04-22-2018, 07:46 PM | #1 |
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04-24-2018, 04:36 PM | #2 |
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04-24-2018, 05:59 PM | #3 |
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04-26-2018, 09:17 PM | #4 |
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olddddd as fuck homey, stop actin like you official Everyone knows your mid life crisis involved some Cuban missles In the chat you really act soft, you’re far from the last don You need to strap on a pair, then toss out your pair of strap ons Thinkin this fat old fuck gets ass is a new surprise... If you popped a chariots...the wheel on the one you used to ride Women won’t fuck you, must be small with a lazy finish Bitches cry when they see Nic Unit you’d think there’s babies in it Still rockin Jordans in your pics, stop forcin n stop it It makes me cringe when you post ‘Js’ more then Barcotic Such a shitty life, a latino roofer that’s ass cheeks.... You put up Shingles ya whole life & got diagnosed with it last week Yo gun bars are lame, act like anyone can’t snuff this dude My shooter’ll have that stick to your stomach, that’s comfort food |
04-27-2018, 09:58 AM | #5 |
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beaten u 6 times, man & now u drownin in ya own sorrows with lines that are not enticin
u got nothin but watered-down concepts... u even gotta pinch ur nose just to write them Fuck a gun, nigga. I’m comfy with the box-cutter slaying him knife to the face make the blade feel at home... that’s Gillette stadium u used to pm me for Jordan releases so don’t gimme that I’m too old talk again If I wear em it’s & like the OG still has swag... when u do it’s like that wardrobe goes better with moccasins u tried hookin up with an Indian chick online, yeah, nice try yo But that’s not why ya champ match success rate... has u tied to the Browns bio wanna be recognized as a pioneerin vet yet used to jack from joke sites & got revealed here quick So don’t think it’s ok to jump on the Cro’s a biter bandwagon... when u built the first wheels for that shit Wack bitch. My guns so big they make ya jerseys look small & my stick-ups great Intimidate ya garbage... cans on the floor like gettin home on waste pick-up days As a supplier the product never comes to a dead stop. As a shooter I let the lead pop Im here multitasking cuz I’m on the block with the fire.... that’s also an Alvin Karpis head shot
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04-29-2018, 03:08 AM | #7 |
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olddddd as fuck homey, stop actin like you official
Everyone knows your mid life crisis involved some Cuban missles (Ok) In the chat you really act soft, you’re far from the last don You need to strap on a pair, then toss out your pair of strap ons (I like rearrange lines like this. Reminds me of kung fu grip but eh this one was eh Thinkin this fat old fuck gets ass is a new surprise... If you popped a chariots...the wheel on the one you used to ride (I like this . its kinda corny but I'm Fucking with it) Women won’t fuck you, must be small with a lazy finish Bitches cry when they see Nic Unit you’d think there’s babies in it (Eh) Still rockin Jordans in your pics, stop forcin n stop it It makes me cringe when you post ‘Js’ more then Barcotic (Nah) Such a shitty life, a latino roofer that’s ass cheeks.... You put up Shingles ya whole life & got diagnosed with it last week (Hahaha why have I not seen this . its way too easy but I like this ) Yo gun bars are lame, act like anyone can’t snuff this dude My shooter’ll have that stick to your stomach, that’s comfort food (I like this too ) 3 quotes beaten u 6 times, man & now u drownin in ya own sorrows with lines that are not enticin u got nothin but watered-down concepts... u even gotta pinch ur nose just to write them (Ok) Fuck a gun, nigga. I’m comfy with the box-cutter slaying him knife to the face make the blade feel at home... that’s Gillette stadium (Oh word . slick) u used to pm me for Jordan releases so don’t gimme that I’m too old talk again If I wear em it’s & like the OG still has swag... when u do it’s like that wardrobe goes better with moccasins (Lol the Indian angle reemerges) u tried hookin up with an Indian chick online, yeah, nice try yo But that’s not why ya champ match success rate... has u tied to the Browns bio (Ok) wanna be recognized as a pioneerin vet yet used to jack from joke sites & got revealed here quick So don’t think it’s ok to jump on the Cro’s a biter bandwagon... when u built the first wheels for that shit (DAMN) Wack bitch. My guns so big they make ya jerseys look small & my stick-ups great Intimidate ya garbage... cans on the floor like gettin home on waste pick-up days (Nah) As a supplier the product never comes to a dead stop. As a shooter I let the lead pop Im here multitasking cuz I’m on the block with the fire.... that’s also an Alvin Karpis head shot (block /Ksrpus head needed more than the fire%gun play ) Tied in quotes Nika one less miss So v/Nika __________________
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04-29-2018, 08:27 AM | #8 |
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Thinkin this fat old fuck gets ass is a new surprise...
