02-25-2019, 02:43 PM | #1 |
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Cyrax vs Prozac PROZAC WINS
SOL Season 1 @Cyrax @Prozac
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02-26-2019, 04:19 AM | #3 |
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Fuggit I'll post anyway.
Killed many like you that stretch out the bars, watch this faggot reach farther I've only seen Cy clones doin' damage on a Japanese Harbor Claim ya rap's Well Done, too? Getcha block killed for bein' awful rhymers I'll put a hit out on Rax's City like a song from Tyga Dude's the type to drug a girl's drink... Then get pushed to the floor Bitches ain't care for Cy's Mick Shots, and that's got 'em shook to his core I get ya girl's head for free, you gotta pay for the brains like she the best tutor And that fact's really known to Torture Rax like Lex Luger Real shit: him claimin' he's mackin' some bitches is actually fiction If he claims a woman spies Rax? They best get they ass back in the kitchen Boy'll pay at the pump once I drop this wack fuck Y'all bout to see Cy finna' tank since it's clear y'all got 'em gassed up GL. |
02-28-2019, 08:54 PM | #4 |
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u haven't fucked a bitch in a decade..or likely 20..yu ain't piping many
got Prohibition about not getting ass.. niggas pussy rates been drier than the 1920's ur 2 faced..i got 6 in the clip n 1 in the cham.. yur goin to fucking heaven i can see in yur Snake Eyes ..if yu roll the dice wit me yu'll catch a lucky 7 do a drive by on yah parents.. then shots murking yah wife i'll get real Lowpro & spray at ya kids till it thins out yur whole circle of life im splittin this orphan... fist r viscous & scourching my precision historic idgaf where yu Gopro after hooks trash yur eye lens & yur vision's distorted i trash ops & blast hawks but everyone on earth wanna leave this fag drop yu the biggest bitch on this Surface Pro & 1 jab'll fold u worst than a laptop ur girl rides me cause she hates this fuck n lets me slay the butt Prolactin in the biggest area n nigga couldnt release anything to stimulate the slut Last edited by Cyrax; 02-28-2019 at 08:58 PM. |
02-28-2019, 11:39 PM | #5 |
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Killed many like you that stretch out the bars, watch this faggot reach farther
I've only seen Cy clones doin' damage on a Japanese Harbor Cool np. Feel like it could've been turned into a stronger punch with a different flip but not bad Claim ya rap's Well Done, too? Getcha block killed for bein' awful rhymers I'll put a hit out on Rax's City like a song from Tyga Should just be Rax city to get the wordplay right. Not bad. Dude's the type to drug a girl's drink... Then get pushed to the floor Bitches ain't care for Cy's Mick Shots, and that's got 'em shook to his core Cool. People will call it forced because of where the emphasis is but I don't mind it I get ya girl's head for free, you gotta pay for the brains like she the best tutor And that fact's really known to Torture Rax like Lex Luger Not bad. Wp's pretty simple and the punch is just OK, so it didn't have a lot of impact Real shit: him claimin' he's mackin' some bitches is actually fiction If he claims a woman spies Rax? They best get they ass back in the kitchen Nah. Forced phonetically and also because "a woman doesn't spy him" is a weird way to say he doesn't mack bitches. Boy'll pay at the pump once I drop this wack fuck Y'all bout to see Cy finna' tank since it's clear y'all got 'em gassed up Nice. Could've been a little smoother worded I think but it's perfectly adequate to get the gameplay and punch across, which were both quite good. My favourite bar from you. u haven't fucked a bitch in a decade..or likely 20..yu ain't piping many got Prohibition about not getting ass.. niggas pussy rates been drier than the 1920's Not bad. A bit simple. ur 2 faced..i got 6 in the clip n 1 in the cham.. yur goin to fucking heaven i can see in yur Snake Eyes ..if yu roll the dice wit me yu'll catch a lucky 7 OK, not bad do a drive by on yah parents.. then shots murking yah wife i'll get real Lowpro & spray at ya kids till it thins out yur whole circle of life This had more potential than it delivered. The wording wasn't clean IMO im splittin this orphan... fist r viscous & scourching my precision historic idgaf where yu Gopro after hooks trash yur eye lens & yur vision's distorted Cool. Swaggy. Check your spelling though. 'Viscous' fists is a funny image i trash ops & blast hawks but everyone on earth wanna leave this fag drop yu the biggest bitch on this Surface Pro & 1 jab'll fold u worst than a laptop Pretty good. Like that you worked in the 'everyone on earth' connection in the set up. ur girl rides me cause she hates this fuck n lets me slay the butt Prolactin in the biggest area n nigga couldnt release anything to stimulate the slut Cool nameplay idea. The flip was okayyyy. Pretty close on concepts. I'm gonna go with Pro for slightly better wording and having the lotb (Cy finna tank). Could go either way. Thanks for showing fellas, keep writing. V/ Pro
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03-02-2019, 04:04 PM | #6 |
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Prozac: This was a pretty nice drop. i was really digging the nameplays here.
Cyclones, rax city, and torture rax were your best quotes imo. No real lows here. Good drop. Cyrax: You had some good moments here. Opener, Gopro, & surface pro were pretty cool. As a whole though some of your ideas could have been worded better in spots. Like the low pro & closer for example. Still...good read though. overall: Prozac wins. Better wording and better lows out of the two. |
03-03-2019, 06:18 AM | #7 |
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Prozac -
Dope bars here. You write punchlines like a real rhymer that knows what he's doing. Props on this verse. Cyrax - Decent verse here, could be better in ways. You could come more correct, this was dope though. V/ Prozac ...... |
03-03-2019, 12:49 PM | #8 |
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Preciate the props, folks.
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03-04-2019, 07:35 AM | #9 |
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Killed many like you that stretch out the bars, watch this faggot reach farther
I've only seen Cy clones doin' damage on a Japanese Harbor Claim ya rap's Well Done, too? Getcha block killed for bein' awful rhymers I'll put a hit out on Rax's City like a song from Tyga Dude's the type to drug a girl's drink... Then get pushed to the floor Boy'll pay at the pump once I drop this wack fuck Y'all bout to see Cy finna' tank since it's clear y'all got 'em gassed up Too many name flips. You switched up which part of the name you played with, but still, could've used a generic bar somewhere ur 2 faced..i got 6 in the clip n 1 in the cham.. yur goin to fucking heaven i can see in yur Snake Eyes ..if yu roll the dice wit me yu'll catch a lucky 7 im splittin this orphan... fist r viscous & scourching my precision historic idgaf where yu Gopro after hooks trash yur eye lens & yur vision's distorted i trash ops & blast hawks but everyone on earth wanna leave this fag drop yu the biggest bitch on this Surface Pro & 1 jab'll fold u worst than a laptop Man this could go either way but after 4 straight 'pro' flips I just wasn't feeling all of em. Prozac had some slightly stronger wp too and Cy finna tank was my lotb Prozac |
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