West: 1. Schadenfreude vs 14. Enbombz - SCHADENFREUDE WINS

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NBL SEASON 11


* Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory
* Swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ
* Verses due, THURSDAY APRIL 26TH
* 12 Line MINIMUM FOR ALL PLAYOFF PARTICIPANTS
* 20 Line MAXIMUM FOR ALL PLAYOFF PARTICIPANTS

@Schadenfreude @Enbombz

[Enbombz]

12 is cool.

[Schadenfreude]

Aight

[Enbombz]

Originally Posted by Schadenfreude

Amen is a MAN in EVERYTHING he does

He having another gay episode...well we were already on our toes
Every epilogue has us wondering when they'll bring this love story to a close
Your like "Leave Amen Alone!" we seen you took a shine n shared
So don't claim Aero signal and void, Homie.. All the signs are there
N I'm not saying it's a conspiracy, but tell me brother please
Exactly Howitzer a thing your top seed, when you tank every other week
You ain't got weapons n never will, if your a shooter i'm a ten
Boy If I hear you talking 'bout a spike in arms it better be a suicide attempt
Fag pass out when i hit him, One to the core destroy the dude,
Wake up with so much pain in ya gut you'll think Illuminati poisoned you
Ya writtens ain't shit, but read the mag you would think your the king
I'm smashing ya dream in shards, with the same crystal ball that predicted ya win

[Schadenfreude]

Lol foh, look Sour Joog, wait I mean..

Mayweather versus McGregor, boa I have a pair of hella-hands
so try that drunk shit w/ Me, I’ll turn ya square jaw into a parallelogram.
Stealing another man’s name to protect you was fucking weak,
candy ass should’ve known that Sour Patch would end up sum’n sweet.
Won’t even save this W to memory, yo fan bars ain’t shit to Me
yo punches barely land mark & a no show from Orc’s yo landmark victory.
Showing was a bad decision, gunplay for a fag thinking he tuff
big biscuit w/ German ammunition, bouta give you half nigga, like Muff.
This is gonna blow up in your face, that’s the reason I’m calm..
I got the league wired & u can’t diffuse the situation, it ain’t ya time Bomb.
Plenty’ve killed you already, s’why yo speech don’t concern Me,
yea I’m laid back lodging, having fun w/ this body - Weekend at Bernie’s.

..BODY.

[El Muffin]

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Originally Posted by Schadenfreude View Post
Amen is a MAN in EVERYTHING he does

He having another gay episode...well we were already on our toes
Every epilogue has us wondering when they'll bring this love story to a close
( every ep he log ? Like no one calls episodes eps phonetically . conceptually this is great but I can't get over the calling episodes eps part)
Your like "Leave Amen Alone!" we seen you took a shine n shared
So don't claim Aero signal and void, Homie.. All the signs are there
(Ha ! Fire)
N I'm not saying it's a conspiracy, but tell me brother please
Exactly Howitzer a thing your top seed, when you tank every other week
(I did howitzer wp here . personally its played but ur flip is better so I think its ok)
You ain't got weapons n never will, if your a shooter i'm a ten
Boy If I hear you talking 'bout a spike in arms it better be a suicide attempt
(Ok)
Fag pass out when i hit him, One to the core destroy the dude,
Wake up with so much pain in ya gut you'll think Illuminati poisoned you
(Ha chyeah reference ala karaoke disc punch)
Ya writtens ain't shit, but read the mag you would think your the king
I'm smashing ya dream in shards, with the same crystal ball that predicted ya win
(Eh ok)

2 quotes that was fire
One miss
Everything else was ok

Mayweather versus McGregor, boa I have a pair of hella-hands
so try that drunk shit w/ Me, I’ll turn ya square jaw into a parallelogram.
(Niiice)
Stealing another man’s name to protect you was fucking weak,
candy ass should’ve known that Sour Patch would end up sum’n sweet.
(Lol ok)
Won’t even save this W to memory, yo fan bars ain’t shit to Me
yo punches barely land mark & a no show from Orc’s yo landmark victory.
(Oh lawd)
Showing was a bad decision, gunplay for a fag thinking he tuff
big biscuit w/ German ammunition, bouta give you half nigga, like Muff.
(Heh ok)
This is gonna blow up in your face, that’s the reason(why) I’m calm..
I got the league wired & u can’t diffuse the situation, (-it just isnt) ya time Bomb.
(Dope concept . subtle tweaks like in parenthesis n I woulda lived it more )
Plenty’ve killed you already, s’why yo speech don’t concern Me,
yea I’m laid back lodging, having fun w/ this body - Weekend at Bernie’s.
(Reference lost on me)

I got Schad here

Heavier lines n just one miss

V/ Schad

Enbombz was consistent but needed more firepower

[Saint]

Originally Posted by Schadenfreude

Lol foh, look Sour Joog, wait I mean..