If you popped a chariots...the wheel on the one you used to ride Women won’t fuck you, must be small with a lazy finish Bitches cry when they see Nic Unit you’d think there’s babies in it Such a shitty life, a latino roofer that’s ass cheeks.... You put up Shingles ya whole life & got diagnosed with it last week Yo gun bars are lame, act like anyone can’t snuff this dude My shooter’ll have that stick to your stomach, that’s comfort food vs. Fuck a gun, nigga. I’m comfy with the box-cutter slaying him knife to the face make the blade feel at home... that’s Gillette stadium wanna be recognized as a pioneerin vet yet used to jack from joke sites & got revealed here quick So don’t think it’s ok to jump on the Cro’s a biter bandwagon... when u built the first wheels for that shit & almost water-down, but i didn't think the flip was enough from "so watered down they need a cap & goggles" type lines ive seen... I've got Karpis here with a more direct & comical hard hitting verse... I usually fuck with Nika's concepts more than I did this week, even AK's non-quotes were typically chuckle worthy and not complete misses.. cool read, props to both Vote - Alvin Karpis |
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04-30-2018, 12:16 AM | #10 |
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olddddd as fuck homey, stop actin like you official
Everyone knows your mid life crisis involved some Cuban missles This was okay. Kinda funny. In the chat you really act soft, you’re far from the last don You need to strap on a pair, then toss out your pair of strap ons I didn’t like this. Thinkin this fat old fuck gets ass is a new surprise... If you popped a chariots...the wheel on the one you used to ride Lol I liked this. The wp it’s pretty nice and that’s a funny line. Women won’t fuck you, must be small with a lazy finish Bitches cry when they see Nic Unit you’d think there’s babies in it I get the Nic unit wp and in itself was fine but the execution was off. The “bitches cry” and “babies in it” doesn’t tie in well. Still rockin Jordans in your pics, stop forcin n stop it It makes me cringe when you post ‘Js’ more then Barcotic I don’t get the barcotic tie in. Such a shitty life, a latino roofer that’s ass cheeks.... You put up Shingles ya whole life & got diagnosed with it last week AK funny af lol. This a good line, I literally laughed at this one. Solid af. Yo gun bars are lame, act like anyone can’t snuff this dude My shooter’ll have that stick to your stomach, that’s comfort food I’ve heard similar lines but I thought this was decent. beaten u 6 times, man & now u drownin in ya own sorrows with lines that are not enticin u got nothin but watered-down concepts... u even gotta pinch ur nose just to write them This was just okay. The concept is very basic. Fuck a gun, nigga. I’m comfy with the box-cutter slaying him knife to the face make the blade feel at home... that’s Gillette stadium This was cool. u used to pm me for Jordan releases so don’t gimme that I’m too old talk again If I wear em it’s & like the OG still has swag... when u do it’s like that wardrobe goes better with moccasins Purely a statement bar but it still was a light jab. u tried hookin up with an Indian chick online, yeah, nice try yo But that’s not why ya champ match success rate... has u tied to the Browns bio This is pretty dope. Those are two good angles (the record and the online thing) and you wove them together well for an effective punch. wanna be recognized as a pioneerin vet yet used to jack from joke sites & got revealed here quick So don’t think it’s ok to jump on the Cro’s a biter bandwagon... when u built the first wheels for that shit This cool. I liked the personal. The wordiness took away from the bar a bit hit it hit. Wack bitch. My guns so big they make ya jerseys look small & my stick-ups great Intimidate ya garbage... cans on the floor like gettin home on waste pick-up days Garbage can/cannon flips have been done s lot. I think if you use a played concept you have to do it in s particularly creative way but I don’t think you did that here. As a supplier the product never comes to a dead stop. As a shooter I let the lead pop Im here multitasking cuz I’m on the block with the fire.... that’s also an Alvin Karpis head sho Decent closer. I liked this battle and thought it was very close. I thought Ill nik-a edged it by the slightest margin. AK’s verse was funny and entertaining. He slightly had more misses than Ill though. Ill’s verse was also a bit more well rounded. Mvgt Ill Nik-a |
