06-21-2018, 09:05 PM | #1 |
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Week 1: Plot (0-0) vs. BodySnatcher (0-0) - BODY WINS
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This should be self explanatory, but for those who are unfamiliar with the 1-2 Punch League.. 1. NO BITING 2. NO SWAYING 3. NO FEEDING 4. No RECYCLING 5. Must vote on at least 5 battles each week. Failure to vote on 5 battles will result in -1 votes deducted from your battle. Failure to vote on ANY will result in -2 votes deducted in your battle. 6. Voting much be at least ONE complete sentence with a decent explanation. (Vote: Bags as per tradition) WON’T COUNT! 7. Voting on Champ and Contender matches are required for all participants. 8. ONLY 2 TOTAL EXTENSIONS ALLOWED THIS SEASON. It’s literally 1 bar, extensions shouldn’t be needed but you’ll get 2 just for whining purposes. 9. NO TALKING ABOUT OPEN BATTLES! If you think you’re being hate voted against etc, contact a mod and we will handle it accordingly. THIS WEEK ONLY PUNCHES DUE ON SUNDAY VOTING ENDS MONDAY MORNING NEW BATTLES UP MONDAY EVENING @Plot @BodySnatcher Last edited by For Battling; 06-21-2018 at 09:34 PM. |
06-22-2018, 01:08 AM | #3 |
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06-22-2018, 04:49 PM | #4 |
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This is the end of ur life story so if u book it...I got the chopper for an aerial shot & if I see a Plot scheme...I’ma leave him with a hole the size of his own burial Plot |
06-24-2018, 03:24 AM | #5 |
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These rhymes are tough, better bring the arsenal if you wanna fight me bud,
Coz you can bet Imma give you the full jacket, no membership to a bikie club. Last edited by Plot; 06-24-2018 at 08:59 AM. Reason: just spelling |
06-24-2018, 01:00 PM | #6 |
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Body used plot twice made the bar clunky and repetitive. 2 lines can’t afford to waste space. Plot came a little consistent.
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06-24-2018, 01:05 PM | #7 |
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Yea body had a good scheme going on, pretty complex and creative but also very wordy and he used the world plot 2x which def hurt. Plot came with a surprisingly good line, had he dropped worse then body would have won but plot came correct.
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06-24-2018, 01:24 PM | #8 |
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is 'bikie' club something they say in Australia or something? That made Plots bar corny to me....
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06-24-2018, 01:27 PM | #9 |
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This was close. I think BodySnatcher made a little more sense. Both lines were worded pretty awkwardly.
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06-24-2018, 06:47 PM | #10 |
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Its always wierd to me people cant get over a word being used twice when in some cases its needed for the bar to deliver its aim. For me this was that rare exception. I got plots angle but the "bikie" part was a deal breaker. Both concepts are some what played but body gave his a creative twist and jus seemed to put more effort in here.
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06-24-2018, 06:49 PM | #11 |
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Body had a lot going on (in a good way). The burial plot punch was pretty basic, but you had the book/life/plot flip; the chopper/aerial shot flip; then ‘plot scheme’ phrase ties everything together. ‘Burial plot’ punch was just okay - basic plot flip.
Plot punch was pretty good. Subtle tie ins with the tough and bar fight tie ins to the punch. Wasn’t a complex scheme like Body’s though. FMJ/biker jack wasn’t a crazy flip to me - a little basic. Both punches were good but I think the complexity of Body’s edged it Mvgt Body |
06-24-2018, 07:30 PM | #12 |
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Body bruh, you literally used EVERY played Plot concept that's been throw at your opponent a million times before.. VOTE PLOT, even tho we call 'em BIKERS.
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06-24-2018, 07:32 PM | #13 |
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This is the end of ur life story so if u book it...I got the chopper for an aerial shot
& if I see a Plot scheme...I’ma leave him with a hole the size of his own burial Plot This was dope, I seen it used before but the wording here was completely different. ------ These rhymes are tough, better bring the arsenal if you wanna fight me bud, Coz you can bet Imma give you the full jacket, no membership to a bikie club. This was coo here, would have hit harder with different wording, but still overall tho Props to both, I got BS here, his line just overall had more jab to it and was more effective. Plot line was still nice tho none the less V-Body
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06-25-2018, 03:49 AM | #14 |
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I liked Body's bar but gotta concur with what was previously mentioned, what you said I've heard a lot of, bro. Plot...hmm def not your best...I get the biker line though especially livin' in OZ, it was poorly worded yet I felt you did more with the line before imo. V - Plot. |
06-25-2018, 04:21 AM | #15 |
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Plot mini scheme worked for me, scrammed in a lot of stuff and made it work
Plot's didn't really land imo v/Body |
06-25-2018, 09:45 AM | #16 |
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honestly I thought both were fire....body just had better wording and word association on his execution
I didn't mind bikie even tho it sounded gay lol v body in a close one |
06-25-2018, 12:41 PM | #17 |
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I didn’t like either tbh.
Bikie club was random and I got the reference but it was still like fuck off lol v/body |
06-25-2018, 06:13 PM | #18 |
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Cool bars... body had the better wording I thought plots concepts was nice just needed more to the actual punch
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06-26-2018, 02:54 AM | #19 |
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V/Plot.....wording saved him here imo
Body wasnt bad just not executed well enough imo |
06-26-2018, 04:03 AM | #20 |
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BodySnatcher Wins 9-5
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