Week 2: R!canTheoryz (0-1) vs. Mac (0-1) - MAC WINS

[Zuo]

Rules

You know the drill.

Due Dates:
Verses this week are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ



@R!canTheoryz @Mac

[R!canTheoryz]

Check. Im going Min. & Your Fkn Dead Kid!

[Mac]

I need an ext I'm still learning puerto rican

[R!canTheoryz]

Originally Posted by Mac

I need an ext I'm still learning puerto rican

I’m in Puerto Rico Getting my dick sucked by Your grandmother.

[Mac]

Yoooo Faggot.. The Mac is tooting

Fuck you DICK FACE I’m starting strong but don’t expect anything new
don’t think the Dynamicz will change bro ur gettin whopped this week too
Bitch u never touched a woman. U kissed ur mother & That’s the only thing
Makes sense i’m one more in your hit list. We all like Rick pls stop texting
Old School boy thats gettin Schooled 2night. I’m the biggest of ur worries
Cuz I spit out facts that blows off your mind.. That’s how I debunk Theories
Look me in the eyes so you can see the fire as I'm cutting ya with the knife
Light up the top of your head like u sparked the most fucking brilliant idea of ur life

Bitch


@Zuo give him the time he needs to post

[R!canTheoryz]

My Hands Something Bad, but I rather Dump N Blast,
You’re a ‘rookie in boxing training’ now imma use yur face as a Punchin Bag.
Ur texting short scrap. you lost to saint so bad I thought your Shoulder cracked,
& have you Bree’s into retirement quicker than that New Orleans Quarterback.
Your Heavy beat - Burner w. Red dot will seriously Melt this geek,
vs you it’s always ‘midget, Mac’ & you stay coming up shorter than HIM every week.
You the worst BUM having beef made me always wanna burst some,
one Phone call & I’ll Have ‘Mac going ina Bag’ faster than purchasing my FIRST gun.

Pussy.

[Wordz AhGod]

Intro was cool. Debunk theory was also a cool concept but the writing around it was bad. I feel like you put down the rough draft and never look back at it for another pass. Might help to do so and reread it to yourself to think how you could word it differently to make it sting more.

Vs

Mac in a bag was ok, nothing really stood out as amazing but it was consistent. I feel like a lot of your concepts were worded in an obvious way that would probably be better for live battles but not so great for text.

Reluctantly going with Mac on this one as more of a toss up. I felt he had better concepts but just needs to work on wording them better. It was really close to me tho and hard to pick.

[Zuo]

Fuck you DICK FACE I’m starting strong but don’t expect anything new
don’t think the Dynamicz will change bro ur gettin whopped this week too
this is nice lol
Bitch u never touched a woman. U kissed ur mother & That’s the only thing
Makes sense i’m one more in your hit list. We all like Rick pls stop texting
nah not this
Old School boy thats gettin Schooled 2night. I’m the biggest of ur worries
Cuz I spit out facts that blows off your mind.. That’s how I debunk Theories
hmm this is a good concept and had mad potential to be dope, but the wording/execution took away from it. It’s an OK bar as is
Look me in the eyes so you can see the fire as I'm cutting ya with the knife
Light up the top of your head like u sparked the most fucking brilliant idea of ur life
again, different execution would have made this better but I still like it. Pretty good bar

Vs


My Hands Something Bad, but I rather Dump N Blast,
You’re a ‘rookie in boxing training’ now imma use yur face as a Punchin Bag.
nah I’m not feelin it
Ur texting short scrap. you lost to saint so bad I thought your Shoulder cracked,
& have you Bree’s into retirement quicker than that New Orleans Quarterback.
this is OK
Your Heavy beat - Burner w. Red dot will seriously Melt this geek,
vs you it’s always ‘midget, Mac’ & you stay coming up shorter than HIM every week.
that’s an oooold concept but a decent flip at best
You the worst BUM having beef made me always wanna burst some,
one Phone call & I’ll Have ‘Mac going ina Bag’ faster than purchasing my FIRST gun.
decent again


Both guys only had 1 clear miss in my opinion. Mac had 2 good bars and an OK one, Rican had a lot of decent lines and 1 ok one, but no heavy hitters. Pretty good battle here but I have Mac edging it with harder hits.


