extensions.

Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words).

Votes are due Sunday, October 19th, 11:59p.m. PCT/2:59a.m. EST/7:59a.m. UK. Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week.

TOPIC: My message isn't perfectly defined. I have, as a human being, fallen to peer pressure.

Good luck. @Cereal_Killa @Pinot Grij

Pinot Grij · 10-13-2014, 11:57 AM

hi

Cereal_Killa · 10-13-2014, 11:27 PM

Rocken Robyn
..
Tweedle-lee-dee-dee-dee, Tweedle-lee-dee-dee

I'm knee deep in this bitch..

Cereal_Killa · 10-15-2014, 10:50 AM

TOPIC: My message isn't perfectly defined. I have, as a human being, fallen to peer pressure.

The Life cycle of a Vulture

..
My jaw bone gnawed; short circuit works as a word so does future
Missing pigments with a body broken
bent perfectly for you, for you to maneuver
Indecent, abused an under over exposure
stress. Do I have it?

meanwhile
I’m now nil by mouth from these ultra violet eyes
Upholding my internals surgically looped to its vines
I’m destiny sent n’ webbed to a podium of open wounds, wound to other Nubian chocha
Poorly displayed with opium swallowing Ofelia’s thoroughbred choker
wet, left right in this laugh riot suit, after I curtsey spinning for the peepholes hoopla

Noticing yes it is curtains

You have been caudally invited (cautioned) inside my ‘lil Petri Dish

you may need some
..

With violence, hunger and strikes
These idle hands now bridle a peach inside a lowly albino chapel
Amongst monkey’s groomed as bank managers with indigo satchels
Bruised by their lollygagging And how big I truly seem
I ditch the peach to cut open my cantaloupe just to let our voice breathe
I throw a few bones
though my personality must reach the same depth as debt with disease
***kle

Now I see It was better off decomposed then unleashed for these soso’s that would rather rattle just to smell it bleed

Tick Tock
my chemicals kick
when the peach smiles like a barter market’s cart of Gee, feast
Ok I OD
This rivers dry anyways, strapping myself to the Kilroy position in their rowboat
I sigh, I pose; I salute ‘til it’s time to zig-zag madness n really frikazee my barcode
I ole this pissing hole on angle dust from sandman’s Hardly Holy

ignorant that peach hemorrhage when you un’squeeze
A total fucken uh oh
time
Looking up from my watch
Tick tock
OD
oh no
I do everything except walk out with the ideal car loan
But I Scarlet an ambient and started garg’ling
Stretched far away from the ozone entire’ely
I feel for one to say deposit,
I’m positive aids don’t often get swallowed this hard though
hmmmm
This black coin operated bubble vagina is unshelf’ed shocker
Let me think for a fucken second as I shake her keys in my pocket
I still have unfinished business in slow mo
On stilts I bump, wondering whats ho’mo

10-13-2014, 05:40 AM	#1
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	W3: Cereal_Killa (0-0) vs. Pinot Grij (1-1) -CK wins via NS AOWL Season IV, Week 3 OFFICIAL RULES: Verses are due Friday, October 17th, 11:59p.m. PCT/2:59a.m. EST/7:59a.m. UK. There are NO extensions. Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words). Votes are due Sunday, October 19th, 11:59p.m. PCT/2:59a.m. EST/7:59a.m. UK. Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week. TOPIC: My message isn't perfectly defined. I have, as a human being, fallen to peer pressure. Good luck. @Cereal_Killa @Pinot Grij __________________ Vetwork, bitches. Last edited by Adonis; 10-18-2014 at 03:15 AM.

10-13-2014, 11:57 AM	#2
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195060	hi __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

10-13-2014, 11:27 PM	#3
Cereal_Killa Licking Lily's.. Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 706 Battle Record: 11-6 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 3565729	Rocken Robyn .. Tweedle-lee-dee-dee-dee, Tweedle-lee-dee-dee I'm knee deep in this bitch.. __________________ You think YOU'RE sick I shit cough drops .. Last edited by Cereal_Killa; 10-13-2014 at 11:32 PM.

10-15-2014, 10:50 AM	#4
Cereal_Killa Licking Lily's.. Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 706 Battle Record: 11-6 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 3565729	TOPIC: My message isn't perfectly defined. I have, as a human being, fallen to peer pressure. The Life cycle of a Vulture .. My jaw bone gnawed; short circuit works as a word so does future Missing pigments with a body broken bent perfectly for you, for you to maneuver Indecent, abused an under over exposure stress. Do I have it? meanwhile I’m now nil by mouth from these ultra violet eyes Upholding my internals surgically looped to its vines I’m destiny sent n’ webbed to a podium of open wounds, wound to other Nubian chocha Poorly displayed with opium swallowing Ofelia’s thoroughbred choker wet, left right in this laugh riot suit, after I curtsey spinning for the peepholes hoopla Noticing yes it is curtains You have been caudally invited (cautioned) inside my ‘lil Petri Dish you may need some .. With violence, hunger and strikes These idle hands now bridle a peach inside a lowly albino chapel Amongst monkey’s groomed as bank managers with indigo satchels Bruised by their lollygagging And how big I truly seem I ditch the peach to cut open my cantaloupe just to let our voice breathe I throw a few bones though my personality must reach the same depth as debt with disease **kle Now I see It was better off decomposed then unleashed for these soso’s that would rather rattle just to smell it bleed Tick Tock my chemicals kick* when the peach smiles like a barter market’s cart of Gee, feast Ok I OD This rivers dry anyways, strapping myself to the Kilroy position in their rowboat I sigh, I pose; I salute ‘til it’s time to zig-zag madness n really frikazee my barcode I ole this pissing hole on angle dust from sandman’s Hardly Holy ignorant that peach hemorrhage when you un’squeeze A total fucken uh oh time Looking up from my watch Tick tock OD oh no I do everything except walk out with the ideal car loan But I Scarlet an ambient and started garg’ling Stretched far away from the ozone entire’ely I feel for one to say deposit, I’m positive aids don’t often get swallowed this hard though hmmmm This black coin operated bubble vagina is unshelf’ed shocker Let me think for a fucken second as I shake her keys in my pocket I still have unfinished business in slow mo On stilts I bump, wondering whats ho’mo __________________ You think YOU'RE sick I shit cough drops .. Last edited by Cereal_Killa; 10-16-2014 at 06:00 AM.