WK3: Ahriman 0-0 vs. Grizz 0-0 - Grizz WINS!

Incredible · 05-21-2018, 12:42 PM

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due FRIDAY MAY 25th and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE

@Ahriman @Grizz

Grizz · 05-21-2018, 03:05 PM

10, in

Ahriman · 05-21-2018, 05:18 PM

Check

Grizz · 05-22-2018, 01:43 AM

who r u? it’s my first wk back so a dub they gotta hand me
if u show it’s pointless dawg- like the new netflix series based on the Obama family
ya wifey, a slut we poundin her throat he cool w/ it - pal is a joke
it don’t matter if you vision a dub - you’ll still need an infinity stone to change reality of votes
i’m quick to fire the weapon, he’ll need a dr visit for tryin my wesson
if we ever beefed Nc’ll hear a quick clap, that has nothing to do with Hush’s viral infection
why r u stressin, give a good battle inspire the veteran- or a fist rock ya team
an i have a few kicks united w/ this manchest with out a goal scored or soccer dream
i makes hits fam - ain’t seeing me break, got goons in each state
ill have Arie ran up on by an Entourage that’s not carrying pens or a DVD case

Incredible · 05-26-2018, 12:36 AM

@Ahriman requested a extension via PM

Incredible · 05-27-2018, 06:48 AM

@Ahriman is a no show, Grizz wins! Lets give him some good feedback, thanks

Twodrop · 05-27-2018, 10:40 AM

who r u? it’s my first wk back so a dub they gotta hand me
if u show it’s pointless dawg- like the new netflix series based on the Obama family
naw..
ya wifey, a slut we poundin her throat he cool w/ it - pal is a joke
it don’t matter if you vision a dub - you’ll still need an infinity stone to change reality of votes
see what you did, not feeling it
i’m quick to fire the weapon, he’ll need a dr visit for tryin my wesson
if we ever beefed Nc’ll hear a quick clap, that has nothing to do with Hush’s viral infection
seen a couple Hush lines this week, this was one of the weaker ones, ok tho
why r u stressin, give a good battle inspire the veteran- or a fist rock ya team
an i have a few kicks united w/ this manchest with out a goal scored or soccer dream
thought this had potential to be better, the goal scored/soccer dream made it light for me, cool concept tho
i makes hits fam - ain’t seeing me break, got goons in each state
ill have Arie ran up on by an Entourage that’s not carrying pens or a DVD case
again, thought the pens/DVD case made the punch miss, the concept was legit

So it seems like Grizz has done this before and is just shaking off some rust here. A few of his concepts were dope, I just thought the way he crafted his punches didn't sting enough.

Not sure who his alias was, but I'm sure he'll be a threat in the upcoming weeks.

Fuck that other guy for not showing tho... Props to Grizz, cool read.

For Battling · 05-27-2018, 11:41 AM

who r u? it’s my first wk back so a dub they gotta hand me
if u show it’s pointless dawg- like the new netflix series based on the Obama family
nah this is a “pull out of the air” type of concept, gotta have something else
ya wifey, a slut we poundin her throat he cool w/ it - pal is a joke
it don’t matter if you vision a dub - you’ll still need an infinity stone to change reality of votes
the first line had nothing to do with the closer, maybe if you had went a different route with the infinity stone angle?
i’m quick to fire the weapon, he’ll need a dr visit for tryin my wesson
if we ever beefed Nc’ll hear a quick clap, that has nothing to do with Hush’s viral infection
alright cool flip, this is more like it
why r u stress in, give a good battle inspire the veteran- or a fist rock ya team
an i have a few kicks united w/ this manchest with out a goal scored or soccer dream
noooo. If you’re gonna use a particular concept you can’t butcher the word and expect it to work lol
i makes hits fam - ain’t seeing me break, got goons in each state
ill have Arie ran up on by an Entourage that’s not carrying pens or a DVD case
had potential but wasn’t good

Well you won’t reveal who you are but going by this verse it doesn’t really mad, you’ve definitely got some brushing up to do. The only line I liked was the hush line and even that was a flip that’s been pretty played already. You have the potential just read some battles bro.

Cred · 05-27-2018, 08:25 PM

Hush’s viral infection was nice, and that manchest/soccer dreams was dope.

Cool verse fam.