Vote Mac

[Pharaohs Army]

mac
again w/ the really great opener
appears to be self-aware that the following punch is a loosely-rhymed/worded key after the polished Open
Said jest & awareness will get him a LOT of props from MY spamass who allegedly doesn't care about W/L but cries himself to sleep every night.
moving along Mac, I'm not saying it's unworkable the #3rd&4th lines
just maybe a Capped first letter even BETTER maybe a full capped WORD of emphasis-Help for your lame rappers around here....like "the last word on setup "Thing" perhaps a capital T?...
OR..maybe AND even a full cap of the punch-word of ALL Or PLS
i wouldn't be asking 4 capz like a Noob if the friggin rhyme wasn't so lazy and the setup wasn't so played and lame.
BUT OPENER WAS FIRE
rest of the verse?
well come on Mac #5&6 might be even worse?
Unless ur an aussie or brit or something dude: whether that end-ryme is a multi (bad) or a single syllable on the end (even friggin worse)...it would APPEAR to me a semi-trolly stretch rhyme for the amusement of readers or something.
i do that shit sometimes but this is a competition so....

YEAH MAYBE IT's style preference which as a voter I really try to nip in the bud BUT IT'S JUST SO HARD.....i.e. I thought Rican got this, but even w/ mac's middle wackness it's still kinda close cuz, Rican did not "break out his gems here"....
Certainly enjoyable capped rhymes with some sportsplays and writer-brags
Jesus christ more bias to explain this vote.

in my northeastern american, Rican's slant-rhyme of Dump N Blast/ Punchin' Bag? sure it's stretchy, but Totally workable and phonetic unlike the 5&6 lines I kinda digged Mac on...

well, back to mac, i actually like the closer here and think it's almost as strong as the fine opening, despite the relatively simple flip...it hits hard enoug for me to call your open&close pretty damn strong But I'm just lost in those 4 middle lines bro where ur either fuckin' around or mad foreign accent

rican, mustv seen my discussion-goad and crafted his verse with me on his mind 100% of the time, like blue

THATS A JOKE MOST OF THIS VOTE IS REAL FEED

Mac has the potential to smoke his opponents if he lifted a finger and did better in the middles.

i mean if i'm being honest

[Zuo]

NEEDS VOTES!

@Diablo @Saint @Aero @Barcotic @Wordz AhGod @Defiant @Sinacog @Cereal @Fracture @White LGI @Mac @R!canTheoryz @Unfukwitable @Master Rock @Pepino @MV The Demon @Kill Spree @Cred @DynamiCz @Blue Bayou

[Ryno]

Dynamicz
Debunk theories (not super original, light)
Brilliant idea

Vs

Brees into retirement
Mac goin into a bag (50/50…alil light/low hanging fruit)

V. Mac w/ the slight edge

[Sinacog]

This is a pretty good battle here, MAC had a lot of good lines -- I like the 'theories' punchline from him..

HOW EVER - theoryz was just too strong here with his opener got to give it to him

/THEORYZ

[DynamiCz]

Fuck you DICK FACE I’m starting strong but don’t expect anything new
don’t think the Dynamicz will change bro ur gettin whopped this week too

Cool flip using my name and last week battle! I liked this one

Bitch u never touched a woman. U kissed ur mother & That’s the only thing
Makes sense i’m one more in your hit list. We all like Rick pls stop texting

Wasnt feeling this one to much, rhyme pattern felt off

Old School boy thats gettin Schooled 2night. I’m the biggest of ur worries
Cuz I spit out facts that blows off your mind.. That’s how I debunk Theories

This was ok, wording could have been better

Look me in the eyes so you can see the fire as I'm cutting ya with the knife
Light up the top of your head like u sparked the most fucking brilliant idea of ur life

Concept was dope, execution on the punch could have also been worded here better, but overall nice way to finish.


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My Hands Something Bad, but I rather Dump N Blast,
You’re a ‘rookie in boxing training’ now imma use yur face as a Punchin Bag.

Didn't really like this one, maybe its the wording here.

Ur texting short scrap. you lost to saint so bad I thought your Shoulder cracked,
& have you Bree’s into retirement quicker than that New Orleans Quarterback.

This was coo here, not to strong

Your Heavy beat - Burner w. Red dot will seriously Melt this geek,
vs you it’s always ‘midget, Mac’ & you stay coming up shorter than HIM every week.

This is fire

You the worst BUM having beef made me always wanna burst some,
one Phone call & I’ll Have ‘Mac going ina Bag’ faster than purchasing my FIRST gun.

So many ways you could have went with this one, idk im on the fence about this one honestly. Going in a bag faster works with so many concepts, but idk i guess its coo





Overall, this was a cool battle on both ends, I got MAC edging by a tiny margin. I think Rican verse last week was better so im not sure if he put any tough effort into his verse this week, but it was still cool. I think Mac had the more strength of power on his punches in this one.

Vote - MAC

[Zuo]

Mac Wins 4-2