Mayweather versus McGregor, boa I have a pair of hella-hands
so try that drunk shit w/ Me, I’ll turn ya square jaw into a parallelogram.
(Sick, dont think ive seen this)

Stealing another man’s name to protect you was fucking weak,
candy ass should’ve known that Sour Patch would end up sum’n sweet.
(Not bad, seen sour patch a few times)

Won’t even save this W to memory, yo fan bars ain’t shit to Me
yo punches barely land mark & a no show from Orc’s yo landmark victory.
(landmark been done, this was an ok personal)

Showing was a bad decision, gunplay for a fag thinking he tuff
big biscuit w/ German ammunition, bouta give you half nigga, like Muff.
(Ha, didnt like the comma but i see you)

This is gonna blow up in your face, that’s the reason I’m calm..
I got the league wired & u can’t diffuse the situation, it ain’t ya time Bomb.
(wording off, idk it was a decent though)

Plenty’ve killed you already, s’why yo speech don’t concern Me,
yea I’m laid back lodging, having fun w/ this body - Weekend at Bernie’s.
(Haaa, cool ref)

..BODY.

He having another gay episode...well we were already on our toes
Every epilogue has us wondering when they'll bring this love story to a close
(Didnt love the wp here)

Your like "Leave Amen Alone!" we seen you took a shine n shared
So don't claim Aero signal and void, Homie.. All the signs are there
(Cool jab @the quote. f with it)

N I'm not saying it's a conspiracy, but tell me brother please
Exactly Howitzer a thing your top seed, when you tank every other week
(Ok, howitzer ive seen. Cool)

You ain't got weapons n never will, if your a shooter i'm a ten
Boy If I hear you talking 'bout a spike in arms it better be a suicide attempt
(I liked this, iono felt mean)

Fag pass out when i hit him, One to the core destroy the dude,
Wake up with so much pain in ya gut you'll think Illuminati poisoned you
(Eh ok, i get the chyeah topic but too straight fwd)

Ya writtens ain't shit, but read the mag you would think your the king
I'm smashing ya dream in shards, with the same crystal ball that predicted ya win
(Ok decent hit @ mag pred)

not a bad battle. schade mighta had one miss but consistent verse -- enbombz had some shit but schad had heavier hits w/ opener & closer imo. infact i think bombz wrding is what held him back more often than not at times, concepts were solid. that said, freude took it. gj fellas

V -- Schad

[Blue Bayou]

Mayweather versus McGregor, boa I have a pair of hella-hands
so try that drunk shit w/ Me, I’ll turn ya square jaw into a parallelogram.
Won’t even save this W to memory, yo fan bars ain’t shit to Me
yo punches barely land mark & a no show from Orc’s yo landmark victory.
Showing was a bad decision, gunplay for a fag thinking he tuff
big biscuit w/ German ammunition, bouta give you half nigga, like Muff.
Plenty’ve killed you already, s’why yo speech don’t concern Me,
yea I’m laid back lodging, having fun w/ this body - Weekend at Bernie’s

vs.


Your like "Leave Amen Alone!" we seen you took a shine n shared
So don't claim Aero signal and void, Homie.. All the signs are there
N I'm not saying it's a conspiracy, but tell me brother please
Exactly Howitzer a thing your top seed, when you tank every other week
You ain't got weapons n never will, if your a shooter i'm a ten
Boy If I hear you talking 'bout a spike in arms it better be a suicide attempt


Cool battle here enjoyed both verses, but on the whole I've got Schade here, a good mixture of concepts that hit and I think his non-quotes were stronger which def took this for him.. very consistent verse, good battle

Vote - Schade.

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Enbombz: suicide attempt was pretty good and clever punch, illuminati was nice current event punch

Schadenfreude: square jaw was nice, Orc land mark was decent, German half nigga was dope

Decent battle, enjoyable read from both. Wish Enbombz would’ve came wit a bit more of an aggressive approach but looking at it here Schad got it.

Vote / Schadenfreude