05-21-2018, 12:42 PM	#1
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,482 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972892	WK3: Ahriman 0-0 vs. Grizz 0-0 - Grizz WINS! Rules Due Dates: Verses are due FRIDAY MAY 25th and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE @Ahriman @Grizz

05-22-2018, 01:43 AM	#4
Grizz Member Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 62 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 2626068	who r u? it’s my first wk back so a dub they gotta hand me if u show it’s pointless dawg- like the new netflix series based on the Obama family ya wifey, a slut we poundin her throat he cool w/ it - pal is a joke it don’t matter if you vision a dub - you’ll still need an infinity stone to change reality of votes i’m quick to fire the weapon, he’ll need a dr visit for tryin my wesson if we ever beefed Nc’ll hear a quick clap, that has nothing to do with Hush’s viral infection why r u stressin, give a good battle inspire the veteran- or a fist rock ya team an i have a few kicks united w/ this manchest with out a goal scored or soccer dream i makes hits fam - ain’t seeing me break, got goons in each state ill have Arie ran up on by an Entourage that’s not carrying pens or a DVD case Last edited by Grizz; 05-22-2018 at 01:02 PM.

05-21-2018, 03:05 PM	#2
Grizz Member Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 62 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 2626068	10, in

05-21-2018, 05:18 PM	#3
Ahriman Member Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 98 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 3608466	Check

05-26-2018, 12:36 AM	#5
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,482 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972892	@Ahriman requested a extension via PM

05-27-2018, 06:48 AM	#6
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,482 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972892	@Ahriman is a no show, Grizz wins! Lets give him some good feedback, thanks

05-27-2018, 10:40 AM	#7
Twodrop Unknown Join Date: Mar 2018 Posts: 673 Battle Record: 2-2 Rep Power: 0	who r u? it’s my first wk back so a dub they gotta hand me if u show it’s pointless dawg- like the new netflix series based on the Obama family naw.. ya wifey, a slut we poundin her throat he cool w/ it - pal is a joke it don’t matter if you vision a dub - you’ll still need an infinity stone to change reality of votes see what you did, not feeling it i’m quick to fire the weapon, he’ll need a dr visit for tryin my wesson if we ever beefed Nc’ll hear a quick clap, that has nothing to do with Hush’s viral infection seen a couple Hush lines this week, this was one of the weaker ones, ok tho why r u stressin, give a good battle inspire the veteran- or a fist rock ya team an i have a few kicks united w/ this manchest with out a goal scored or soccer dream thought this had potential to be better, the goal scored/soccer dream made it light for me, cool concept tho i makes hits fam - ain’t seeing me break, got goons in each state ill have Arie ran up on by an Entourage that’s not carrying pens or a DVD case again, thought the pens/DVD case made the punch miss, the concept was legit So it seems like Grizz has done this before and is just shaking off some rust here. A few of his concepts were dope, I just thought the way he crafted his punches didn't sting enough. Not sure who his alias was, but I'm sure he'll be a threat in the upcoming weeks. Fuck that other guy for not showing tho... Props to Grizz, cool read.

05-27-2018, 11:41 AM	#8
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633913	who r u? it’s my first wk back so a dub they gotta hand me if u show it’s pointless dawg- like the new netflix series based on the Obama family nah this is a “pull out of the air” type of concept, gotta have something else ya wifey, a slut we poundin her throat he cool w/ it - pal is a joke it don’t matter if you vision a dub - you’ll still need an infinity stone to change reality of votes the first line had nothing to do with the closer, maybe if you had went a different route with the infinity stone angle? i’m quick to fire the weapon, he’ll need a dr visit for tryin my wesson if we ever beefed Nc’ll hear a quick clap, that has nothing to do with Hush’s viral infection alright cool flip, this is more like it why r u stress in, give a good battle inspire the veteran- or a fist rock ya team an i have a few kicks united w/ this manchest with out a goal scored or soccer dream noooo. If you’re gonna use a particular concept you can’t butcher the word and expect it to work lol i makes hits fam - ain’t seeing me break, got goons in each state ill have Arie ran up on by an Entourage that’s not carrying pens or a DVD case had potential but wasn’t good Well you won’t reveal who you are but going by this verse it doesn’t really mad, you’ve definitely got some brushing up to do. The only line I liked was the hush line and even that was a flip that’s been pretty played already. You have the potential just read some battles bro.

05-27-2018, 08:25 PM	#9
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Hush’s viral infection was nice, and that manchest/soccer dreams was dope. Cool verse fam.