04-30-2018, 04:21 AM | #11 |
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OYE DISXULPE I HAVE MY GIRL IN MY EAR AND SHIT HAOEN AND IM FRUNJ JACO BEACH
olddddd as fuck homey, stop actin like you official Everyone knows your mid life crisis involved some Cuban missles what? In the chat you really act soft, you’re far from the last don You need to strap on a pair, then toss out your pair of strap ons Think in this fat old fuck gets ass is a new surprise... If you popped a chariots...the wheel on the one you used to ride ok this made me giggle Women won’t fuck you, must be small with a lazy finish Bitches cry when they see Nic Unit you’d think there’s babies in it [b] Still rockin Jordans in your pics, stop forcin n stop it It makes me cringe when you post ‘Js’ more then Barcotic Such a shitty life, a latino roofer that’s ass cheeks.... You put up Shingles ya whole life & got diagnosed with it last week Yo gun bars are lame, act like anyone can’t snuff this dude My shooter’ll have that stick to your stomach, that’s comfort food Alvin Karpis is offline Add to Alvin Karpis's Reputation Report Post Vs beaten u 6 times, man & now u drownin in ya own sorrows with lines that are not enticin u got nothin but watered-down concepts... u even gotta pinch ur nose just to write them Fuck a gun, nigga. I’m comfy with the box-cutter slaying him knife to the face make the blade feel at home... that’s Gillette stadium u used to pm me for Jordan releases so don’t gimme that I’m too old talk again If I wear em it’s & like the OG still has swag... when u do it’s like that wardrobe goes better with moccasins u tried hookin up with an Indian chick online, yeah, nice try yo But that’s not why ya champ match success rate... has u tied to the Browns bio wanna be recognized as a pioneerin vet yet used to jack from joke sites & got revealed here quick So don’t think it’s ok to jump on the Cro’s a biter bandwagon... when u built the first wheels for that shit Wack bitch. My guns so big they make ya jerseys look small & my stick-ups great Intimidate ya garbage... cans on the floor like gettin home on waste pick-up days As a supplier the product never comes to a dead stop. As a shooter I let the lead pop Im here multitasking cuz I’m on the bl |
04-30-2018, 07:58 AM | #12 |
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Dunno what Blue was reading this week
Karpis has a few diff good ideas but nothing that really ZINGED to me, seemed like he just dialled it in tbh, chariots was cool, i didnt get the Nic Unit but i imagine its like a neo natal ward or some shit so dont feel like im missing much. also as i read that I thought of see Nik / scenic wordplay that could have been used but thats a missed opportunity i guess LOL. Shingles again could have been so much more but as it was it just hit a little light, stick to your stomach was just okay. Nik has the watered down concepts line that I liked, not seen that done before despite Blue's post, Gilette Stadium was cool, biter bandwagon was cool, I didnt like cans on the floor tbh seemed a bit basic but the rest was straight and more importantly the wording seemed aggressive and like he hated the opponent, that came off harsher than Karp's as a result. Theres a few ideas I really liked but nothing to really make them POP wording wise and thats what let Karp down a little this week I felt. Nik on the otherhand had good wording despite the line lengths and it made for a better payoff to his punches. Nik got it. |
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