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I have read some of the feedback given and I feel out of place to be honest
I could offer my HUMBLE opinion on the pieces submitted but I FEAR it may be rather RUDIMENTARY (literally unsure if I used that word right) in comparison to other critiques offered thus far Let's just call it a wash here I'll agree not to vote and you all will agree that you are happy having me not do so..... |
09-07-2016, 11:59 PM | #122 |
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Also let the record show cimm squeaked by w a measly 5-1 robbery.
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09-08-2016, 12:03 AM | #123 |
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a harvard alum should thrive alongside all these pretentious fucks.
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09-08-2016, 12:11 AM | #124 |
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09-08-2016, 12:13 AM | #125 |
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Rudimentary was a correct word choice.
For what it's worth, I enjoyed your verse. Cimmerian's style of uber short, laser precise verses present a problem to even the best in the game, in my opinion. Hard to pick apart.
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09-08-2016, 12:14 AM | #126 |
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I wanted to do alot more w that verse ..... only had the one day to really work on it
I'm ashamed Some really inspiring writing tho Legit makes me want to have done better Awesome first round |
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well, shit. that's cool.
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Yep. He was considered the best Open Mic writer on these sites when I was still new.
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I predict I lose to dead man in the next round. There is a sort of melancholy underdog tone with unique phrasing, imagery, and good flow that is intertwined is his verses. How can you not root for that?
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ay lars Id like to contribute a video for your mag, what ype of time frame am I looking at to have it to you by>?
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